~inshi ff~'ur love is my strength'CHAPTER12, Pg15 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Great start. Looks like a very nice FF. Pls update fast.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u for encouraging me😊. Here's the 2nd part

chapter 2
rishi trembling moves toward Dr's cabin and opens the door...

Dr: come in Mr. diwan

rishi: kya hua Dr, Indira theek to hai na? (rishi asks this with great difficulty praying in mind for a positive response)
Dr: Mr Diwan mai apko yahan koi jhooti tassali nai dooga. Mrs diwan meri patient hai aur maine unse pahele hi kaha tha ki wo kaafi weak hai ur unhe poora aram leena chaye aur is condition mai unka girna...internal bleeding ki wajah se kaafi blood loss ho chuka hai khar abi bleedig to humne control karli hai lekin agar operation mei thodi aur der ki to halat bigar sakti hai.
Rishi,s heart stopped listening to this and with great difficulty he asked the dr " dr aur bachee wo..." rishi couldn't complete the sentence.

Dr: Mr Diwan maine jaisa kaha ki kafi blood loss ho chuka hai aur aise me mother aur babies dono ko bachana mushkil hai. hum apni taraf se poori koshish kaege lekin chances bahut kam hai.

Rishi: kitne chances hai dr?
Dr: sirf 20%

listening to these words Rishi sank on the chair unable to believe that how harsh his destini cud be...

Dr: mr diwan hum zayada wait nai kar sakte aap jaldise operation ki formalities poori kar de taki hum jaldi surgery kar sake warna indira ko bachana bhi mushkil hojayega.
saying this the Dr left his cabin to prepare for surgery and rishi was left shocked unable to understand anything. he was totally lost...

Mr Diwan! suddenly a voice startled rishi and he was brought back to reality. Rishi looked up and saw a nurse standing in front of him with a form

nurse: aap yeh form fill karke reception mai deposit karado.

rishi takes the form and signs it with trembling hand. His beautiful past spent with indira flashed in front of his eyes. All the beautiful moments they spent together and the day Indira shared the news of their child's arrival, all dreams that they saw for their future and Antra - Mantra... A tear rolled down from rishi's eyes and fell on the form.
suddenly rishi felt a hand on his shoulder. Rishi turned back and saw Sanjay and without taking a second Sanjay hugged Rishi

Sanjay: meri abhi dr se baat hui unohone muje saab bata diya... tu himmat rakh rishi sab theek hojayega...kuch galat nai hoga... bhagwan pe bharosa rakh ,wo kuch nai onedege teri khushion ko... dekna tu aur bhabi apne dono bachoon ke saath khushi khushi is hospitalse jaoge...sab theek hojayega Ricky

listening to sanjay's words rishi broke down and started crying and sanjay consoled him

collecting himself rishi and sanjay went towards OT...suddenly rishi saw the dr entering the OT

"Dr!!!" Rishi called out unable to speak further but his eyes conveyed all his emotions.

Dr: patting rishi's shoulder " bhagwan pe bharosa rakhiye"

saying this Dr went inside the OT ond the door closed...

to be continued...
(i know this is depressing and i wanted to finish it in this vry chapter but tym constraint stopped me. I promise next part won't be this gloomy... plz give ur suggestions...waiting for ur feedback)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Nice post but indu,antra-mantra ko mat marna please indu&rishi ki happy family dikhana please.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avni30

Nice post but indu,antra-mantra ko mat marna please indu&rishi ki happy family dikhana please.


as i've written earlier my story is about rishi indira and their reunion wid there families so no tragidies😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Nice starting.plz do continue. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
very nice..looking forward to your next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Nice update. Very emotional.
Waiting 4 next update as u said it wont be gloomy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Why dont you complete your ff yaar i open it everyday and find nothing pls do complete it waiting for it eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MultiPAULOMI

Why dont you complete your ff yaar i open it everyday and find nothing pls do complete it waiting for it eagerly

i will surely update it by next week and continue updating regularly till then get ready to welcome antra mantra😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
nice...please jaldi update karo...eagerly waiting...

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