SS:The kiss/chap6 upd pg37/Spoiler 53

Im solely writing for my forum friends who have requested me to write on Vidha...so just for u all

🤗mehru... loved the way you have started... i could very well imagine the scene ... merging the 10 n 17 sep epi. ab please KISS detail mein batana😆😆😆

Hi Mehru di!!! U have made a beautiful start..very beautiful..plzz kuch bohot romantic lines dal dena..and i completely trust u when it comes to vidha romance..u will never disappoint us i knw..sometime ago i had posted somewhere that it wuld have been great if u write the vidha scenes for us..yeh cvs zada kuch dikhate nhi hai except some hugs...anyway i am very excited for today's epi..and thanks for ur SS.. eagerly waiting for the next part of THE KISS

Mehraan your prelude to .. The Kiss... is great and I am sure by the time you reach

Nice dear...😉

heyyy mehru nice startup...do continue dear..im waiting😉😳

mehru..first and foremost a big congrats for starting the SS.. loved the title ..The Kiss.. very befitting you..
now I read the prologue..fantastic imagery.. and a very viplav situation, breakdown car, party , late for it.. all good.. loved your use of local dialect in dialogues , warms and gives life to me as reader.As for the spotting dhani in the temple... there was an instant judai feel to the scene.. loved it.. seemed dhani called it off.. it reminded me of todays episode mehru.. wanted dhani to call it off..Getting back to your story its well written mehru kept me engaged and left me wanting for more.. please continue.. and many thanks for starting the SS~ The Kiss
much love hammie

Nice one Mehr! loved it..! when is the next part coming up??