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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb update yar... please contd soon...
please can u PM me whenever u update nxt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update..please continue soon and PM me if you can..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one.bt rk is unemployed in h.d.what made u think,of giving him a job as manager.just a quary.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: koushikpurulia

good one.bt rk is unemployed in h.d.what made u think,of giving him a job as manager.just a quary.





rk is unemployed in hd but not in my ff its lyk tht only makin employed will relate my story further
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: emymichael

very sweet start...please continue...




this is my 3rd update buddy
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well written ff.U have done a wonderful job šŸ‘...waiting for the next update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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srry guys the precap is not in this update i was stupid i thought to aataofy that precap in this update but cudn't do so...again sorry tht precap will come but after 1 more update...stupid me

Part 4

Indira sat at the back on the bike ...due to darkness rishi takes wrong turn and enter sum unknown area and suddenly bike stops with a jerk which made indira takraofy with rishi and she immediately removed her hands from him

Indira- kya hua? Bike kyu ruk gayi

Rishi- rukiye bike ke puchke batata hu..

Indira- mein majak ke mood mein bilkul nahi hu

Rishi- ha toh mein bhi nahi hu...aap utariye(get down) mein dekhta hu kya problem hai.

Rishi checks his bike...

Rishi- bike mein kuch problem ho gayi hai...lagta hai humme yaha se pedal(on foot) jana hoga

Indira noticed that this place was not familiar

Indira- yeh kon si jagah hai...yaha mein pehle kabhi nahi aayi

Rishi too noticed but stayed calm...

Rishi-shayad mene wrong turn leliya

Indira- kya pagal ho kya dikhta nahi kya raasta nahi malum that toh puchliya hota...ab hum kaha jaye raat bhi kafi hogayi hai

Rishi- panic hone se kuch nahi hota aur andhere ke wajah se mujhe kuch thik se samajh nahi aaya mein ek kaam karta hu apne kisi dost ko phone karta hu

Rishi called his one of the colleague and explained him abt his situation his friend said he would cum but it will take tym so rishi said tht wenever he will cum to take his bike ...

Rishi- mmj mera dost abhi nahi ayega use aane mein deri hojayegi ek kaam karte hai kyuki yeh jagah kagi dangerous dikhti hai hum chalet hai kahi na khai koi solution miljayega

Indira cudnot say anything but instead she followed rishi

Indira – hum kaha jayenge

Rishi- hmmm acha sawal pucha...kagi intelligent ho(winks) but ek problem hai

Indira- kya

Rishi- mujhe bhi nahi pata

Indira becomes angry and comes beat rk but he catches her hand pulls towards him..they were only inches apart, they were staring at each other..slowly rishi takes indu hand & kisses it thn brings his hand near her neck, removes her hair and kisses on her neck , indu body tingles, it was like butterfly flying in her stomach...she wanted to stop but culdnot...it seems tht she was liking it. Each n every touch of rishi made the body of indu shiver. They didn't realize wat was happening. Then rishi kisses on indu cheek..touch of his lips made indu shiver. She can feel his breathe. Thn rishi cupped indu's face with both his hands n slowly brings his lips closer to hers and wen their lips were only inches apart..indira pushed rishi and after fraction of second rishi was on da floor. Both came to reality, they now realized wat was going on..thank god it was nite &no one was around.. indira didnot know wat to do she saw everywhere except rishi and rishi managed to stand up ...he was totally embarrassed he cudnot believe wat he has done it was so shameful *i didnot think so* they started to walk silentlyand expecting to get some kind of lift.

Rishi thought- how could i do this..shame on me..kya soch rahi hongi mmj mere bare mein. Mein khud pe control kyu nahi karpaya, kya hojaya tha mujhe..kitna galat impression pada hoga mera unke upar .i just wish woh mujhe maaf karde...mein bhi kya soch raha hu...bhala koi ladki kaise kisiko maaf kare jab uske saath yeh hua ho woh bhi unexpectedly...jo bhi ho ek achi feeling aarahi hai...rishi saale kya soch raha hai achi...pagal na ban mmj tujhe ghar se bahar nikal fekengi...

Rishi brushed his thought...now indira thinks

Indira-kitna ajeeb tha lekin acha laga...acha laga...indira tu yeh kya soch rahi hai...acha laga how can this be...tujhe toh use ek ghich ke lagana chahiye tha aur tu keh rahi hai acha laga...uski himmat kaise hui yeh sab karne ki aur meri himmat ko kya hogaya tha mene use kyu nahi roka...kya hojata hai mujhe ...koi toh baat hai jo mujhe kiraydaar ki taraf attract karti hai...bas kar indira kya soch rahi hai...woh toh sirf kiraydar hai jo aaj nahi toh kal chala jayega.

Indira jerks her head to brush her thought.. suddenly it started to rain and it was raining heavily ..rishi and indira were in middle of da road no where to go , they were completely lost. They ran towards a tree for shelter , then suddenly indira realizes that she was wearing white kurti and it became totally transparent due to rain. She was feeling awkward..trying to cover her body with her hands...and faced opp. To rishi..rishi was meanwhile searching for any better shelter thn he turned towards indu ...he was confused by seeing indira's behaviour first he thought indira was feeling cold but thn realized matter was sumthing else he put off his jacket and puts on indira

Rishi- yeh pehenlijiye aapko comfortable feel hoga...waise bhi aapko dhyan dena chahiye tha

Indira was shocked on is wordings and felt embarrased she wears the jacketand feels protected

Rishi –barish kam hogayi hai humme chalna chahiye...koi ach jagha milegi toh wohi ruk jayenge

Rishi and indira started to walk. Rishi stares at indu fron the corner of his eyes she was luking gorgeous wid her wet hair falling on her face just like an angel.

its a short update but will soon post another one

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊 lovely update...i just luvd it...šŸ‘

inshi in rain...šŸ˜...

plzzz contd sooon...😊...thanks 4 d PM dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww..its amazing and so romantic..loved it dear..waiting for the next one..thanx for the PM..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aisha.damor

<font color="#003333">😊lovely update...i just luvd it...šŸ‘</font>

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<font color="#003333">inshi in rain...šŸ˜...</font>
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<font color="#003333">plzzz contd sooon...😊...thanks 4 d PM dear...</font>




Thnx n ur wlcm

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