SS:The kiss/chap6 upd pg37/Spoiler 53 - Page 5

Wow...i just loved it...superb story...

hy mehr di thanks so much for the fourth part..i was eagerly waiting for ur kiss..oh sorry i mean Vidha's kiss..not Vidha's kiss..Vidha story The kiss😆😆

dekho ab kiss kabhi khatam nahi hoga jab tak moka melege viplav zaroor dhani ko kiss karenge kaun batahai shayad itne hot kiss bina suhaag bache hoge i think yeh yah gande cv ka plan dhani pregnant hogi separate hoga ek naya ladka entry karegi fall in love with dhani phir vipu ka jealous hoga vipu yeh ladka jaan se mardenge uske bacha apna lenge kahani khatam after 21 leap ki baat vidha kids ki story nakshari ladki ki naam hai nakchra ladka ka naam twins ek aur twins hogi pagla ladka ka naam hai pagli ladki ka naam hai🤣

Originally posted by: NusiSg

Awww mehr beautifully written once again..
Don't say sorry dear .. thnk u..u take out time from ur tough schedule n updated.. I'm vry eager to kno how Viplov will redeem himself... I was not at all happy with cv's eavesdropping wala short cut...his badtameezi is annoying n I want to shake his head.. 😡 😆
I like ur Dhani alot.. she's not any body's doormat..⭐️
I'm in no hurry. .take ur sweet time...I love how ur building the tension for the Kiss..😛

The Kiss.. chap.3
Fantastic, update mehru! you bring out the depth of their emotions very well.Dhani,deep love for him, but not deep enough to accept blame for something she is not responsible for. Viplav''s, fury and pressure in his unwillingness to accept that his mother may be in the wrong. You bring out a common issue , that in domestic situations and relationships,a son seldom sees his mother in the wrong. I personally ,always wanted to see the furious side of Viplav.. by bringing this defence of his mother in, you have shown this scene in your story.. How it ends its a bit tit for tat!but Dhani may have taken the right decision.. it was pointless to build on a relationship that was based on his obdurate behaviour.. perhaps he will come around and see the folly of his reaction.. and then do something to make amends.. if they both love each other that is..
Iam loving the tone of this story.. present glitch,then a gradual pulling back towards each other.. sealed with a kiss??
hope baacha's are fine and that diary of yours keep it safe!plz.. out of baacha's reach!
much love hammie

Originally posted by: Spreeti98

Loved the second part...!! Separation... i so wanted such a track..!! so that we can get a PDE (Proper display of emotion)😆, the weakest point of CVs.😆

Great going Mehr, do come up with the next part soon..!!

Waiting!! Waiting..!!😊

Originally posted by: cocoatree

Seems I am the only one who missed your FF..! 😲
I am poor and so sorry for late reply !! sweety !! What a title..!! 😳
You need to accept that you are good writer ! I know you can do a wonderful justice in your writing and the way you elaborate each ViDha shots makes us so tempting ..! How could we resist your FF..? Just continue, !! 😳

Originally posted by: sura123

Wow...i just loved it...superb story...

I want them to meet soon..😊

when r u going to release next chapter???

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

hy mehr di thanks so much for the fourth part..i was eagerly waiting for ur kiss..oh sorry i mean Vidha's kiss..not Vidha's kiss..Vidha story The kiss😆😆

very well written👏👏..waiting for the next part..i am also in no hurry..its difficult to write a story..u take ur time and update the next part😊

Originally posted by: kawtar1996

dekho ab kiss kabhi khatam nahi hoga jab tak moka melege viplav zaroor dhani ko kiss karenge kaun batahai shayad itne hot kiss bina suhaag bache hoge i think yeh yah gande cv ka plan dhani pregnant hogi separate hoga ek naya ladka entry karegi fall in love with dhani phir vipu ka jealous hoga vipu yeh ladka jaan se mardenge uske bacha apna lenge kahani khatam after 21 leap ki baat vidha kids ki story nakshari ladki ki naam hai nakchra ladka ka naam twins ek aur twins hogi pagla ladka ka naam hai pagli ladki ka naam hai🤣