AnShi SS- TOIL (Epilogue (Part-2.1)-IshKara, Pg.26) - Page 7

Face Rubbing🤣

wow
awesome upt
feeling sad for anshi...dont know why??
rudra is the best @ serious times
bonding btw ObBros are so beautiful
seeing them together always makes me smile
waiting for nxt part
cont soon

Wow now i just cant wait for the next part. It was wondeful. Laddoo was so cute. Now the little brother will help his big bro in getting his lady love.
Update soon.

Originally posted by: coolove

That was another lovely chapter
I loved the camaraderie between Om and rudra
It's great to watch
Keep writing 😊

Thank you for reading and taking the time to review. 😃 I am glad that you enjoyed reading it. I am a great fan of the ObBros and wanted to capture their camaraderie as realistically as possible. I am not very good at humour which is not of the sarcastic variety, but the characters of the show are food for my fertile imagination.

Thanks once again. Do stay tuned. 😛

Originally posted by: -Amri-

Just loved how you integrated their love story with the camaraderie between the Bros.

Thank you. I am happy that you liked it.😊 Do keep reading and reviewing.

Originally posted by: Messi2

unres ...well I think I'll get tired of praising u ...the only author I absolutely adore is nimmi I used to literally stalk the forum just for her fiction to be updated and now am doing dat cause of dis fiction...

My goofball rudra he's worried for his abs and yet he still wants to eat those pastries man his whole monologue was so beautiful I was imagining leenesh expressions here ...

someone with a devilish mind and overgrown hair Hayee my O and dat cherry was also in O shape bechara babyyy...oh teriii rudra dancing ...junglee hein yeah puraaa

Yeah le romantic couple ko disturb karna chahtha hein I can so see dis happening in d show ...ROFLMAO isko off button bhi nay pata and then enters O...anshi breaks apart ...man these r scenes I wanna see on anshi he getting close out of love she will think its all a trap even though liking him ...

OK next comes d part where I was rolling and rofling man just read dis part so many times...my baby wanna demonstrate ( mere pe karo na) O is boggled confused Hayee if dis happens na am gonna die dat day ...

Then OBbros scene baby wants to eliminate tia yaa go on love ...he's upset his brothers don't tell him anything but hes not a kid now and will protect them dat was sooo beautiful ...shivaay cuddling with my baby was chooo cute


u still didn't tell ur name... warned u big unres will come

Hello Jessi dear! My name's Anju.😊

Now can I hug you for that long, detailed review? 🤗 I mean, you've expressed your opinion about specific scenes from each chapter and that serves as inspiration to write better and more. These words of encouragement let me know what the reader liked and makes the whole writing experience worthwhile. 😳

Rudra, as I said, is my favourite Oberoi. He's also the most difficult one to portray on paper because he is an adorable bundle of naivete, idiocy, love and wisdom in equal measure. Even though he appears immature, I think his character has a lot more unexplored layers and I have only just skimmed the surface. Shivaay and Annika define intense for me. Though the show is progressing along cliche plotlines, I have always enjoyed the tussle and angst of bittersweet love stories. This one will be like that. Love, between AnShi in this SS, will be a struggle, interspersed with sweet and passionate moments.

I get the feeling that even though Rudra loves Shivaay, Om is a closer confidant because they are always seen discussing matters of both significance and triviality with each other. In fact, in my POV, Omkara is the steady rock that both his brothers can lean on and he in turn needs their support when something untoward happens, a beautiful symbiosis, the essence of which I've tried to bring in.

More than the various romantic pairings in the show, I love the Bromance and am partial to the ObBros scenes. Maybe you'll see that bias in my chapters too.

Anyway, thank you once again for those wonderful words of appreciation. keep the praises coming baby! 😎 I feel truly humbled. Stay tuned. The next chapter may be updated a bit later as I have exams coming up.

Lots of hugs
Anju!

Originally posted by: Travelocity

beyond amazing! please continue soon

Will do.😉 thank you for reading and also that wonderful compliment. 😳

Originally posted by: pikychu

just read all the parts of this story love it you are a amazing writer

Hope you like the future chapters just as much. Thank you for reading and I am glad that you liked it. 😃

Originally posted by: jarir2010

read all the part in one go.what i'll say,it was a emotional rollercoster for me.u r very beautiful with ur words,ur way of telling a story,emotions...u r fav writer.pls update soon. 👏

I think I like portraying emotional connect between the characters rather than events.😛 If you look at the chapters I have updated till now, the progress of the story has been secondary, since I have tried to highlight the personalities of individual characters and their reactions to various situations they encounter. 🤓

I feel overwhelmed by your kind words. Thank you for taking the time to read this in one go and letting me know your thoughts.🤗

Regards
Anju

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Face Rubbing🤣

Oh God, my stomach is paining!

Yahoo!

🤣 🤣 🤣

You rock...seriously you do.

this is the best chapter of yours till date. Humour is a hard thing to pen down and you did it splendidly.

Rudra and his Junglee dance😆...and Om is a wolf in Sheep's clothing😆

And the way he reacts at Shivaay-Anika...those poor souls are having a passionate moment and Rudra's inner commentary made me guffaw at that.

Seriously, your portrayal of Rudra was beyond brilliant today.

The chapter transcended from outright humour to a strange sence of melancholic content, I loved it all the way.

The way Rudra shows his little glimpse of maturity...I cannot get over these OhBros!

Thanks for writing this and thanks for the PM too!

Cheers!

Niki

Niki! 😊

Thank god I've not exhausted my quota of ten posts for the day and can reply to your review.

At the outset, let me just thank you for taking the time to review each and every part of this story. I've seen your detailed reviews right from day one and it gives me immense joy to know that you've liked my work. Just so you know, I am always on the lookout for your opinion after each chapter. So you can't stop letting me know your thoughts now. I am one desperate author in that regard. 😛

Now, Rudra. Where do I even start? 😕 The reason I split the chapter into two parts is because I wanted to flesh out his presence in the story. He is one tricky character to write, especially for a pretty serious author like me. 🤔 I have honed my humour-writing skills on the pedestal of sarcasm and it is only now that I have changed bases and written comedy without snide undertones throughout the narrative. 🤓 It was hard, trust me. Rudra's head is a mess with all those lighting fast thoughts flashing by. But I feel his character has a lot more potential and we haven't seen the half of it.

What makes me heave a sigh of relief is your ROFL emoticon. So, I am not too off the mark and I am glad you laughed at Ruddy boy's antics. Do take something for the stomach ache, though. 😉

I had a lot of expectations from Shivaay and Annika and the show hasn't really picked up steam to gauge their romantic potential in its entirety. Even though the 'arrogant, rich boy meets poor girl with oodles of self-respect' trope has been done and overdone on TV, I still expect something different from AnShi. If the CVs leave no scope for their development, I'll do my bit through my fics.

Again thank you so much for reading and reviewing. The next chapter may take a while in coming as I am about to be buried under truckloads of exam pressure. Do stay tuned, though.

Regards
Anju