AnShi SS- TOIL (Epilogue (Part-2.1)-IshKara, Pg.26) - Page 5

Seriously...you are a fabulous writer.

Your characters have a straight-fold individualism in them that I somehow seem to prefer yours to the show.

The way you walk your characters on the thin line between reality and imagination is brilliant. I can see the base from the show and yet cannot deny their actions in your story as they seem to diverge and again converge in the same identity and behavioural phase.

Shivaay is an interesting character but it is your portrayal of Shivaay that I am more closer too. I find Shivaay of the show just good and Anika just good too. But your Shivaay is somebody I am actually starting to have a soft spot for.

You actually made me adore Shivaay.

I loved it. I really have no other words to express how much I enjoyed reading it

-Niki

PS: Thanks for the PM. Another thing, Shivaay's LIAR rant and the way he goaded reminded me of *guess who*...Severus Snape! You are a really amazing writer.

Anju, I hope you realise that you have the ability to leave your readers speechless. This was beyond good! The way you have taken the characters of Shivaay and Anika and given them your own personal touch gives them an added zing. I love the Shivaay and Anika of the show and feel that the characters have a lot of potential, but at the same time, I also have a strong feeling that the potential is going to remain unexplored and the characters may not endear themselves to the audience as much as they have the ability to. But reading your fic makes me sigh in contentment. The conversation was so Shivaay Singh Oberoi! The way he got her to let go of the walls, that she held around her feelings veiling them from his perceptive gaze, and reveal the truth before him, at least in her eyes was amazing. At the same time, the emotional turmoil that goes on in Shivaay's mind, somewhere, makes your heart go out to him.

Their conversation also reminded me of a similar conversation between Jhanvi and Shivaay from the last chapter. Seems like the Oberois have a singular trait of tricking people into accepting the truth of their feelings. 😉 From 'Liar' to 'Say it', Shivaay was relentless.

Coming to Anika, she is a unique piece, there is none like her! 😆 Zulfiqar?! 🤣 Only she could have a name, even for her hair. But I really felt for her when she realised that for all the illusions of hatred that she had tried to weave around her true feelings, he had seen through it all. I am restlessly waiting to read the next part of the conversation, and I am hoping that since you have split this chapter into two parts, you already have the next part ready and will not keep us waiting too long!

Kudos!

Love this story.. Update it soon.

Love

Kashmi

Where can I order my own Shivaay?You managed to get me attracted to a fictional character after ages. I am liking your Shivaay immensely.

Did anyone ever tell you that you are hilarious?Honey,you are.

This is the exact kind of writing I love.

I don't know what your definition of passionate is but mine fits with this.

I hate the cliffhanger.

I have loads more to say and I will be back.

Take care.

I can't read it in my phone...the font goes on and on

~Maha~

thanx for the pm though

I am surprised, how do you manage to leave me craving for more?

No one has ever been able to put me in that situation so bad!

Someone finally gets the concept of Shivaay and Anika's love-hate relationship, if you can call it that. And I am so glad that it was you! This was more meaningful than any of the cliche bedroom scenes where magic plays the protagonist! Lol!

Before this, I was addicted to Shivaay Singh Oberoi!

You have turned me into a love-struck, obsessed Red for Shivaay Singh Oberoi!

Do pray that I don't fantasize about him all my life, now, would you?

And update very, very quickly!

XOXO

~Red