Story... the end - Page 6

Host. read this story, if you like this kind of ending series.

hello sara,
👏 u came up with brilliant stuff excellent story dear.keep writing.i loved d end, vipu blessed with a second baby.
ur story is far more interesting than what was shown in the original serial.
keep entertaining us like this.
our forum is lucky to have a member like u.

Originally posted by: simple2joy

hello sara,
👏 u came up with brilliant stuff excellent story dear.keep writing.i loved d end, vipu blessed with a second baby.
ur story is far more interesting than what was shown in the original serial.
keep entertaining us like this.
our forum is lucky to have a member like u.

thank you my dear. I'm really proud of you all the girls. and because I want to be in this way repay all of you. thank you, you're here with you. and as for the price and I prefer this end the series

Originally posted by: mehraan

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Meh ... waiting for your comments, and by the way care whether you read the story Dudha

Originally posted by: pearl100

Hello Zady 🤗

Wow 👏 you are such a brilliant writer dear, First of all congratulations on your very first fan fiction story ⭐️ you have done a great job ⭐️⭐️...The story is in such a smooth flow I was totally engrossed while reading, read it till page 3 will be back with the rest after reading.

Thank you so so much for dedicating it to me dear 😃😃 your a total sweetheart, 😆 I'm coming here after you finished writing the story... alright coming to the story, I really loved the way you wrote the incidents in a beautiful manner, you named Raj's wife sara 😆 I'm glad you din't change Dhani's name to sara 😆 just kidding...I was wondering the whole time why is Raja here in the chapter later realized it must be Raj 😆...

Thank you zady for making Parshiya a married man else he would be a bachelor with Dhani in his heart forever 😆 like in the show...I'm very impressed with your writing skills dear. Why have you hidden this all this while ?? You should have started writing way long before itself, you girls are coming out with your hidden talents one by one 😆 Now next is Mag n sudha's turn to surprise us ...I absolutely enjoyed reading your story till page 3 ...This is getting so much interesting can't wait to read what is going to happen next.

Such an irony I happened to watch a show which is related to bone marrow transplantation recently 😆 now I will go n watch those videos also n learn how is it actually done...Cya again after reading few more parts.

my dear friend, I'm glad you liked this part of what you read. I apologize if I really like but I think it can be read. Raj and Raja's fine by me, but now that you mention it, I realized that I made a mistake in the name. I'm glad you realize that it is, I'm waiting to read to the end and tell me in the end how you like it. and then you cross the Dudha, Sara

Yes Zady I'll take some time to read n come back to reply, haven't read a story since past one n a half months plus lost the habit of reading daily. No prblm with the name the story is getting interesting which matters...y cancer 😆 you watch tooo many asian drama's ...there brain cancer is famous in their shows.

Originally posted by: pearl100

Yes Zady I'll take some time to read n come back to reply, haven't read a story since past one n a half months plus lost the habit of reading daily. No prblm with the name the story is getting interesting which matters...y cancer 😆 you watch tooo many asian drama's ...there brain cancer is famous in their shows.

This is a combination of Turkish / Indian series. hahahaha. I like to write or do not have time for dialogue. More than enjoy in the description of the dialogue.