Ab Tere Bin Jee Lenge Hum - VM on Pg 24 - Page 4

Originally posted by: simple2joy

Dazz dazz dazz ,
Awww awesomeee update dear.
U r brilliant.ur story makes sense.it really really makes sense.u kept d woman empowerment issue here, giving the life of d widows a new direction rather than killing them in a bomb blast..
I m glad viplab finally went to Boston.
I m surprised by d medical terms u used.epidural...preeclampsia...u r a knowledgeable person indeed.
So there is two more entries.two more tripatis...ye vidhan tripati to sare hero credits le li apke.the cvs forgot they once used tjis mouth.
I had grudge againsts d script writers, u r taming it with ur worderful storytelling.thanksnfor helping.

Originally posted by: mehraan

Hmmm Dazzz...brilliant yaar!!!..

Kisses to u dear.😳😳😳..Wat a brilliant story ..im jus floored the way you have bought Vidhaan into the plot...The Ss is getting better n interesting...Im happy in many regards cos U hve written the way i actually dreamt or wished ot to b...First i always wanted Vipu to complete his studies n i kept on lamenting here during the separation leap track...tat he should leave for boston n return after 5 long years...n the second thing...Dhani n Co were talented n skilled artisians..somehow i wanted them to start n excel in this forte...running their own business successfully in the show. ...N Dazz u make it come true in ur story...something which is real n authentic to the characters n the show...Thanku so much for writing my way of post leap story which i wasnt able to enjoy or relate to...!Finally the CLOSURE tat i have been craving for..😃!I jus could only imagine Esha here n noone else...Gosh u pull me back to their world n im waiting for the third part...im curious about Vidhaan n Vipu bonding as both bros r in Mumbai ...!!n dhamakka of Vidhu meeting her papa mayb at Bhais house..😛..

Jus thinking n thinking... i luv suspense...😆😆

Dazz Please update soon ...luv u!!!😳😳

Originally posted by: zajedno

my dear, you are something that reveals itself slowly but surely. I'm sure I'll make you a nice story after all. beautiful concept and a beautiful story. each cast and still images of actors. you are the future writer. When could you be closer to me so that we can together to imagine how to write stories. If you want you can look at my version of the story. Story is my post. I'm interested in and your thoughts

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Meri pyari Mehr, kisses to you too! 😳 Thank you for your encouragement and your excitement. 🤗 It compels me to update sooner for you all. 😊

I thought it only made sense to bring Vidhaan in as the missing link between Viplav and Dhani after the leap. The show needed a positive character desperately and Vidhaan seemed to be the perfect fit. No other person could bring Viplav out of his delusion about his family. Unfortunately, the creatives and the forum were never on the same page. 😳 Viplav was in dire need of his own identity separate from his relation to his grandfather. I wanted Viplav to accomplish what was promised to us in the initial days of IKRS. Similar to Viplav's career, education and self-sufficiency for the widows was a priority to me. Their scope of work had to be realistic and in line with their characters. The whole purpose of this chapter was to delve into what had happened in those five years. Now that I have that out of the way, I can focus on the interplay between the characters. 😃

Love you too, my dear friend! ❤️ ❤️

Many bits I enjoyed .. references to Mumbai way of life..Dhani, Viplav meeting , references to swollen feet during later stages of pregnancy.. can be dangerous needs to be monitored , the beginning of contractions. Quite liked the dramatic timely entrance of the stranger, who happened to be a doctor.Epidural..humm, here water birth is much sought after ,but since Dhani has underlying BP issues , labor suite is the place for her. I thought she would bear the pains , minus epidural.. short labor from time of contractions to delivery.. lucky Dhani, obstetrics, for me was the interesting bit dazz.. Jolly good, normal childbirth without major complications. Then the birth of the baby.The gap of the absent father is felt. I Liked how you have replaced vidhaan with the character of Parshiya from Ishq. Overall part 2 is speckled with positivity ,birth of a daughter for Dhani..general impetus for the widows to improve their way of life. Dazz, have to applaud your effort in coming up with this imaginative SS.. thank you regards hammie. whoops .. forgot to add do continue dazz.

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

ATBJLH: part 2

Many bits I enjoyed .. references to Mumbai way of life..Dhani, Viplav meeting , references to swollen feet during later stages of pregnancy.. can be dangerous needs to be monitored , the beginning of contractions. Quite liked the dramatic timely entrance of the stranger, who happened to be a doctor.Epidural..humm, here water birth is much sought after ,but since Dhani has underlying BP issues , labor suite is the place for her. I thought she would bear the pains , minus epidural.. short labor from time of contractions to delivery.. lucky Dhani, obstetrics, for me was the interesting bit dazz.. Jolly good, normal childbirth without major complications. Then the birth of the baby.The gap of the absent father is felt. I Liked how you have replaced vidhaan with the character of Parshiya from Ishq. Overall part 2 is speckled with positivity ,birth of a daughter for Dhani..general impetus for the widows to improve their way of life. Dazz, have to applaud your effort in coming up with this imaginative SS.. thank you regards hammie. whoops .. forgot to add do continue dazz.