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I have tried twice lekin kuch bohot wild thoughts la nahin pa rahi hoon.. Running out of ideas everytime.. Kiss tak toh theek hai.. Uske baas kya likhu kaise likhu samajh nahin aaving😆

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

yaa yaa.. please an 18+ story by you dazz.. I want a couple of such stories for Vidha..

The most romantic couple of TV and we dont have one single mature story on them. not fair nah??😛

aur mehru di.. aap muskurana band karo.. apko pehele likhna hai mature OS.. pata nahin kitne mahino pehele promise kiya tha.. ab kab likhogi..? You had promised that you will let me visualise Vidha CON scene properly..😆 Waada yaad hai nah? nahin hai toh mein time to time yaad dilati rahungi😆😆

Its better you start watching the post marriage episodes again.. aap ke andar ka woh thirsty sherni abhi jag uthegi.. and we will be blessed by an OS😆

Tune abhi abhi 18+ hui aur tujhe wo padhna hain? Idhar ahhh balika tera kan pakadke padhne k liye baitha rahi,
Tera na exam chalraha? Ye likhti to papers me? Tere kharush professor ko complaint lagwa dungi.

Originally posted by: simple2joy

Tune abhi abhi 18+ hui aur tujhe wo padhna hain? Idhar ahhh balika tera kan pakadke padhne k liye baitha rahi,
Tera na exam chalraha? Ye likhti to papers me? Tere kharush professor ko complaint lagwa dungi.

arey nahin nahin kan maat pakdo.. kan kyun pakdogi.. ? mein pichle saal hi 18+ ho gayi thi.. is saal toh mein 19+ huyi hoon nah.. aap bhool gayi?😆😆

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

arey nahin nahin kan maat pakdo.. kan kyun pakdogi.. ? mein pichle saal hi 18+ ho gayi thi.. is saal toh mein 19+ huyi hoon nah.. aap bhool gayi?😆😆

haan exams toh hai next month.. achcha thik hai abhi mein woh FFs ke baare mein nahin sochungi.. padhayi karti hoon jaake.. aap mummi ki tarah daan ton maat

lekin mein bhi haar nahin manungi.. SS ko bolti hoon ke meri help kare.. I want to write a story like that but failing miserably everytime..

kuch saalon baad likhungi.. I hope tab bhi aap meri dost bani rahogi..😳

balika sun u post ur ff and let us enjoy it.but u come to annotate after years. ikrs members r really kind and generous they support efforts. they watch my tasha vm, so why wont they read ur ff?

Originally posted by: simple2joy

balika sun u post ur ff and let us enjoy it.but u come to annotate after years. ikrs members r really kind and generous they support efforts. they watch my tasha vm, so why wont they read ur ff?

achcha thik hai.. almost complete ho gaya hai.. soch rahi thi ke delete kar doon.. but my hours of hard work chalo mein post kar dungi aj..😳

baat sun lardki... your "lame excuse for wrting ",as you put it.. is looming up to be a marathon Dazz... I should know ,I deal with sixth form writings.. So, many congratulations for attempting this SS. The poetic beginning is indeed profound,and in dual language too.. It more or less sets the scene for emotive content yet to follow.Loved the way you panned into the back drop , the conspiring and plotting carried out to divide Viplav from his expectant wife Dhani.You have summed up well the use of misunderstandings which cvs use to spin the much loved seperation track formula. You have poigantly expressed both Viplav and Dhani's sentiments after the knee jerk reaction Viplav came out with, the sense of desolation Dhani is weighed down by and the "didnt see it coming.. wife walking out on him by Viplav!
great cliff hanger to end chapter 1 with.. yes please Dazz do carry on with the tale of Ishq..will surely read it..
regards hammie.

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

I have tried twice lekin kuch bohot wild thoughts la nahin pa rahi hoon.. Running out of ideas everytime.. Kiss tak toh theek hai.. Uske baas kya likhu kaise likhu samajh nahin aaving😆

Ok now dazz will have to fulfill our demands.. Let her finish off with this SS.. Uske baad list thama dungi.. 😛

No swati is not sending me FFs.. I have warned her never to distract me like that😆😆

Your SS and my FF are resting in peace..🤣 I hope daz Will complete her story..😆

Originally posted by: simple2joy

Baarbs copied my style , warna I would have called u Dazz Dazz Dazz,
(Us balika ko to bad mein dekh lungi),
Dazz where were u all these days?u r actually good at it then why did u deprived all of us? Not fair at all.Awesome storytelling, I m loving the characters a bit more now.Hope dhani will make more sense.viplab is such a jerk ughhh.The highlight of chapter one was d beginning and d ending which blends sooo perfectly.
So u started from that very point where it started to go down, our show, our forum , fan following... 👏 Now with the help of ur writing we can give our mindset a positive shape, about how d show ended...this is absolutely brilliant concept 👏 👏 👏
I m so relieved to find NO KAMINI... 😆 makes d story better.
U r one of d person for whom I have immense respect. Always with u insha Allah.
Keep writing.
Keep entertaining.

Originally posted by: zajedno

my dear Dazzle. You confirmed what I thought and said several times. on this forum has very good writers. and you're one of them. I'm glad you got rid of and that you wrote something like this. This is perhaps the scenario that I would want to watch. just continue to write, you're very talented. I think you've done this several times reviewed and corrected before you play here, is not it?

Originally posted by: mehraan

Dazzz i luv u i luv u n i luv UUU!!!!!🤗...Gosh i cried badly then n i did it today tooo...Thanku for writing tis...Believe me i always felt u had a writer IN U...Y the hell were u hiding???😆😆😆...Now i demand an 18+from u yaar.. Pls give it to us. ... 😆😆

Im jus so excited n dancing cos im goin to get my STORY...my version as to how VIDHA will reunite...Tis is how i wanted it to be played out ..with right mix of guilt,emotions ,luv n reconcilation..Vipus redemption is im awaiting for ...I m loving how u started to write from the exact point of abandonment n the Mus n merge with ur story...This is how it has to be...U hve penned it down beautifuly with right touch of emotions n feelings...so true to their characters. I m only imagining Eisha as she had potrayed the broken n dejected dhaani in love n ur making it so fruitful sticking to the original plot...Thanks for not including the negativity...Parshiya n kamini as we had suffered enough in the show...Im so happy tat i cant xpress ...im jus visualizing their reunion...Pls update it soonnn...

Luv u dear!!😳!Ur surely racing up my heartbeat...