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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mithsi_22

wowww..its amazing and so romantic..loved it dear..waiting for the next one..thanx for the PM..😊




thnx n ur wlcm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow wow wow... its so romantic...wat can i say... only 1 thing, please continue... :) thanks yar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..really loved ur update..it is so romantic n i'm eagerly waiting for the nxt update..u really doing a great work..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome ff. Loved it.
Keep going... Waiting for ur next update.
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debo this is for u *surprise*...i know i m idiot
all the ghutas chappals tamatars eggs are most welcomed do comment i myself dont know wat i have written...i literally hopes u like it...

Part 5

This silence was broken by the horn...car was cuming in full speed, some spoil brats were drinkin and driving. Then suddenly that happened of which indu cud not think also. It took almost 5 mins to realize wat happened...she was lying on the floor , stood up and her eyes started searching him then she saw wat she never wanted to see...rishi was lying on the ground unconscious total motionless, blood was covering almost his whole body...indu wid out wasting tym she ran towards rishi took his head on her lap.

Indu- kiraydaarji, uthiye na... plzz uthiye... kya hogaya aapko...*she shouting* koi hai plzz help karo plzz help karo*she started to cry*plzz koi toh aao

She was almost broken, tears were continuously running from her eyes, shouting like mad for help..wiping blood from his face,tapping his face so that he wakes up but still he remains motionless

Indira 1st tym saw rishi in this state her heartbeat stopped for a sec she thought that he was...but brushed her thought n ran towards him...after putting his head on ground carefully, she stood up ran here n there for help but all went in vain...she cud see nothing n no one, feeling defeated she ran towards him put his head again on her lap n hugs him tightly from his shoulder and cried bitterly thn suddenly she saw a truck cuming towards them she ran n stood middle of the road ...truck stopped she begged the driver to help her , truck driver helped her to reach the hospital. Indira took rishi on stretcher and shouted doctor n in no tym rishi was in operation theatre. Indira was tensed it seems like she was loosing him with every sec...after sumtym nurse came

Nurse- yeh medicines hai aap ladijiye...waise aap patient ki kya lagti hai..

Indu- wo mein woh...

then nurse notices blood on indira's forehead

nurse*not letting indu to complete*- toh aap patient ki wife hai..thik hai toh aap yeh form bhardijiye, fees pay kardijiye aur yeh medicines ladijiye

indira signed the form widout thinkin anything...she started walking towards reception

indira- kaha se lao itne saare paise...

while walking she suddenly remembers the gold chain she was wearing...it was only the gift left given by vidit to her...this chain was very close to her but widout letting the second thought come she quickly went to nearby jewellery shop sold it, went hospital made all the payments, bought medicines..she then went to rishi's room, she sat near him took his hand and started rubbing smoothly...her tears were still cuming out...wat she can do she had no control over it

now rishi gained conscious but too tired to open his eyes n only wish to see his mmj after he opens his eyes...dunno y but he wished...he opened his eyes n yes his wish did cum true...he saw indira infront of him he was greatly relieved seeing indira fit n fine but he noticed indu's tears n tried to get up but was stopped by indu

indu- kya kar rahe aap...abhi aap ko aaram ki zarurat hai...plzz aap aaram kijiye mein doctor ko bulati hu...

indira goes n calls doc. He cums n examines rishi and said tht he is all right...hearing this indira gave relieved sign...rishi tries to get up again but b4 indira cud say anything rishi said that he wanted to sit

rishi- mein lete lete bore hogaya hu plzz mujhe bethna hai

indu 1st she denies but later agrees- thik hai but zyada der tak nahi

indu helped rishi to sit on bed and unknowingly cums closer to rishi...one of the strand of indu's hair was cuming on her face rishi gently tangles it on the back of her earn wipes her tears..

rishi- aap ko yeh aansu suit nahi karte...*smiles*

indira remembered wat happened just few hours ago...and she stepped backward..she was confused was she feeling embarrassed or she was blushing...it was late nite everyone was sleeping including rishi but indira sat beside his bed so that wenever he wants anything she will be there to give him...

indira thinks that y she was worried...y thought of loosing him made her frightened...this was not the first tym she felt in this 4 mnths but the difference was that this tym feeling was quite strong one...she was totally confused...she was attracted towards rishi like a magnet...she denied that sumthing was developing inside her she totally refused it...how can hitler have emotions?? But there was sumthing in rishi which made indira weak...

indira with random thoughts with her feelings slept unknowingly on rishi's hand...it was very fresh morning as if there was not trouble last nite... rishi opened his eyes with a new freshness and he saw the angel sleeping near his bed...he cudnot do anything but stare at her...she was luking very beautiful...

rishi too developed some feeling towards the indira...he knows this is not rite thing but he cudnot control any more he wanted to take her in his arm protect het thru out his life...rishi felt surprised on his thought...how cud he have feelings for sum1 who insults in him every next day...he knows indira is not hitler from inside...he understands her from the very beginning wen he heard convo between her family n her...he slowly take off his hand from under the indu's head widout waking her but she woke up...

indu- sorry woh kab aankh lag gayi pata hi nahi chala...ab aapki tabiyat kaisi hai..

rk- ab thik hai dard bhi nahi hai...

there cums the doc...he again examines rk and said that he is ready to get discharged but he need special care due to his injury in his head...

indu- aap uski chinta na kare...i will take care of him...ab inhe koi pareshani nahi hoge...*did she said that ki she will take care of him...*

indira again forced to think wat she said rite now but interruoted by doc.

doc- rishi aap kafi lucky hai jo aapko itni achi wife mili

rishi- ji...wife lekin...

before rishi cud complete his sentenced doc goes off...rishi gave indu weird look..

indu- woh nurse ne galti se humme couple samajh liya

rishi and indira reached home and was welcomed my indu's mom tana

ma-aagayi kaha thi raat bhar...kidhar muh kala karke aayi hai

bhaisaab- yeh jo kare sab sahi aur mein jo karu sab galat...yaad rakhiyo indira...tu ek ladki hai aur ladki ka raat bhar ghar se bhahar rehna achi baat nahi

indu- toh aap log mujhe sikhaoge ki kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi...aur bhaisaab aapko ghar ki izzat ki itni fikr hai toh jake kaam dundo kyu nikammo ki tarah behen ki kamai pe aish kar rahe ho...aur ma kya bakwas kiye jarahi ho mein hospital mein thi...kiraydar ko chot lagi hai ...plz ab aap use zyada tang na kijiyega...

indira takes rishi to the barsati and tries to make rishi lay down on the bed but her leg slipped and disbalances her and next thing was that she was on top of rishi accidently kissed him on cheek and rishi was holding her from her waist n they were again lost in each other eyes*it was like their daily routine to be lost in eachother eyes*

rishi- mmj mein jaanta hu ki mein hansome hu, smart hu lekin iska yeh matlab nahi ki aap meri biamari ka faida utha sake.*.winks at her*

indira realized wat has happened quickly free herself and started to go but rishi stopped her by holding her hand

rishi came close to her ear- m sorry mmj really sorry jo kuch bhi hua kal raat i m srry...plzzz aap mujhe galat na samjhiyega...

both remembered wat happened in the rain

indu- thik hai... woh sab mujhe ab nahi yaad karna... ab aap aaram kijiye

rishi again stopped her said in very naughty voice

rishi- agar chot khani ki itni khubsoorat saza milegi toh mein roz chot khane ko taiyyar hu...*winks looking at indu*

indu sees rishi n gives grrr luk to him n goes frm there

rishi- haye re is ladki mein zarur koi baat hai jo mein is ke taraf khiche chala jata hu...*smiles*

this was the tym wen they were falling for each other but cudnot except...wat will make them realize that they need eachother thn any thing else in this world...koi hain jo inhe samjhaye dilaye...???

indira indira kaha ho yaar...itne dino baad aaya hu kaya mujhse nahi milogi...indira- said a voice

indira cums from her room sees the guy standing infront of her...indira cudnot stop herself just ran n hugged him tightly...

indu- kaha the tum ek baar bhi meri yaad nahi aayi...mujhe tumhari kitni yaad aarahi thi...ab mein tumhe wapas nahi jane dungi...

this is all seen by rishi...he heard the voice n came out of his room to check out who this man was but was surprised to see that indira hugged her...rishi was feeling jealous...a kind of anger travelled thru out his body

rishi- yeh kon Bandar aagaya aur iski himmat kaise hui mmj ko hug karne ki shakal dekhi hai kabhi mirror mein...bandar dikhta hai bilkul Bandar...grrr

indu-rahul tum kab aaye india...aur meri achanak yaad kaise aayi...*smiles*

rahul- arre yaar bas ainvayi aagaya new year eve ko tum kafi sad lag rahi thi..toh mein aagaya waise bhi tumhe dekhe saal bith gaye...*again hugs her*

indu- mujhe laga tum aise hi bol rahe the phone pe...i really missed u

rahul- me too

both smile looking at each other...it was only rahul in this whole world that made indu smile... after vidit's death he was the one who supported her...encouraged her to do work...

this is all seen by rishi

rishi in his mind- saale ne mmj ko phir hug kiya...aur yeh mmj ko ho kya gya hai...usse itni muskurake kyu baat kar rahi hai...mene itne saare joke mare hai but woh toh nahi muskurayi aur yeh langur aate hi muskuradiya...kahi yeh inka pati...nahi nahi rishi kya soch raha hai...mmj shadi shuda nahi hosakti...pata lagana padega ki yeh launda kon hai...

then indu notices rishi standing in balcony

indu- aap bahar kyu aaye jayiye andar...kitni bar kaha hai ki aap ko aaram ki zarurat hai

when rishi turns to go thn his head started hurting

rishi- ouch..

indu-kya hua *goes runnig upwards n holds him * aap kyu nahi meri baat mante kabhi toh maan lijiye agar aap ko kuch hogaya toh kabhi socha hai ki mera...

indira stopped suddenly realized wat she said now...rishi also looked at her he was smiling...he felt very gud on seeing this his mmj cared abt him..

indu- kya hua has kyu rahe ho...mene koi joke kaha hai kya..

rishi*lowers his eyes*- nahi nahi kuch nahi...

this all seen by rahul and he gave a big grin...he understood wat was goin on he understood that indira felt sumthing for rishi...but she needed to realize that...he was damn happy...aur kyu na ho aakhir kar indu ki zindagi badal ne wali thi...

rahul- indira yeh kon hai

indira- yeh mera kiraydar hai...*towards rishi* kiraydar ji yeh rahul hai mera sabse acha dost

rahul- hi rishi...yeh chot kaise lagi..

rishi- hello rahul...yeh chot bas kuch nahi thoda sa accident hua...fikr ki koi baat nahi ab sab thik hai...

rishi thinks that- thik kyu na hogi meri mmj ne itne ache se mera khyal rakha thik toh hona hi tha

both rahul n indira goes down rishi is left alone in the barsati

rishi was lost in his thought- yeh langur mmj ka sabse acha dost hai...i wonder sirf dost hi ho aur kuch nahi...nahi toh mein isko...ek min rishi tu yeh sab kyu soch raha hai yeh sirf dost hi hai agar koi aur bhi ho toh mujhe koi farak nahi padhna chahiye...aur tujhe itni jalan kyu ho rahi hai...uff...pata nahi kya hota jar aha hai mujhe...

with his weird thought rishi was asleep...next morning

indu- bhabhi naashta do office ke liye late ho raha hai...arre rahul uth gaye gud morning

rahul- gud morning...office ja rahi ho..

indu – ha kuch kaam hai

rahul woh mujhe shopping karna tha...kab free ho

indu- sham ko chale 5 baje tab tak mein free hojaogi

rahul- cool...i will cum to pick up you...

rahul goes and rishi's entry

rishi- gud morning mmj...

indira- gudmorning...ab aap ki tabiyat kaisi hai..

rishi- thik hai mein soch raha tha ki doc ke pass ho aao unhone ne bulaya tha...ummm...ummm...aap mere saath chalengi..

indu- sorry woh aaj mera aur rahul ka bahar jaane ka program hai...aap kyu na bhaisaab ko lejaye...

rishi- kaha jarahe ho koi imp. Kaam hai...nahi baba bhaisaab ko rahne do mein khud hi chala jaunga

indu- nahi bas shopping...ko prob hai toh ruk jao

rishi wanted to say to stay but instead he said

rishi- na koi prob nahi..

indu goes to office...n rishi thinks that

rishi-us langur ke saath shopping aur mene us din apne saath bahar chalne ko kya kehdiya...aisa data ki bas puchona...grrr mmj mere saath aisa kyu kar rahi hai

rahul enter n greets rishi...*now u can imagine rishi's face* rishi gave a weird look to him n went...rahul cudnot understand y he had done this...but i guess rahul did understand

in evening indu n rahul went shopping together n rishi was restless...walikn here n there thinking wat wre they doing...n decides to go after indu..as he was abt u leave he stopped coz he don't want indu think some wrong thing abt him...he again went to room...wen indu n rishi came rishi ran towards her and asked almost most weirdest question

rishi-mmj isne aapke saath kuch galat toh nahi kiya...thik toh hai na aap

indu- kiraydar ji aap thik toh ho kya bakwas kar rahe ho

rishi- woh mera matlab aap thak gayi hogi na aap aaram karlo

indira went frm there almost confused on rishi's behaviour

rahul- dude chill indira thik hai...y are u worrying...waise u agree na she is hot...i enjoyed alot with her

rishi was burning with anger he caught rahul's collar

rishi- dobara mmj ke bare mein kuch bola toh tujhe khada hone layak nahi chodunga...samajh mein aaya ab na tu mmj se sau feet ke duri mein rahega

indira cums n see all this

indu- kiraydar ji yeh kya kar rahe ho chodo use...aap kon hote ho iska collar pakad ne wale...chodo..kiraydarji

rishi leaves his collar but still angry

rishi- aap nahi janti yeh aapke bare mein kya bol raha tha..aur aap isse apna dost manti hai..kahi aisa toh nahi yeh aapka...

indu*shouts*- kiraydar ji aap apne had mein rahiye...chalo rahul yaha se chalo lagta hai kiraydar ji ke dimag kuch zyada gehra chot laga hai...

while going rahul smiles at rishi...in a mysterious way

i was very nervoust while posting this...plzz tell how u liked...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW !!!!!!!!! i luvd it yar 👏...superb update...👏

in dis situation dis song fits d most..." ho gya h tujh ko to pyar sajna...

laakh kar le tu inkaar sajna... haan ye hai pyaar sajna..."😳 ❤️ 😍

i luvd jealous rishi 😳... kaash HD me bhi isa dikhaya hota... 😍

plzzz contd soon 😊... thank u very much 4 d PM dear...😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow
G8, keep rocking 👍🏼
I don't no how I miss this thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aisha.damor

WOW !!!!!!!!! i luvd it yar 👏...superb update...👏


in dis situation dis song fits d most..." ho gya h tujh ko to pyar sajna...

laakh kar le tu inkaar sajna... haan ye hai pyaar sajna..."😳 ❤️ 😍

i luvd jealous rishi 😳... kaash HD me bhi isa dikhaya hota... 😍

plzzz contd soon 😊... thank u very much 4 d PM dear...😊




thank u so much n yes this songs suits on this scene...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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All the parts are awesome.. Just loved them.. Great job.. Plz PM me the updates if possible..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it..looking out for the next update..u doing great..😉

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