The dinner fanfic

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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Disclaimer: Hi guys here's my first ff please comment and review. Please ignore the grammatical mistakes hope you enjoy. I will be updating every weekend thanks for reading

The dinner

Abha and Anurag are in the office

Anurag: Abha kaam katam hogaye hai toh hotel moon forest chaaltein hai dinner keh liye.

Abha: teekh hai main ghar jaa kai tyaar ho ti hoon tum mujhe 30 mins mein pick kaarne aajao

Anurag: okay cool

One thing they didn't know was that adi and Lara were spying on them

Lara: toh dinner pe jaane keh plans baan rahe hain

Adi : kyun tumhe koi problem hai kya?

Lara: shut up adi tum toh poori zindagi behwakoofe he rahoge

Adi : okay toh tumhi Batak ke kya behwakoofi ki Maine

Lara : stupid yai hi moka hai paata laaga ne ka Kein woh doono ek doosre se pyaar kaarta be hai ya nahi

Adi: ya your right but what next

Lara: I think hum koh poori team ko inform kaarne chaiye poori team aigee toh ziyada maaza ayega aur confession be ho jaay ga.

Adi: okay toh poori team koh Ikatta karte hain.

Within 5 mins Adi and Lara call a secret meeting which abha and Anurag are unaware of.

The team: tum doono ne itni urgently Kyun bolaya hain?

Lara and adi explain everything and they all decide to go.

Index

Chapter 1 : page 1

Chapter2: page1

Chapter3: page 2

Chapter4: page 2

Chapter5 : page 3
Chapter6 : page 4

Chapter7 : page 4

Chapter8 : page 5

Chapter9 : page 5
Chapter10 : page5

Edited by Laadifan12 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

I really hope we can get as many comments as possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Laadifan12
I really hope we can get as many comments as possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yes you are right . there is no activity happening on this forum . thanks for starting a new topic as fanfic. was waiting for a really long time to read a story based on them..

good start . amazing .pls continue soon.😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dinazz

yes you are right . there is no activity happening on this forum . thanks for starting a new topic as fanfic. was waiting for a really long time to read a story based on them..
good start . amazing .pls continue soon.😊

Thank you so much your comment really means a lot we will try to post as soon as possible

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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Disclaimer : hi guys back with an update. As usual please comment and review. One more thing some of these words may not make sense like masala chai I really couldn't think of anything else and wanted to post ASAP so please excuse that. I hope you like the funny and weird song I created. If you watch cid I did steal some parts.Thanks a lot for commenting. Hope you enjoy the update.

Chapter2

At moon forest hotel

Adi: yahan ponch to gaiye hai lehkin un koh doondai gaiye kaise

Lara: Maine sahi kah tha tumh poori zindagi behwakoofe he rahogai. Araye idiot yeh hotel ki opening hai guest list mein check karte hain.

Adi: woh umhh... Woh tumh jaanti ho kai kaam inta hai keh soch nahi paata

Lara: jab soch ne ke baari aye toh kaam ka bahaana laage diya

Kashish: shut up. Tumh doono please laarna baand kaaro chalo guest list check karte hai.

They check the guest list and find out that Anurag as booked table number 117.

They find the table and stand in a distance just in-case they get seen. Just then a waiter pushes kashish she falls on Lara and Lara unfornutley falls on table 117

Abha: Lara tumh yahan kya kaar rahi ho

Lara: mmmain... Woh...umhh... Main aakele nahi aaye hoon mera saath poori team aaye hai woh dekho.

She points at the team and All of the team get revealed

Abha and Anurag: aap sabh Yaahan kya kaare ho

Adi: humh tumhara peeche

Just then Lara elbows him in the stomach

Lara: Iska matlaab hai ke yai, mayank aur Sangram poora ruste peecha peecha gaate raaha. Tumh teeno suna joh gaari mein gaa rahe tai

Sangram, mayank and adi : peeche bageeche meib anagana phool kila hein barse ga sawar jhoom ma jhoom ke do dill aise kilenghe jaise ke abha aur anurag moon forest hotel mein jaise kameez aur dhotii...

Anurag: baas baas. Haa woh Saab to teekh hai lehkin aap sabh Yaahan kaar kya rahe ho

Lara: woh umh.. Ha adi go masal chai peene thi.

Just then Adi gives Lara a horrofiying look as he hated masala chai. And Lara gives back a sorry look.

Abha: adi aur masala chai. Not possible he hates masal chai.

Adi: nai nai nai Maine masal chai nahi peene thee woh sangram koh green tea peene thi

Sangram: mai kabhi see green tea peene laage main toh Haryana ka pacora hoon.

Abha: excuse me

Sangram: woh mera matlaab hai kashish koh umh.. Ha kashish koh cold coffee peene thi

Anurag: inko cold coffee ke kya zaroorat hai yai toh already itni tundi hai.

Kashish: kya!!!!!!!!

Anurag : woh... Umh... Mera matlaab hai keh aap ka dil to inta garaam hai app koh cold coffee ki kya zaroorat.

Abha: But aapko toh cold coffee pasand nahi hai. Sach batoa aap sab yahaa kaar kya re ho

Ranveer: woh sabh choro bohot booke lage rahi hain kaana kaate hain

Team: ha good idea

They all decide to sit down and have dinner together. They were getting bored so Abha suggested they play truth or dare. It was kavi's turn and Lara dared him to act out acp diler.

Whilst he was doing that Acp diler came and pretended to be angry but then started laughing.

Ranveer: sir aap yahaan. Aapko keh se paata keh hum yahaan hai

Everyone gave a confused look.

Acp diler: baat yai hai keh jab Lara aur adi abha aur Anurag ka peecha karne kee baat kare thai tab mein inki baate sunrah tha.

Lara and adi exchanged shocked looks and so did abha and anurag

Anurag and abha: kya!!!!!! toh islie aap sabh yahaan aye thai

Ranveer: woh sabh choro. Paar sir agaar apko paate tha toh pehle aaja thai saat mein dinner ho jaa tha

The team: ha sir

Acp diler: woh bohot kaam that islie nahi aapiye socha kaana nahi tumh sab se mill toh loon.

Kavi: sir hamara be paas hogaya. Chale

Just then waiter serves ice cream to abha

Acp diler: abha ka hone do saath mein nikaale thai hain

Lara: sir aap loge chaliye mein aur abha aaj jathe hai

Ranveer: sure

Lara and abha: ya

Kavi: waiter bill doh

Acp diler: kavi bill maine deh diya

Kashish: sir aapna kyun

Acp diler: tumh sab he toh meri family hoh toh tumh sab keh liye nahi toh kis keliye

Team: thank you sir

They all leave exept from lara and abha. They sat down and abha starts to eat her ice cream. After 5 mins they chat and abha finishes her ice cream and sees a tissue that says ' I need your help meet me at the back of the hotel in 15mins'. They decide to go. They waited and it had been 20mins still no one had arrived they thought someone might of found out so they decided to split up and look for the waiter. After 5 mins abha comes back to the place and couldnt see lara.

Abha: Lara!!!!! Lara!!!!!!!! lara!!!!!! Aab yeh kahan chali gaye

She calls her and hears her phone ring. She follows the noise and sees he phone under some metal bars. She was just about to leave when she slipped on something. She looked down it was blood

Abha: khoon!! Lara!!

What will happen next? is it Laras blood? Why did the waiter ask for help? To know keep reading the fanfic.

Edited by Laadifan12 - 10 years ago

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dinazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice one. Lol ..funny song . 😆

OMG where Is Lara??

Cont soon.

I hope people start replying Soon as there are so many views and no comments and your Story is also a good one. 😊

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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hope we can get more comments 😊

Edited by Laadifan12 - 10 years ago

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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dinazz
Nice one. Lol ..funny song . 😆
OMG where Is Lara??
Cont soon.
I hope people start replying Soon as there are so many views and no comments and your Story is also a good one. 😊

Thank you so so much. I do hope we get more comments but even if we have only one comment we will still contiune. Thanks again for your lovely comment

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dinazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Laadifan12

Thank you so so much. I do hope we get more comments but even if we have only one comment we will still contiune. Thanks again for your lovely comment

yes yes do continue. I love reading fanfics of my favorite couple in this serial aabha - anurag .😊

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Laadifan12

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Disclaimer: hi guys back with another update so sorry this is a late one. I'm kind of disappointed with how many comments I am getting I wish I could get more but I will still contiune. Please please please review and comment. Your comments mean a lot. Please ignore the grammatical mistakes hope you enjoy

Chapter3

Next day they went to the hotel and searched for clues. Anurag wanted to meet abha but couldn't see her anywhere. He went to the back of the hotel to search for clues. Just then he heard someone crying he looked and it was abha. He put his hand on her shoulder she turned around when she saw it was Anurag she put her head on her shoulder.

Abha: yai sabh meri gaalti hai aagar mein Lara kai saath rehti toh shayaad woh teekh hoti.

Anurag: abha ismein tumhari koh galti nahi hai tumh please rona baand karo. He wipes her tears. Chalo acp sir humhara wait kaar rai hongai.

They go to acp and the rest if the team. They look at abhas red ready eyes and then look at Anurag. Anurag gives them a don't worry look. Anurag looks around but does not see adi anywhere.

Anurag: acp sir adi kahan hai?????????

Acp: woh adi ki behen hospitial mein hai toh woh uske paas hai.

Anurag: paar sir woh aur Lara aachai dost hain uske jaane nai ka haak hai

Acp: nahi Anurag woh already bohot pareshaan hai agaar usko Lara ke baare mein baata gain to woh aur pareshaan ho jai. Aur waise bhi humh sab hai na

Anurag: ji sir.

Anurag was really worried because he was the only one who knew that adi was madly in love with Lara and if he didn't tell him he would be really angry but if he told him he would get even more worried he didn't know what to do so he decided no to tell him.just then acp got a call from the forensic department. They told him about who's blood to was and he cut the call.

Kashish: kya hoowa sir???????????????

Acp: woh khoon Lara ka hai

Team: kyaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Acp: ha

Kavi: sir agaar Lara ko kuch hogaya.

But before he could continue acp interrupted.

Acp: Lara koh kuch nahi ho ga kuch nahi hona dainga Lara koh.

Mayank: par sir ab kya kaare.

Meanwhile Lara was in a dark room she remembered how she got their. She saw the waiter and before she could do anything a guy shot her and she was unconscious. Luckily the bullet only scratched her back. But still she was in a lot of pain and was very weak because of the blood loss. She hear footsteps and those were coming towards her she pretended she was unconscious but they realised and asked her to answer their questions. One thing her team didn't know was that she was doing a secret experiment that could help the police officer but if it got in the wrong hands it could destroy Mumbai.

Man1: where is the chemical.

Lara: I will never tell you even if I have to die.

Man2: oh don't worry we won't kill you that easily

Lara: do whatever you want you will never get that chemical!!!!!

Man2: we will don't worry just wait and watch.

Just then something hard hit her head and before she knew it she fainted.

What is the chemical? Why hasn't she told anyone? Will they find it and destroy the city or will the suoercops save her and the chemical? To know keep reading.

Edited by Laadifan12 - 10 years ago

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