SS:The kiss/chap6 upd pg37/Spoiler 53 - Page 3

Yar mehr it's amazing.. I can feel the mausam in the ss.. beautifully written. . Sabar nae kia ja raha.. but update as soon as u got time.. 😉

when..wats nxt mehru???eagerly waiting for nxt part.. superb..loved it..

Originally posted by: pearl82

Beautiful mehraan👏

Originally posted by: rama_2010

Loved Part 2 Mehru dear...

looking forward to next ... am sure u r gonna make Vidha meet...

uff the beimaan mausam😆, the tension... bring it on girl ...

dekha show mein bhi mausam beimaan hain...

Originally posted by: NusiSg

Yar mehr it's amazing.. I can feel the mausam in the ss.. beautifully written. . Sabar nae kia ja raha.. but update as soon as u got time.. 😉

Originally posted by: vijayasri88

when..wats nxt mehru???eagerly waiting for nxt part.. superb..loved it..

hi mehru..
SS~The Kiss.. part 2
baat sun.. I read your comment it took you 4 hrs.. hain?? you must be a whizz writer.. no Mehru.. doing a take.. is easy.. the skeleton of the take is in the episode.. its's really like report writing.. with personalized impressions. However I find doing a FF or SS fairly taxing imaginatively.. you are in charge.. you control the movement of the sequence of events. One has to spend time to think up the plot.. then the sequence.. Mehru ,takes me days.. like you, for me too there are interruptions.. but just have to make time as and when. But I can tell you now that you have set the scene .. thoughts will come and events will chug along.. so persist, readers read and value your work, and that will be the biggest motivation for you to carry on.. as you are doing.. well done!
Now part 2 , is as interesting as part 1.. I learnt more about the situation.. dhani has crossed wires with viplav's mother, His manner is fairly hardlined.. she needs to apologize to hismother. Here comes the shock.. dhani digs her heels in and does'nt see the point?so a fiesty dhani! ... the bit about where she covers a child in the temple ,is a dhani attribute.. compassion for people .. great bit that gives us a clue to her natrue..the element of the weather adds a topical touch.. where rain , restricts movement and activity.. hence dhani too temporarily stranded in temple! great imagery. Now the end is very interesting, left me waiting.. who is viplav phoning? the ashram? why? so dulari can pressure dhani to aplogize to viplav's mother?
thank mehru.. you sound like a ss/ff writer now.. a jolly good one.. loved part 2 thanks and what next? much love hammie

It is certainly worth the effort you are putting and the pleasure you are giving us, ...

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

hi mehru..
SS~The Kiss.. part 2
baat sun.. I read your comment it took you 4 hrs.. hain?? you must be a whizz writer.. no Mehru.. doing a take.. is easy.. the skeleton of the take is in the episode.. its's really like report writing.. with personalized impressions. However I find doing a FF or SS fairly taxing imaginatively.. you are in charge.. you control the movement of the sequence of events. One has to spend time to think up the plot.. then the sequence.. Mehru ,takes me days.. like you, for me too there are interruptions.. but just have to make time as and when. But I can tell you now that you have set the scene .. thoughts will come and events will chug along.. so persist, readers read and value your work, and that will be the biggest motivation for you to carry on.. as you are doing.. well done!
Now part 2 , is as interesting as part 1.. I learnt more about the situation.. dhani has crossed wires with viplav's mother, His manner is fairly hardlined.. she needs to apologize to hismother. Here comes the shock.. dhani digs her heels in and does'nt see the point?so a fiesty dhani! ... the bit about where she covers a child in the temple ,is a dhani attribute.. compassion for people .. great bit that gives us a clue to her natrue..the element of the weather adds a topical touch.. where rain , restricts movement and activity.. hence dhani too temporarily stranded in temple! great imagery. Now the end is very interesting, left me waiting.. who is viplav phoning? the ashram? why? so dulari can pressure dhani to aplogize to viplav's mother?
thank mehru.. you sound like a ss/ff writer now.. a jolly good one.. loved part 2 thanks and what next? much love hammie