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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Chapter 7

Kashish and ranveer enter the office

Ranveer: sir humne adi ka phone track karne ki koshish kari hai but exact location nahi patta kar paye.

Kashish: but ranveer humh ek point toh bhool rahe hain. Ek baat batuo Lara ki last location kya thi?

Ranveer: wait let me check

He checked the location

Ranveer: Lara ki last location Malabar hill.

Kashish: aur Malabar hill mein kohnsi sunsaan jaagai hain

Ranveer: paar kyun?

Kashish: ranveer tumh sawal bohot pooch thai ho

Ranveer: aur tumhe jawab bhi toh nai dai thi

Kashish: ranveer yahan Lara,adi,abha and Shruti ki jaan ka sawal hai aur tumh yahan sawal pai sawal pooch rai ho.

Ranveer: sorry mein dekh kaar patta tha hoon.

He checks and tells her that the locations are the bunglow and the hotel but it couldn't be the bunglow.

Kashish: toh sir humh waha ja kaar check karte hai na

Ranveer: wow!!!! Kashish tumh toh bohot smart ho

Kashish: whatever

Ranveer: compliment hai kashish thank you bol sakh thi ho

Acp: agar tumh dono khi bakwaas katam hogi hai toh humh chale

Kashish and ranveer: sorry sir

Acp: kashish mayank, Anurag aur sangram koh phone karke location pai bolou.

Kashish: sir

They reach the location and check every room but don't find anything then finally they all meet at the store room. Ranveer breaks the door and they all go inside but find nothing but ropes

Ranveer: kashish you know what I said about you being smart I take that back

Kashish: shut up

Sangram: sir laage tha hai humne aa nai mein der hogi they took them

Mayank: an kya kaare

Acp: karne kya hai wapis chalte hai

They all start to leave but kashish stops them

Kashish: wait!!!!!! Woh dekh hi yai

Acp: kya

Kashish: sir seat kai neeche deh kiya kuch likha hai

They all go near the chair and find writing.

Acp: Andheria west

Kashish: kya patta Lara nai likha ho

Sangram: paar sir kidnap toh Lara, Shruti aur adi hoy thai paar yahan toh siraf doh chairs hai.

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Wow...the story is getting more interesting :)

The fight between Ranveer and Kashish was funny 😆

Where is Lara, Shruti and Adi?

Really wanna know!

Continue soon :)

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Laadifan12

@Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: SaNa_sTaR
Wow...the story is getting more interesting :)
The fight between Ranveer and Kashish was funny 😆
Where is Lara, Shruti and Adi?
Really wanna know!
Continue soon :)

Thank you for your lovely comment 😊

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dinazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Amazing.

Kashish and ranveer ki nok-jhok 😆

But where did shruti, lara and adi go??

Waiting to know what happens.!!

Cont soon .

PS . I need some more time to post my os.

Pls dont mind ..😊

Thanks for the pm. 😃

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Laadifan12

@Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: dinazz
Amazing.
Kashish and ranveer ki nok-jhok 😆
But where did shruti, lara and adi go??
Waiting to know what happens.!!
Cont soon .
PS . I need some more time to post my os.
Pls dont mind ..😊
Thanks for the pm. 😃

Thank you so much

It okay take your time no rush

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Laadifan12

@Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Chapter 8

They were still at location

Mayank: sir Andheria west itna baara hai humh onko kaise dhoon dai.

Acp: humh toh kisi aur desh main bhi doond lai gai yai toh sirf sheher.

Kashish: woh sabh toh teekh par ab kya kaare

Acp: mayank aur sangram tumh dono paata karo Andheria west mein kohnsi sunsaan jagain hain?

Sangram and mayank: okay

They all leave exept from Kahish and ranveer.

Ranveer: ummhhh. Kashish woh... I'm ... I'm sorry

Kashish: getlost mujhe tumh sai koi baat nahi karni.

And kashish leaves. Then ranveer followed.

Meanwhile adi and Lara are unconscious. Just then adi starts to wake up. He sees Lara and then with a lot of difficulty he breaks the ropes and runs to Lara.

Adi: Lara autho

Lara: adi

Adi: ha main, Lara please autho

He quickly opens the rope and then hugs her

Adi: Lara tumh teekh tumh jaanti hi tumhne mujhe kitna pareshaan kiya hai

Lara: promise karo adi kai tumh mujhe kabhi bhi aakele nahi choro gai

Adi: kabhi nahi par abha kahan hai

Lara : woh ooper wala kamra main hai

Adi: chalo

They go to the room and find Abha. They wake her up and then take her down.

Adi attacks a goonda and takes his phone. Then he calls acp diler. Acp gets a call and he picks it up.

Acp: hello

Adi: sir mein adi bohl ra hoon

Acp: adi tumh teekh ho aur abha Lara aur Shruti woh sab

Adi: sir Lara aur abha toh milgai hai but Shruti nahi

Acp: paar tumh sab ho kahan

Adi: patta nahi ajeeb si jaga hai.

Acp: teekh hai tumh khabrao na main phone track karta hoon. Kashish ranveer yai number track kaaro

Kashish and ranveer: yes sir

They track the location

Ranveer: sir location naima's boutique kai paas hai

Acp: chalo

They reach the location and smartly kill all the goons and reach the room and find abha Lara and adi unconscious. Ranveer goes to adi and kashish goes to abha and acp goes to Lara and they wake them up and open their ropes. They are all about to leave but something cold touches the back of Lara's head

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Awesome chapter

Lara and Adi part was pretty adorable

Happy that they found Lara, Adi and Abha :)

But Shruti is still missing...

Want to know where she is

Continue soon!

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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Chapter 9

They all look back and find Shruti with the gun on Lara's head

All of the team: Shruti tumh

Shruti: ha mein chonwk gaye kya mujha dekh kai?

Lara: paar tumhne yai kiya kyun humh dono toh dost thai na

Shruti: dost please humh dono kabhi dost nahi thai woh siraf ek natak thai chemical koh hasil karne kiliye. Mein jaanti thi kai tumh haare bina yai chemical banana impossible tha isliye tumhai istamaal kiya.

Lara: how could you maina tumh paar inta wishwaas kiya aur tumhne mujhe dohka diya how could you

Shruti: Lara tumh na bohot emotianly soch thai ho. I never considers you as my friend toh yai sab bhool jao.

Acp: woh chemical kahan hai

Shruti: woh chemical to activate ho ra hai aur jab woh aliens aayengai toh poori doniya pai mai raj karongi

Kashish: sapna dehk na baand karo tumh hari jaga jail main ha.

Abha: kashish mam theekh kairi ha apna ap ko hamare hawala kaar do.

Shruti: tumh sab pagal ho main itni dhoor main wapis jaane kai liya nahi awi

Acp gives a signal to ranveer and the girls cover him he sneaks behind her

Shruti: yai chemical 5 minute mein asaar Kardai ga aur woh chemical aliens koh attract karega.

Ranveer stops her but she gets in the way again then kashish shoots her on the leg. Lara goes to th computer and manges to stop the chemical reaction in time. Shruti sees the gun and about to shoot Lara but adi comes in the way and gets shot 5 inches away from the heart Lara runs to adi and out his head on her lap.

Lara: adi tumh ne aaesa kyu kiya yai goli toh mujhe lagni thi toh tumh beech main kyun aai

Adi: kyun kai mera aur tumhar bohot gehra risht hai

Lara: kya matlaab

Adi: jaana chati ho

Lara: haan

Adi: I save you because I love you meri scientist

That was the last word he said before he fainted. Shruti was taken into jail and adi was sent to hospitial and Lara didn't leave his side.

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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Note: chapter 10 will be the last chapter hope you enjoyed the journey

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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Chapter 10

At the hospital

All of the team went to the hospital. The doctor and the nurse was taking him inside adi and Lara were holding hands and slowly their hands separated. 2 hours later the doctor appeared

The team rushed to the doctor

Ranveer: what happened is he okay

Doctor: I'm sorry he no more

Lara: nahiii aisa nahi ho sakh tha mera adi mouhje nahi chor kai nahi ja sakh tha

Doctor: your right apka confidence koh toh mana parerga

Lara: kya matlaab

Doc: he's fine

Acp: paar ap aise gaatiya mazak kaise kaar sakh thi hai

Doc: sorry acp but adi ki request thi toh main mangaya

Lara: adi hosh main hai

Doc: ha aap mil sakte hai

They all go inside and find out that he was breathing up and down. The doctor checked and found out that the doctor was injected by slow poisoning they got the culprit and found out that he injected the wrong person and he was suppose to kill a business man. They doctor checked him and said that he was fine but if he didn't wake up in the next 24 hours he would slip into scoma. Acp asked if they could meet him but the doctor said only one person so Lara went.Lara sits on a chair next to adi. She took his hand and held it.

Lara: adi please come back I love you too I can't imagine a life without you.

She kissed his hand and head and saw his fingers move she immediately called the doctor checked him and he said he was fine. Outside the room Abha was standing and Anurag turned her around and hugged her.

Anurag: abha tumh teekh ho

She held his hand and said she was fine. After the doc went Lara sat next to him and she said I love you too. Without wasting a second he pulled her into a hug.

5 years later

Mayla: mommm mouhje bhook lage rhi hai jaldi aou.

Woman: coming sweetheart

The little girl was adi and Lara ahujas daughter Mayla ahuja ( btw I made the surname up) after the hospitial accident they got married and lived together.

Lara: adi jaldi karo late hor rai hain

Adi: coming jaan

Just then the door bell rang it was abha and Anurag Mirza with their little son akash and ranveer and kashish modhi ( btw made the surname up) with their twins vikas and Natasha.

They all have breakfast drop their children off and went to work.

Their life wasn't perfect but they were all happy.

THE END

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