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Posted: 7 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: beignet
Chapter 2 was excellent...Dazz loved the way u briefed on the 5 years of Viplav's struggle, loneliness and a life edged merely on memories of his wife as well on the hardships, support towards each other, friendship grown into a family of the ladies in white👏👏👏
I couldn't but sympathize with Viplav's devastated condition despite knowing his hasty behaviour...there is no perfect man of earth yet some patience and sensibility in one's imperfection will atleast save the day...loved the way u had described Viplav's state

The journey through Dhani's pregnancy was described well...got me worried for a while as to what would happen as I was reading through...and then came an angel in the form of Vidhaan

Hmmm m...Vidhaan Tripathi...any connection with d Viplav Tripathi or...😳 just my guess

So sweet of Vidhaan and Mahi to educate the widows as well to help them...awesome thought of a boutique...kudos to u Dazz for instilling courage and independence in the characters...truly loving the track

Ohhh Vidha seems like a bag of sweetness and naughtiness...wondering about Vidha's encounter with Viplav...guess it's on the way in the next chapter😊

Thank you for your gracious feedback, Beignet! 🤗 I'm so happy to read that you liked this chapter. 😊 As much as it saddened me to inflict this pain on Viplav's character, I thought it was necessary for his growth in this story. Dhani did have a rough pregnancy because of all that she had been afflicted with in Benares and the hardships that she was made to endure in Mumbai. Vidhaan came into her life at the right moment as her guardian angel. 😳 I had longed to see the education track on the show, but it wasn't up to my expectation with Kamini plotting to separate our lovely leads. There was no purpose to Dhani's education with all of the games and politics taking place in Ayodhya Nivas. You'll get to read more about Vidha in the upcoming chapters. She was a delight on the show and I've tried my best to sustain the same charm in this story. 😉 Thank you once again for commenting, Beignet. It really means a lot! ❤️

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AvaniVrinda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#192

Dazz now that this is in first page don't mind me asking when is the next chapter coming 😳 😊

Edited by AvaniVrinda - 7 years ago

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~DaZZ|ing~

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Posted: 7 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: AvaniVrinda
Dazz now that this is in first page don't mind me asking when is the next chapter coming 😳 😊

Hopefully soon, Avani! 😆 I wish I could give you a time frame. 😳 So far, we're all enjoying your story. When are you posting your next chapter? 😉

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AvaniVrinda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Hopefully soon, Avani!😆 I wish I could give you a time frame.😳 So far, we're all enjoying your story. When are you posting your next chapter?😉

Haha sometime this week mine should be ready :)
So many things churning in my head i am confused 😆