~inshi ff~'ur love is my strength'CHAPTER12, Pg15 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
aww.. thats so sweet..😳😳
i loved the papa- betiya dialoges..😳
awesome job..👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice update & thanks yamini.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yamini aap next update kab dal rahe ho. I cant wait please thoda jaldi karna.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avni30

Yamini aap next update kab dal rahe ho. I cant wait please thoda jaldi karna.


i'm updating it now, hope u lyk it n yes do give me ur feedback so that i can improve.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 5

as soon as rishi and sanjay reach the room they see the nurse coming out of the room. Rishi quickly moves towards the nurse.

Nurse: are Mr. diwan mai apko hi bulane jaa rahi thi apki wife ko hosh agaya hai and she wants to meet you. Mai dr. ko inform kar deti hon wo ake patient ko check karlege.

Rishi: thank u so much sister and quickly heads toward the room while sanjay stays outside. As soon as rishi opens the door his eyes fall on his lyf, his lady love who lay on the bed half sitting and awake.

Indira also sees rishi entering the room with his eyes fixed on her. Indira notices lot of intensity in his eyes which she was not able to understand exactly. Was it fear, sorrow, anger or don't know what? She was still trying to figure out that when rishi sat by her side and hugged her tightly and rained kisses on her face and tears rolling down, but this time of happiness and relief to see her fine. Indira Places her hand on rishi's shoulder this brought rishi back to reality and he slowly breaks the hug but still holding indira close.

Indira: I'm sorry rishi

Rishi: no I'm sorry. Mujhe tumhe akele nai chodna chaye tha and I promice dobara aisa nai hoga.

Indira: mai janti hoon aur isme apki koi galti nai hai. Shayad din hi bure'(before indira could say further rishi places his hand on her mouth)

Rishi: ab bas hum aur purani baton ko yaad nai karege. Ab hum apne present aur future ke bare me sochege jisme hume apne aur humari pariyon ke liye bahut sari khushiyan bharni hai buri yadoon ko to ab paas bhi nai ane dena hai aur mai promise karta hon ki mai ajse ap par aur apne bachoon par koi musibat nai anedooga.

Indira: pariyan''matlab beetiyan????

Rishi: han shrimatiji hum do judwa beetiyon ke mummy papa ban gaye hain. thank u mujhe itni badi kushi deneke liye. I love u and kisses indira on forehead.

Both of them lovingly looked ateachother and were totally lost in each others eyes when they were brought back into reality by opening of the door and the doctor enters the room.

Doctor: hello Mrs diwan! How are u feeling right know?

Indira: I'm fine doctor.

Doctor: that's good but now let me have a look. Sister can I see the vitals

Nurse hands over indira's record file and then the doctor checks indira.

Doctor: you are now fine and will recover soon.

Rishi: doctor when can we take her home?

Doctor: Mr. diwan since it was a major surgery we have to keep her here atleast for a week then u cant ake her home. (doc. Turning towards indira) Mrs. Diwan u now take rest. I'll come to see u in the morning. God night and the doctor turns to leave.

Indira: doctor when can I see my kids doctor and how are they?

Doctor: they are doing vry well Mrs Diwan and we will hand them over to you tomorrow and now you take rest (the doctor leaves)

Indira: (excitedly) rishi apne to dono ko dekha hai na batayena kaise dikhti hai mere beetiyaan. Zaroor aap par gayi hogi. Haina? There was a brightness in indira's eyes when she was talking and rishi felt vry happy to see indira back lyk this

Rishi: dono bahut pyari hai par mujse zyada wo aappar gaye hai. haye meri pyari junior hitlers!

Inira: rishi mujsena wait nai horaha hai mai kab dhekogi unhe? Kab unhe apni godi mai loogi?

Rishi: thoda sabr kijye shrimatiji. Doc.ne kaha hai na ki kal wo antra mantra ko humari pas dedege aap abhi sojao. Apko aram ki zarorat hai'chaliye and makes indira lie on bed.

Indira: rishi mujhe na need nai arahi hai.plz mujhe nai sona ap mujhe humari beetionke bare me aur batao na.

Rishi: kal baat karege indira tumhe aram ki zaroorat hai. Chalo sojao kal antra mantra ko bhi to dekna hai na ? the makes indira close her eyes and cares her forehead.

Theis care of rishi made indira feel vry secure and holding rishi's hand soon she falls asleep. Rishi lovingly looks at indira'. So innocent and beautiful'.admiring her he kisses her on forehead and realizes that indira is still holding his hand. Fearing that his movement might wake indira he places his other arm around her and sleeps next to her with a firm belief that next morning will bring a new start in their lyf and they will now begin their new journey as PARENTS

Edited by baspa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Very nice update great job
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful story dear... luv to see rishi and Indira so loving towards eacch other.. im sure it will be fun to see our inshi as parents... :) bravo!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Very nice update.
Loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
very nice update.. just loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice post 1 confusion hai kya aap bata sakte ho ki aisa kya hua tha ki indu or rishi (bur din) ek dusre se mafi mang rahe thye.kya aap ane wale update main bata ne wale ho ya nahi? I cant wait next update please aap next update kab dal rahe ho.😊

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