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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANK YOU FOR UR COMMENTS...I WILL TRY TO REACH UR EXPECTIONS..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mithsi_22

it's awesome..please continue..and i really loved it that they are already married..its too good..👍🏼

will wait to read more..
thank you for this FF..😊



YEP MISTHSI_22...I REALLY WANTED THEM TO GET MARRIED...IN SHOW HAMESHA UNKI SHADI HOTE HOTE RUK JAATI HAI...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i loved both the posts!

btw a Q...rishi ka ghar matlab wahi GK wala bunglow hai or u have something else in mind?
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Originally posted by: Stolen_Heart

hi girl_rocks..really love ur FF..writing FF does not seem like a first time for u..u really done a great job in ur first attempt..👏..waiting for the continuation..😉





thank you so much for ur appreciation...it was indeed my first tym posting here...i have written this ff long back wen hd was just 1 mnth old...yep i will soon update next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: iolahardy

i loved both the posts!

btw a Q...rishi ka ghar matlab wahi GK wala bunglow hai or u have something else in mind?




thnx...no its not tht ghar...i have sumthing in my mind...u will get too know soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome FF plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi..the 2nd part is also awesome..i am loving this couple which is romantic in your FF..really loving romantic Rishi..well done..👏
waiting for your next update..
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Originally posted by: mithsi_22

hi..the 2nd part is also awesome..i am loving this couple which is romantic in your FF..really loving romantic Rishi..well done..👏

waiting for your next update..



hi...thank you so much...waise this update didnot come as i was thinking i wnted to make it more better but lack of tym i cudnot do so...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update.Waiting 4 the next update...😍
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guys i m so sorry for being late...i was very buzy these dayz but now i m free...will be updating it frequently...sorry sorry

Part3

Gudmorning mam...guudmrng mam

Every greeted cheerfully to indira...her colleague and junior got used to of lovely indira...indira sits in her office...n here cum pandey ji...gud morning didi

Indu -gud morning pandey ji...aap kaise hai...

Pandey ji- me thik hu...n goes off

This didnot at all astonish him...he now used to it...

*Ab humari inidra pehle jaisi jo nahi rahi*

Scene shifts to rishi's office

Gud morning sir...

Rish- gud morning

Rishi-gud morning sir...do we start meeting

Boss- gud mrng yes lets start

Meeting lasted for 2 hrs..rishi in his cabin saw his n indu marriage photo and remembers how he met her

Flashback

Airplane landed in delhi airport...there came rishi talking on phone

Ha mein aagaya...airport se nikal gaya hu...lekin ek problem hai...i m new to this city...where shud i go i m clueless-said rishi on phone

Sana-arre baba tnsn na lo...tu na chandani chowk chala ja jaha tujhe ache aur saste ghar ya kamra rent pe mil jaye ga...udhar kafi property dealers hai tujhe koi na koi miljayega...look chinta nahi karo main hoon na...koi prob hoga toh phone kariyo...

Rishi-ha jaanta hu tu hi toh hai jo mere bure waqt me mujhe nahi choda nahi toh mere family ne mujhe toh paraya kar diya tha...thk u for everything...

Sana-thk u mat bol yaar i m ur best fren itna toh haq banta hai yaar...acha chal ghar mile toh phone karna...bye..

Rishi- bye...

In this tnsn rishi managed to smile all bcoz of sana his best fren since childhood...she is very mature and understand his feeling...rishi was one thing sure if he looses everything n becum all alone thn there is sana to help him soothe him.

Rishi had bad terms wid his family who also lived in US...rishi cud not live with his family rules he wanted to live on his own style but his family doesnot allow him and decide to leave his family after they insulted him on his owm b'day party...he felt hurt and alone...thats wen sana adviced him to start his new lyf not here but in delhi...*it was nothing but destiny who did all this*

Rishi in chandani chowk walking aimlessly thn he heard a strange voice but friendly "jo hue be makan, radhe aaye uske kaam...jai matadi"

Rishi goes to him

Rishi-arre bhai madat kardo...mujhe ghar ya kamra chahiye kiraye pe...achi par sati bhi

Radhe-ek dum shai jagah pe aaye ho...*thinks a bit* arre barsati chalegi...ek janne wali hai use bhi kraydar chahiye...lekin 3 mahine ka advance aur deposit abhi dena hoga...thik hai toh bolo

Rishi-ha ha bhai chalegi...kab dekhne aao

Radhe ' bas abhi mein uske malkin se puch ke aap ko khabar karta hu..tab tak aap meri dukan pe raho ...(to chai wala) arre aslam miya in bhai sahab ko special chai pilana..khas dhyaan rakhiyo...sagge nahi lekin sagge se badkar hai...

*radhe goes off dailing a number*

Radhe cums after few minutes

Radhe- bhai aap sham ke 7 baje aajana aapko makanmalkin se milwa dunga aur aap barsati bhi dekh lenena..thik hai na

Rishi- ha ha koi baat nahi...bas

Radhe kaha hai tu mene bola na mein waqt ki badi paband hu...woh kiraydar kaha hai said indira in angry voice

Radhe- ha ha didi abhi laya...*cuts off da phone and calls rishi * arre bhai kaha ho yaha aajao...barsati ki malkin bula rahi hai...

Rishi- yahi hu bhai piche mud ke dekhlo*cuts off the phone*

Radhe- bade majakiya ho...ab chalo hitler bula rahi hai

Rishi-hitler...yeh kon... aaj mene subah bhi yehi suna kisi hitler ke bare mein... kon hai yeh..

Radhe- arre koi nahi...aapke makanmalkin ji ko hi hitler kehte hai.

Rishi- woh kyun

Radhe-woh aap khud hi jaan jaoge...

Rishi in confusion follows radhe

Radhe-yeh lo didi aapka kiraydar rishi aur rishi bhai yeh rahi aapki mmj

*radhe goes from there*

Indira-toh aap hai..jo mere barsati me rehne aaye hai...radhe ne aapko bata diya hoga kiray ke bare mein

Rishi- ji ha mein hu woh khus nasib jo aapke barsati mein rehne aaya hai...kafi suna hai aapke bare mein badi mashoor hai iss chandni chawk ki galiyo mein...

Indira- bakwas karni ki koi zarurat nahi hai...iss ghar ke kuch rules hai jo aapko manna padega...pehla toh kiray samay par, hum aapke khane ki zimmedari nahi uthayege bas subah ko chai milegi aur sab se zyada zaruri aap apne kaam se kaam rakhenge ghar ki personal bato me padne ki koi zarurat nahi

Rishi-ha ji bilkul nahi...aapka hokum sharakho par *winks*

Rishi follows indira to barsati..

Indira- yeh rahi barsati

Rishi-thik hai acha(hesitates) hai..

Indira- ma ma..bhabhi...mandira...bhaisaab kaha ho sab mujhe kuch baat karni hai...

Everyone cums in aagan

Ma- kya hai kyu apna gala phad rahi hai...

Indira-mene naya kiraydar rakha hai...

Bahisaab- ha toh kya Karen tune hum sab se aaj tak pucha nahi ab kyu puch rahi hai

Indira- mein aap sab se puch nahi rahi bata rahi hu...plzzz(folds hand) aap sab use dur rahiye ga...pichle bar ki tarah use bhi nahi bhaga dijiye ga

Bhaisab- woh khud hi bhaga tha...phattu tha saala

Indira- bhaisaab plzz mujhe paiso ki zarurat hai...aap toh kuch karoge nahi...mujhe hi karna padta hai..toh plzz iss baar aisa kuch na karna ki phir se mujhe naye kraydar ko khojna pade

Ma- ha ha tu hi toh sab karti hai jaise humne toh kuch kiya hi nahi...pata nahi kab tujhse picha chutega

Bhaisaab- ab kabhi nahi chutega...shadi toh isski hone se rahi...bas padi rahegi yaha humme tang karne ko...hitlergiri dikhati rahegi

(indira wid watery eyes listen all this but controls her tears...rishi frm up listen n sees everything and felt a soft corner for her)

destiny had taken its step already...indira didnot know tht yesterday was da day wen destiny decides to change her lyf...days passes by and rishi and indira got buzy in their work...indira followed same routine...and rishi went for search of job and finally got job in jadeja builders as manager.

There was always nok jhok of indu and rishi on not so imp.

Indira- aap kyu nahi samajhte ki mein aap ko yeh nahi karne de sakti...yeh ghar ke rules ke khilaf hai

Rishi- kya nahi karne de sakti bas ek choti si party toh karni hai mujhe appne frendz ke liye...aap ke paise nahi lagenge...waise bhi jab mein iss ghar mein aaya that oh aapne iss ke bare nehi kaha tha...jab bhi mein koi kaam karna chahta hut oh aapke yeh rules kaha se paida hojate hai...jab dekho yeh nahi karsakte woh nahi kar sakte...kab khtm hogi aapki hitlergiri

Indira shocked for 1st tym rishi said her hitler indirectly

Indira-kabhi nahi khtm hogi meri hiltler giri..aap jaiso ke liye toh bilkul nahi...jab dekho ajeeb ajeeb baton ki permission lene aajate ho...yeh aapka nahi mera ghar hai...aur yaha jo mein kahungi wohi hoga...party toh bilkul hi nahi...

Party!!! Wow kab kaha mein aasakti hu- mandira said

Indu- nahi koi party nahi ho rahi...mandira tu andarja yaha tu humari baatein sun rahi thi...andarja abhi ke abhi

Mandira goes close to rishi- aap party karne ko soch rahe ho...kafi acha idea hai waise bhi mein bore ho jayi thi...wow kitna exciting rahega *mandy holds hand of rishi*

Rishi smiling at her- ha ha bilkul app toh waise bhi invited hai lekin yaha hai koi jisse party karna bilkul acha nahi lagta

Indira- koi party nahi hogi bas *folds hand in hitler style*

Rishi- lekin mmj yeh toh newyear party hai...isse kyu mana kar rahi ho plzzz

Thn swweto ishaan's entry

Ishaan- bua plzz karne do na party waise bhi rishi bhaiya na kaha tha ki yeh party masti bahri hogi sirf inke ache dost honge aur hum bas bua plzzz

Indira says defeated- thik hai but aise koi harkat nahi hogi jiske wajah se mujhe party ko rokna pade

Rishi- ha thik hai mmj...aapko kisiko invite karna hai toh karlo mujhe koi prob nahi hogi koi aapka friend...boyyy...*rishi stops suddenly*

Indira n rishi didnot know tht this was the day wen there lyf is going to change

During party...everyone seems to enjoy but indu was sitting alone in her room missing sum1 special...thn her phone rings...

Indira- rahul..kaise ho thik ho...kaha ho tum...

Rahul- thik hu aur jaldi hi tere pass aaraha hu...kaisi ho indira...thik hona..aur ghar mein sab kaise hai

Indira- sab thik hai aaj kal pura 1 saal hojayega vidit bahiya ko juzre hue...tumhari bahut yaad aarahi hai...kab aaoge...

Rahul ' jaanta hu...mein bhi tumhe miss karta hu...aur rone ki koi zarurat nahi...mein hoona tera rahul tere pass aaraha hai..

Rahul is best friend of indira they were bestfren since childhood...after her vidit bhaiya he is only da man in her lyf who handles her cares her n understand her...everyone takes their relationship wrong but they know tht their frndship is da unique one...rahul is not only friend but he sumtimes act like her brother...he is everything for indira n rahul is sweet gur...who is loved by everyone but he loves his indu...his sister like indu

Indira cums down wiping her tears...rishi, his frendz n all where having fun thn suddenly indira bangs with one of da rishi's friend and tht idiot shouts on indu like hell

Kya yaar rishi kaise downmarket logo ke ghar mein rehta hai tujhe company walo ne ek flat diya toh phir iss gandi iss jagah mein kyu rehta hai..kitna ganda place hai aur yaha ke log aur gande hai...sabse badi wali toh yeh teri mmj hai..bina sir per ki chalti hai... kaha se log aajate hai...sahi kehta hai tu teri mmj hitler hai hitler said one of his friend

Rishi tried to stop his fren but it was too late...indira was literally shocked she didnot believe that rishi cud say all this to his co workers...she sumwhere belived rishi...felt sumthing diff. This made her all shattered...widout saying anything she went outside...she cudnot understand y she was feeling so hurt...iss se pehle bhi kafi logo ne use yeh sab kaha but aaj use kuch zyada hi bura laga...pehli baar uske aankhon se aansu gira...usne apne aansu haath se poche and she was surprised by seeing it

Indu thought- why this why i m feeling so bad b4 also many people said me all this but y today i m feeling so hurt specially wen i heard tht rishi also says me hitler...y i was thinking he understands me...after all he is also like rest of da kiraydars who came b4 him...

She sumwhere felt that rishi understands her somehow she started to believe on him

Indira was sobbing near the india gate sitting alone...it was almost 2 hrs since she left da house everyone was worried btu sabse zyada rishi was worried rishi felt guilty...becoz of him indira was hurt and for da 1st tym in 3 mnths he saw tears in hers eyes there was a sudden pain in his heart by seeing the tears in her eyes...

Rishi- mujhe unhe dundna hoga...meri wagah se unke annkhon me aansu...lanat hai mujhe pe...kaha ho mmj plzz aajao maaf kardo mujhe plzzz...

Suddenly he spotted a girl sitting near the india gate...he stops his bike n goes near the place

Rishi- makanmalkin ji...

Indira turns around...dont know y but she was expecting him to cum...she wanted him to cum

Indira- yaha kyu aaye ho meri bezzati karne baad aur kuch rahgaya tha kya...jao mujhe akela chod do

Rishi- m sorry...mujhe maaf kardijiye...plzzz...mera woh irada nahi tha..woh toh mere doston ne ke wajah se...*interrupted by indira*

Indira- kya doston ko apne aapse pata chal gaya ki mein hitler hu..woh toh aphi ne bataya tha

Indira stands up n goes to away but rishi catches her hand and pulls towards himself and hugs her tightly...this was da tym wen their lyf was going to change completely...

That hug told everything wat rishi wanted to say...

Rishi while hugging whispers in indu's ears- mera koi irada nahi tha aap ko hurt karne ka..i m sorry indira

Indira did rishi said indira...indu was totally shocked...she felt nice on hearing her name frm rishi's mouth...indu felt awkward on her thought..she quickly brushed her hought and released herslf from rishi's arms

Indu- mujhe har jana hai...

Rishi- ha ha chaliye akhir makanmalkin ho aap humari

Precap

Indira indira kaha ho yaar...mein aagaya...indira tum and hugs her and crys..and said mene tumhe kafi miss kiya...

I too missed u..

This is all seen by rishi

Edited by girl_rocks - 13 years ago

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