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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Nice one. Great bonding between anurag and aabha. They understand each other.
Wow adi loves Lara.😃
Oh no who are those people who have kidnapped lara?? And what is the chemical and why do they need it ??
It's getting Interesting .
Do continue Soon .😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Hey 😊
I stopped watching Shapath some time ago (for no particular reason really) and somehow came across this fanfic.
Read it all in one go
Really nicely written ⭐️
The story is getting more interesting
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: SaNa_sTaR

Hey 😊

I stopped watching Shapath some time ago (for no particular reason really) and somehow came across this fanfic.
Read it all in one go
Really nicely written ⭐️
The story is getting more interesting
Update soon

Thank you so so much your comment really means a lot 😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
O-M-G! Activity in HNLHS? 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Disclaimer: hi guys I am so so sorry for a late update.please review and comment. Hope you enjoy

Chapter 4

Two days had passed but still no one knew anything about Lara's kidnapping. Who were they? What did they want? Their were so many questions but no answers. Adi was still unaware about Lara's kidnapping. Most of the team were sitting in the office quietly, thinking about the times they spent with Lara. Everyone really liked her she was a fun loving person. As all of them were thinking abha and kavi entered

Kavi: sir Lara ke friends aur family se baat ki hai but kisea koh kuch nahi paata
Acp: yai kaise hoh sakte hai. Kisea ko toh kuch paata hona chaiye.
Abha: nahi sir

Just then Abha remembered that the day before her kidnapping she saw her in the office at night. When she asked her what she was doing she was looking really scared but said she was completing a file that acp had given to her. But the when she told acp he said he never gave her any file to complete. He told Anurag to track her phone and see the places she went to in the past few days. He checked and found at that she regularly been going to Black Forest coffee shop. Acp abha, kashish, ranveer and Anurag went their to see why she kept on going their. They checked the CCTV footage and found at she was meeting this girl. When they researched a bit more they found that the girl's name was Shruti and was a scientist and worked at the national science laboratory. They went their but when they asked her she refused to tell them anything but when they told her what happened she got really worried and told them.

Shruti: mein aur Lara ek chemical pe kaam kaare rai thai joh police ki help kaare sakh ta hai paar agaar woh galaat haat mein chaale jai toh poore Mumbai koh barbaad kar de ga
Kashish: agaar woh koi chemical baana re thi toh usne humha kyu nahi paatya.
Shruti: maina usa maana kiya tah kyu kain main nahi cha thi ti kai ziyada loge goh koh patta challe.
Kavi: paar woh chemical tha kya aur hain kahan??????
Shruti: woh chemical ek safe mein jiska password serif mera aur Lara ke haath se kohl tha hai. Woh chemical outer space sai joh aliens aar rai hain unko control kaare sakh ta hai. Paar agaar woh galaat hato mein chaale jai toh woh un aliens ko Mumbai ko barbaad karne keliye use kaar sakh tai hai. Hum ne woh chemical baane toh liya hai baas test karne baaki tha joh Lara aaj karne waali thi paar usa pehle uski kidnapping ho gayi.
Anurag: paar woh loghe hai khon jisne Lara koh kidnap kiya hai.
Shruti: paata nahi yai chemical ke baare mein siraf mujhe aur Lara koi patta tha.
Acp Diler: kya hum woh chemical dekh sakh thai hai.
Shruti: ya sure

She takes them to where the chemical was and scans her hand. She opens the safe and carefully takes out 5 tubes which have the chemical inside.

Shruti: yai hai woh chemical jiske ke waja sai Lara kidnap hogayi
Abha: paar iska matlaab hai kai next target aap hai you need police protection.

Meanwhile Lara woke up and was really thirsty she asked for water but they refused to give it to her. A person came in with a mask on and said you will get water but you have to answer some questions. She refused but he ignored her answer and started to ask the questions.

Criminal: where is the safe with the chemical?
Lara: I don't know
Criminal: wrong!!!! Anyways question number 2. Who else is helping you to make the chemical.
Lara: I will never tell you
Criminal: again wrong, either you answer my questions or starve to death.
Lara: I will rather die then tell you anything
Criminal: okay no more Mr. Nice guy. (Then he got a knife out) Last chance where is the chemical?
Lara: I don't know
Criminal: wrong!!!!! ( and then he makes a slit on her arm) question 2 what is the password for the safe.
Lara: I don't know?
Criminal: wrong again ( then he made another slit on her arm)

Like this he kept in asking her questions but she did not give the right answers. Soon she was covered with so many slits that she was unconscious.

Who are these people? Why do they want the chemical? Is acp diler and his team going to find Lara in time or will she die? Keep reading the fanfic to see what happens next

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Super update :D
The team's meet with Shruti was nice :)
Poor Lara has to go through so much :(...wonder how the criminals found out about the chemical if only Lara and Shruti knew about it
Update soon and thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaNa_sTaR

Super update :D

The team's meet with Shruti was nice :)
Poor Lara has to go through so much :(...wonder how the criminals found out about the chemical if only Lara and Shruti knew about it
Update soon and thanks for the PM :)

Thank you for your lovely comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Superb part. Nice conversation between officers and shruti.
Thank god the chemcal is safe.and next target is shruti😲
OMG bechari Lara. I hope those bad people never get the chemical. 😡
I hope Lara will be safe and adi usse aake bachaye 😆
Nice.
Continue soon.😊
Thanks for pm😊
Edited by dinazz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dinazz

Superb part. Nice conversation between officers and shruti.

Thank god the chemcal is safe.and next target is shruti😲
OMG bechari Lara. I hope those bad people never get the chemical. 😡
I hope Lara will be safe and adi usse aake bachaye 😆
Nice.
Continue soon.😊
Thanks for pm😊

Thank you so much for your support
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
nice ff loved it
continue

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