SS:The kiss/chap6 upd pg37/Spoiler 53 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Dolly-heart

Loved part two Mehru.

I am sure the next one will be even easier and the words will flow out beautifully.

And hope your naughty romantic description of our lovely couple Vidha will give the CV's some idea to spice up their writing too.😉

Originally posted by: captkirk

It is certainly worth the effort you are putting and the pleasure you are giving us, ...

Originally posted by: sura123

waiting for next part😊

Loved the second part...!! Separation... i so wanted such a track..!! so that we can get a PDE (Proper display of emotion)😆, the weakest point of CVs.😆

Seems I am the only one who missed your FF..! 😲
I am poor and so sorry for late reply !! sweety !! What a title..!! 😳
You need to accept that you are good writer ! I know you can do a wonderful justice in your writing and the way you elaborate each ViDha shots makes us so tempting ..! How could we resist your FF..? Just continue, !! 😳

Interesting update..!
I am back to romantic mode , as I could imagine such scenes when cv's never justified with their previous tracks..I hope you do full justice through your updates..!

Can I read now kia?? Yaa still updating??😳

ok guys..this is the toughest update so now for me...i kno u guys r waiting for kiss🤣...but i need the feel to explore n bring out the emotions n the intensity...Still i havent done justice...i wanted to write more but cut shot through...i wanted to update long time back...but last week Vidha was sizzling kept me hooked, my kids sickness n ontop my diary got lost where i had written down...So i jus found yesterday n i felt i need to update quickly...So guys pardon me if any mistakes n i would request u to read all the chapters aggain to reconnect to this chapter3..its been late n im sorry for that!!!

Awww mehr beautifully written once again..
Don't say sorry dear .. thnk u..u take out time from ur tough schedule n updated.. I'm vry eager to kno how Viplov will redeem himself... I was not at all happy with cv's eavesdropping wala short cut...his badtameezi is annoying n I want to shake his head.. 😡 😆
I like ur Dhani alot.. she's not any body's doormat..⭐️
I'm in no hurry. .take ur sweet time...I love how ur building the tension for the Kiss..😛