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Posted: 13 years ago
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lo marlo mujhe jitana marna hai...i wanted sumthing else but kuch aur ho hogaya...i was not feeling well.. so cud not concerntrate...

part -6

thats wat rahul was expecting...rahul expected reaction of rishi on his words and yes rishi did response...now rahul was confirm that they were in love yes there were in love...rahul was very happy infact happiest person on this earth but one problem they were still unknown that they were in love...it would be easy making rishi confess but indira...no way she in her life will not confess that she is in love...it was not the first tym, after that rahul did many things to irritate rishi like going close to indira, wenever rishi was near indu he interrupted but day by day rahul's surerity was increasing and it was a week wen rahul had confirmed himself that there was no doubt that rishi was in love with indira but is indira also in love...rahul was not sure from indu's side although he is on verge to confirm that indu loving rishi but still he was not that sure as he was on rishi's case he did notice the concern for rishi in indu's eyes but he needed some solid thing to make sure that indu also loves rishi...

it had been a week indu had not talked to rishi properly rishi apolized many tyms but all went in vain...he cudnot sleep frm that very nite...he was angry as well as guilty...angry coz indu shouted on him just becoz of that guy and guilt coz he unknowingly or knowingly hurted his mmj

rishi*trying to sleep*-yaar mujhe gussa kyu aaraha hai mmj uske saath jana chahti hai toh jaye...mujhe koi prob nahi honi chaiye but kyu mujhe acha nahi lagta jab bhi woh use baat karti hai ya phir uske saath hoti hai...

rishi was totally disturbed...he desparately needed to talk to some one and he knew who wud be available for him 24*7..he called her

rishi- sana kaisi ho...

sana- thik hu rishi...tum batao yaar 4 mnths hogaye ab toh tum settle ho gaye hoge na...rishi sab thik toh hai na*sounding concerned*

rishi- ha bas woh kuch din pehle accident...damn apna bada muh kholna zaruri tha rishi...duffer ab jhel sawaalon ki dukan ko

sana- kaisa acc. Tum thik hona ...koi serious prob nahi hai...kab hua acc. Tumne mujhe batana zaruri nahi samjaha india jate hi mujhe bhul gaye...rishi tum kyu nahi bolte kuch...rishi mera dil bethe ja raha hai bolna chuppi kyu sadh rakhi hai

rishi- ooffo kitna sawal karti ho...mein thik hu bas chota sa acc. Tha... ab thik hu meri mmj ne mera kafi ache se khyal rakha...tu chinta na kar...sab thik hai...

sana- chal thik hai mein india aarahi hu...jabtak tujhe apne aankhon se na dekhlu mein chain(peace) se nahi rehsakti..aur teri mmj se toh zarur milungi..

sana cuts off

rishi- sana sun...dhat teri ab use bhi pareshan kardiya...tujhe sab ko pareshan karne mein maza aata hai kya rishi...ab woh india aayegi...ha woh india aayegi ab sab thik hojayega...*a hope arised in his heart*

rishi thinking that ki everything will be alright after the arrival of sana n sleeps...

next morning as usual rahul was irritating rishi...and ovsly rahul was enjoying it...rishi again tried to say sorry to indira but failed like wise 2 days were also spent...after 2 days wen everyone was having breakfast there was a voice

rishi...rishi...kaha ho tum- said sana

rishi-*came out of his room*- sana tum...yaar kyu aayi mein thik tha na...tumhe taklif uthane ki koi zarurat nahi thi...

sana- chup ek dum chup...shayad mein abhi bhi tumse naraz hu apne acc. Ki baat chupane ke liye...niche aao

rishi- lo aagaya ab maaf kardo plzzz.*holds ears*

sana goes towards rishi n hus him tighly...

sana- rishi i really missed u...

rishi- i missed u too

it was all seen by indira...and indira was shocked wat was goin on...a girl came from nowhere n hugged rishi..now that was not acceptable by her...

indira- kiraydar ji...yeh kon hai

rishi- arre srry mmj yeh sana hai...meri sab se achi dost...aur sana yeh mmj hai..

sana –hi mmj

rishi- oh srry inka naam indira hai indira Sharma aur yeh rahul inka dost

rishi also introduced sana with rest of the family...at that very moment rahul noticed indu's face...and he was happy...

rahul thought- rishi feels jealous wen i am near indira...wat abt indu will she feel jealous wen sana will be wid rishi...i need to find out...waise sana is cute, beautiful...

rishi- chal sana mein tujhe apne kamre mein le chalta hu..

indira*stopping them*- ek min kiraydar ji kya yeh aapke saath rahegi...

rishi- ha kyu koi prob hai...

indu- ha hai mera ghar koi dharamshala nahi hai...upar se aur koi kamra nahi hai iske liye...toh yeh kaha rahegi...

rishi- mere saath

indu- kya????

Rishi- mera matlab aapke saath...chinta nahi kijiye mein iska bhi kiraya de dunga...thik hai ab khus

Indu- mera woh matlab nahi tha...kher chodiye...thik hai yeh rehsakti hai..

Rishi- badiya*to sana * chalo ab tum aaram karlo mein tumse baad mein baat karta hu

Everyone present there were going to their respective then suddenly rishi caught his head and he was feeling dizzy...it was like whole world is just spinning...there is harsh bang on his head...meanwhile wen indu turned to say sumthing she saw rishi trembling...indu ran towards rishi

Indu- kiraydar ji...kya hua aap baithiye...kya hua aapko..pani lao koi...

B4 any1 cud cum in action indu herself ran n bought water...she started soothing back of rishi...

Indu- kya hua tha aapko

Rishi*gaining his breath*- kuch nahi bas sar bhari ho raha tha

Indu- aapne medicine li..*rishi ignoring indu's ques.* kiraydar ji aapne medicines li ki nahi...

Rishi- woh mein...aaj subah ki nahi li..

Indu- raat ki

Rishi-umm...ummm...nahi li

Indu- kya..nahi li..mujhe pehle hi samajh jana chahiye tha ki aap pe bharaosa karna ek dum useless hai...ab chaliye mere saath doc. Ko dikhane..

Rishi- lekin is ski kya zarurat hai...mein chala jaunga...waise bhi aapko office ke liye deri hojayegi...

Sana- ha indira mein rishi ke saath chalti hu...tum takliff na uthao...tum office jao...mein hu na

Indira- but aapko toh doctor ke bare mein kuch nahi pata...aap kaise sambhalengi...aap mujhe hi jaane dijiye...

Rishi- sana thik keh rahi hai...aap jao...

Indira- lekin...thik hai mein jaati hu...lekin doc. Ko dikhane ke baad full araam aur medicines bhi lelena...

Rishi- ha baba ab jao...chalo sana

Indira wid her confused mind goes to her office,rahul too went out wid indira n rishi toh jal bhun ke khak hogaya tha...rishi continuosly staring at indira going wid rahul

Sana- kya hua aisa kya dekh rahe ho unhe...waise dono ache lagte hai ek saath..

Rishi- ache...pagal ho kya...kaha meri mmj itni achi aur kaha woh Bandar...woh toh mmj ke saath khade hone ke bhi layek nahi hai...

Sana- acha baba thik hai...tum itna kyu bhadak rahe ho...ab chalo doctor ke pass..

Rishi- nahi woh mein aisehi...

Rishi n sana goes to doctor ..after doctor examines him they went from there...but not Sharma niwas they went to a nearby shopping mall...wen rishi n sana were just roaming here n there rishi spotted indira...b4 he cud call indira he saw rahul cuming ...rishi was again annoyed but confused..wwat were they doing there...same thing was noticed by indira..

Indira*thinking*- inhe hospital mein hona chahiye...lekin yeh log yaha kya kar rahe hai...

Rahul called indira and she went...seeing this rishi was not willing to stay there for a sec so he decided to go from there

Rishi- yaar sana mujhe jaana hai...meri tabiyat kuch thik nahi lagrahi...

Sana- par...kher chodo...thik as u wish

i know its a short update but abhi ke liye itna hi...promise next will be more interesting n longer one

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
nice update dear...😊

jealous rishi kitna cute lagega...HD me bhi isa dikhate to kitna accha hota...any ways...😳

thanks 4 d PM dear...😊

plzz contd soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesomw update dear..waiting for more..
thanx for the PM..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting update..eagerly waiting for the next scene..love the progress of the story..great work once again..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
Nice update.😊 .If its possible can u send me a pm of ur ff updates...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ff...continue soon.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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note: here i have used AMC hospital this hospital i dont think is in delhi it is in my place...as i dont know any hospital there except AIIMS so i wrote my place's hospital name
part 7

Sana and rishi reached home...rishi just threw the bags he was carrying...he was furious on indu but why? He too didn't know...all he knew that he was furious

Sana- rishi kya hua...tum itna gussa kyu ho rahe hi...rishi tumhari tabiyat thik nahi lag rahi hai...rishi plzz aaram karo

Rishi didn't hear single word of sana and there indira was also annoyed...she cudnot understand why rishi was in mall instead of going to doc.

Indira- rahul tumne dekha na rishi aur sana ko...woh dono yaha kya kar rahe hai...rishi ki tabiyat thik nahi hai aur woh yaha ghumne aaya hai...woh pagal hai kya...aur uski dost...kaisi dost hai jo apne bimar dost ko ghumane layi hai...rishi ki tabiyat thik nahi lag rahi thi...kahi use kuch hona jaye...mujhe jana hoga...suna rahul mujhe jana hai

Rahul- ha indira...chalte hai...aur rishi ko kuch nahi hua hoga...woh shayad kuch kaam se aaya hoga...

Indira kuch bhi ho...mujhe jana hai

After reaching indu called out rishi and goes up running and saw rishi hugging sana...1st she felt bad but widout caring she entered the barsati

Indira- aap thik toh ho

Rishi- ha thik hu aur aapko fikr karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai...aap ko apni shopping chod ke nahi aana chahiye tha...hai na mmj

Indira- yeh kya keh rahe hai aap aur yeh baat mein puchu toh...aap ko doc ke pass hona chahiye tha par aap mall gaye

Rishi- mein doc ke pass gaya tha...uske baad mein mall gaya tha woh bhi sana ke kehne par, usse kuch chahiye tha

Indira- doc ne kya kaha?

Rishi- kyu aap ko kyu janna hai...waise bhi aap ko tym waste ho jayega...mein aapna khyal khud rakh sakta hu...aap ko fikr karne ki koi zarurat nahi...aapne dost ke saath ghumiye...mere wajah se aap log aapna private tym ko kill mat kijiye

Indira- yeh kya bakwas kiye rahe ho

Rishi- kyu bura laga...oh sorry...aakhir koi apne aashiq ke bare mein kuch bura kaise sun sakta hai...sahi kaha na mene mmj

Indira*almost in tears*- aap galat soch rahe ho

Rishi- mein galat soch raha hu...kya galat soch raha hu yehi ki aap aapne premi ya phir bf ke saath ghumti ho yehi na... mene aapko kya samjah aur aap kya nikli...office ke bahane ghumne chaligayi...mene toh socha ki indira ek aisi ladki hai jo akele iss duniya se ladti ahi...independent women ki missal kayam kar rahi hai...beti hoke beta ka farz nibha rahi hai...lekin mujhe kya pata ki aap auro ki tarah ho...mujhe laga aap sabse alag ho...sabse alag...mujhe kafi afsos tha ki aapne apne zindagi mein bahut saare dukh dekhe hai iske wajah se aap khusiyo ka matlab bhul gayi ho...lekin rahul ke aane ke baad...ek din bhi aisa nahi gaya ki aap haase nahi ho...apko pata hai mein aapko hasana chahta tha...aapki zinadagi mein khusiya lana chahata tha...lekin mujhe toh lagata hai yeh sab natak tha sirf natak...taki aap apne premi ke saath befikr hoke ghum sake...mein sahi keh raha hu na mmj

Rahul and sana tried to stop him but he continued widout thinking anything wat he was saying, wat wud be the effect on indira...he just went on n on...then suddenly indira responded to rishi...

Rishi cudnot believe his mmj cud do this...indira slapped him...she SLAPPED rishi...she was crying, she ran from there...she too cudnot believe that rishi cud say all this...she believed rihi understands her,knows her but it was all fake...

Indira cudnot tolerate all this she ran from there away from rishi n his words which were stabbing her...rahul went behind her giving look to rishi IF SUMTING HAPPENS TO HER THN I WILL KILL YOU and leaves...sana was too furious at rishi

Sana- WTH...rishi yeh sab kya tha...bolne keh pehle kuch toh socha hota...kya biti hogi indiraji pe...kuch toh khyal kiya hota...rishi tumne apni mmj ko galat samjha aur mujhe laga kit um unhe sabse ache se samajh te ho...tumne unke aur rahul ke dosti ko galat samjha...unke dosti pe sawal uthaya...rishi look at me...rishi tumhe andaza hai tumne kya kiya hai...u idiot...agar koi aisehi humare dosti pe sawal kare toh tum uske data tod dete the aur aaj tumhi...i was not expecting this from u...SHE REALLY CARED FOR U...SHE REALLY DID

Sana went from there...on hearing all this rishi realized he was total dumbo...he has knowingly hurted his mmj...n now infront of him his mmj cried...now rishi was being mad he wanted to kill himself for all this...he didnot want to say all this but he cudnot see indu with other guy...dont know why but he cudnot control and outburst his anger on her...he knew he shud not have done this but it was too late...

Sana was rite rishi wud break their head wo used to doubt on their friendship and it was rishi who did da same in case of indu and rahul...rishi was CRYING and yes he was crying for the 1st tym in his lyf...sad face of indu was cuming infront of him he cudnot tolerate it his head was aching...tears of indu was tearing his heart...

Till then sana came and she was literally shocked...rishi was crying...nothing made him cry...not even then wen his own familr ignored him insulted him but today he was crying and sana knew why he cried...

She had noticed rishi from past few days ...he had been behaving very stange specially wen it was abt indira...she then talked to rahul and rahul said about rishi and indira strange behaviour...he said that rishi was in loe...rahul confirmed that rishi was in love but today indira's reaction too proved she was in love...

indira never cared wat others thought abt her n rahul friendship but she did care abt rishi's thinking abt rishi's thought and it did matter her so she reacted this way

sana had doubt abt rahul's conclusion of rishi n indira being in love but her doubt was cleared...sana went near rishi and consoled him

sana- koi baat nahi...hojata hai...raat ko indira ji aayengi toh maafi mang lena mujhe vishwas hai woh tumhe maaf kardengi...ab chuo ho jao...

rishi- woh mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karengi ...ab toh woh meri taraf dekhengi bhi nahi...mein anhi sehskata unki nafrat...mujhe meri indira chahiye

then suddenly there was harsh pain in rishi's head but he ignored...rishi's headache was increasing every minute and it was unbearable...rishi held his head sat on bed...he screamed

sana- kya hua rishi...

rishi was not on his sense...his head was bursting...he felt like there was continuos bang on his head...aisa ki koi uske sar pe kissi cheez se mar raha ho...bloode started to come out from his wound and dekhte dekhte blood flow became fast...blood was all over his face...rishi tried to stand but...

sana- rishi*screaming and crying* rishi utho plzz

rishi lay unconscious on the floor...sana called ambulance and while goin to hos she called indira but she didnot responded so she called rahul

sana- rahul...rahul...rishi*started crying*

rahul- sna kya hua kyu ro rahi ho...aur rishi ko kya hua

on hearing rishi indira snatched phone

indira- sana kya hua rishi ko...ro mat, bolo na kya hua...

sana- bas tumlog AMC hospital aajao...plzzz rishi ki halat thik nahi hai...

indira ne jaise taise khud ko smabhala tha lekin after hearing sana she again broke down and immediately ran from there crying

rahul- indira kaha ja rahi ho..aise bhag ke jaogi...pagal ho kya

indira- rahul woh rishi...rishi ki halat thik nahi hai...usse kuch hogaya toh mera kya hoga...plzzz mujeh uske pass le chalo...plzzz usse meri zarurat hai...

indu hugged rahul and rahul consoled her...rahul noticed today indu instead of calling kiraydar ji she called rishi...she called kiraydar with his name...

rahul- kuch nahi hoga TERE rishi ko...kuch nahi hoga

rahul call taxi and theyreached AMC hospital...while rahul was giving taxi fare...indira ran inside..inquired abt rishi...receptionist said that rishi was in ICU...on hearing this indu almost broke but gather the courage and went towards ICU...rahul also cums after indu...sana sees both of them..she ran n hugged rahul and started crying. Rahul consoled sana...indira went straight inside the icu but doc said her to remain outside...she argued but rahul took her out...indira looked through the window..rishi was lying motionless with all wires on his body...indu stared crying...she blamed herself

indira- sab meri wajah se hua hai...kash mein waha se nahi jati toh yeh sab nahi hota...mujhe samajh na chahiye tha rishi bimar tha par mein*started crying*sana looked rahul and rahul gave her assurance look

sana- isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai sab naseeb ka khel hai..

indira- nahi...isse pehle bhi mene rishi ko almost kho diya tha but ab nahi seh paungi...mujhe mera rishi chahiye...mujhe mera rishi chaiye..m sorry rishi plzz wapas aajao...rishi...*crying*

sana and rahul looked eachother and smiled

Edited by girl_rocks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
awesome update..just loved it to the core..i hope we get a romantic update next time for InShi reunion..😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏👏


looking foreword for next 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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a very emotional scene well written..juz loved it..cant express with words..waiting for the next update..😉

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