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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: 7sanjiri
nice ff loved it
continue

Thank you 😊 😊 😊

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dinazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

when will this fanfic be updated??

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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Chapter 5

Another day had gone by but still no clue of who the kidnappers were and where they took Lara but they were happy because they got some clues to why she got kidnapped. The whole team was sitting looking at her call location too get a clue took where she could have been taken. Just then ACP got a call from adi and he said he was coming to work today as his sister was much better.

A few hours later adi entered the bureau. Everyone was working silently when he came in.

Adi: good morning

Acp: adi tumh yahan kya kaare ho tumh toh shaam koi aane waale thai

Adi: ha sir paar suhani koh jaldi discharge kar diya toh mein aageya.

He looked around the whole room but could not find Lara then he finally asked.

Adi: where is Lara

Acp: Lara ek chemical par kaam kaare ri thi us chemical ke waja se koi logo ne us koh kidnap kaare li ya.

Adi: kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aur aap ne mujhe patana zaroori nahi samja sir yai aap kaise kaar sakh tai hain agar Lara ko kuch ho gaya toh main apko kabhi maaf nahi karonga.

Ranveer: adi calm down iss main acp sir ki kya galti hain tumhe already inta pareshaan tai is liye socha ke tumhe aur pareshaan nahi karte.

Just then kashish gets a call from the phone company to tell Lara's last phone location after she got the location she cut the call.

Acp: kya hoowa

Kashish: Lara ka last phone location ka patta chal gaya uske phone ke akari local hai Malabar hill.

Acp: map pai check kaaro kai Malabar hill mein ko sunsaan jaaga hai.

Kashish: yes sir

She checks the locations in Malabar hill and finds to place that are like that one is a bunglow which has not been opened for 50 years and another one was the a haunted hotel which no one ever dared to go to. Acp said it could not be the bunglow because they are going to break the bunglow to a build so their it has to be the the hotel. Before acp could say another word adi left. He tried to stop him but the only thing he could think about was saving Lara form those kidnappers.

Ranveer: sir hum adi ka peeche Karai

Acp: nahi ranveer iss waqt dimak se soch na hai dil se nahi.

Meanwhile Abha was with Shruti giving her protection and Shruti was testing the chemical. Just then abha heard something move she told Shruti to wait and sai she will be back. 20 mins had passed but she still didn't come so Shruti went after her and just then something hit her head.

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Sana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Awesome update

Loved it <3

Loved Adi's reaction...poor guy :(...but happy that he is back :)

What happened to Shruti and Abha?

Really wanna know

Update soon :D

And thanks for the PM :)

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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: SaNa_sTaR
Awesome update
Loved it <3
Loved Adi's reaction...poor guy :(...but happy that he is back :)
What happened to Shruti and Abha?
Really wanna know
Update soon :D
And thanks for the PM :)

Thank you so so much 😊

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dinazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

amazing update yaar.😊

so at last adi comes to know that lara got kidnapped.!!

pyaar ne usse kaisa bana diya , he is even threatening acp that he will never forgive him😆😆 (just joking)😆

oh no .. did they kidnap abha too? and shruti. ?

waiting eagerly to know whats gonna happen .

cont soon. its ok for the late update but dear dont be disheartened that you are getting less response. it does happen a lot of time. but now you see you have got another reader to who likes you work too. dont worry , your hard work will pay off.

keep writing . i really enjoy it. 😃😊

and thanks for the pm.😊

Edited by dinazz - 10 years ago

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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: dinazz
amazing update yaar.😊
so at last adi comes to know that lara got kidnapped.!!
pyaar ne usse kaisa bana diya , he is even threatening acp that he will never forgive him😆😆 (just joking)😆
oh no .. did they kidnap abha too? and shruti. ?
waiting eagerly to know whats gonna happen .
cont soon. its ok for the late update but dear dont be disheartened that you are getting less response. it does happen a lot of time. but now you see you have got another reader to who likes you work too. dont worry , your hard work will pay off.
keep writing . i really enjoy it. 😃😊
and thanks for the pm.😊

Thank you so so much

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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Chapter 6

Acp: Ranveer zaara abha koh phone karke poocho kai sabh teekh to hai

Ranveer: yes sir

He calls abha but she doesn't pick up he tries a few times but still no response.

Ranveer: sir woh phone nahi utarahi

Acp: kya okay Shruti koh phone karo

He tries calling Shruti but again no response

Ranveer: sir uske ka phone be nahi lage raha

Acp: kya!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kashish: kuch ho toh nahi gaya

Acp: kashish, ranveer, kavi and Anurag tumh sab lab ja kai check karo kai sabh teekh hai

They go their and find abha and Shruti are not their. Anurag rushes and finds abha's gun on the floor and ranveer checks the lab but doesn't find the chemical. Kavi looks around and finds blood.Anurag gets really worried about Abha

Flashback (what happened in the lab)

Abha: testing kiyliye kitna aur time lagaiga.

Shruti: iss chemical koh test karne mein tohra time chaiya

Abha : okay

Just then she hears a sound of a rock

Abha: tumh yahan ruko mein dehk kaar aatio hoon

She takes her gun out and walks outside the room. Just then something hit her head.

Flashback ends

Ranveer: darn it. Ab toh unke haat chemical bi laag gaye aur Shruti bhi ek akari link bhi gaye up kya kaare. Aur park nahi abha kis haal mein hogi humay kuch nahi pata

Meanwhile adi reaches to the haunted hotel and looks for her everywhere. Looks at every room in the hotel but doesn't find her. He then goes upstairs checks every room but still doesn't find anything the only place that was left was the store room he went their but it was locked he broke the door and came inside and saw Lara in a sate he could not even imagine her to be in. She was covered with blood her arms had slits everywhere she had bruises everywhere. Without thinking anything he rushed to her tried waking her up but she was unconscious he was opening the ropes when he heard her say

Lara: go from here they will get you please go

Adi: don't worry i am here nothing will happen.

And before Lara could reply or he could say another word something hard hit is head.

Edited by Laadifan12 - 10 years ago