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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear...😊
plzzz contd soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love reading your updates. Cant wait for the next one. Could u pm me' when u write it please. Don't want to miss any updates !!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nosh25

Love reading your updates. Cant wait for the next one. Could u pm me' when u write it please. Don't want to miss any updates !!


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yeah sure will pm u...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: emymichael

cool.. very nice dear :)


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ushali

Nice update 👏. wish it could have been a much longer update...😍 ...Anywayz thanks for taking ur precious time and writting it...


thank you
well i was tired of typing so made it short but surely will make it longer next time
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Cyn-

very nice 👏 👏 👏

Waiting for next 😍


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Originally posted by: sscrazyfan

beautiful imagination.lage raho👍🏼


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Originally posted by: simplelife

Wow.😍.Its awesome.👏
waiting for next update.


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aisha.damor

nice update dear...😊

plzzz contd soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part-13

Rishi still shocked cudnot believe what his ears heard right now...he knew this was not a dream but reality nd he was very happy...this was not a dream...he was flying in the air...indira did say him those three magical words...

Indira- I LOVE YOU RISHI

Rishi*giving mischivious smile*- kya kaha aapne...mujhe kuch sunai nahi diya..thoda jor se boliye

Indira- acha! Apke Kanpur mein hadtal hai kya...ek lagau kya*indira raised her hand*

Rishi-wah ji wah ek toh pyaar karo upar se dhamkiyan bhi suno...bhalai ka toh jamana hi nahi raha...waise indira aapko aur kuch bhi puchna hai ya batana hai...

Indira- nahi kuch nahi...kyu kuch puchna tha ya batana tha kya??

Rishi*disappointed*-nahi kuch nahi..chalo raat kafi hogayi hai aur sab yeh shocking newz bhi toh dena hai..chalo chalein

Indira- nahi rukiye.. woh mein aur bhi kuch kehna chahti thi actually puchna chahti thi

Rishi- kya* asked very innocently as if he didn't know wat indira wanted to say*

Indira- yehi ki...

Rishi*mischiviously*- ki...

Indira*extremely nervous*- wohna mein yeh kehna nahi puchna chahti thi ki

Rishi- ki...aage boliye na der ho rahi hai...jaldi boliye...uff kuch toh boliye

Indira *almost irritated with rishi's question*-ki aap mujhse shadi karenge

Indira stared in rishi's eyes nd rishi was hell shocked...

How can a guy not be in shock when the girl whom he loved with all his heart...whom he loved more than his life proposed him for marriage that too in a weirdest way by holding his shirt's collar and giving him look that "if you said no i gonna kill you"

Rishi- yeh aap mujhse puch rahi hai ki bata rahi hai...waise bhi collar chodengi tabhi na kuch bolunga

Hearing the world's most unique confession he somehow managed to speak...nd hearing this indira became angry nd instead of leaving his collar she held his collar more firmly and said

Indira- abhi aur aise hi bolo...aur clear kar dun yeh mene aap se pucha nahi hai infact bataya hai

Rishi- bhartiya nari apne hone wale pati ka collar pakde yeh unhe sobha nahi deta...

Tears rolling from both of their's eyes...hugged each other they wanted this moment never to end...this was dream coming true...rishi was damn happy. He released his collar from her hand and hugged her, wished this moment to stop here. Inside his heart he thanked god for giving this beautiful gift, his life, his love, his indira and ofcourse HIS HITLER.

Rishi and indira together walked towards SN, indira was tired and feeling sleepy

Indira- mein thak gayi hu...hum kab ghar pahuchenge

Rishi- bas thodi der mein agar hume taxi miljaye

Indira*hitting his arm*-sab tumhari wajah se we are here

Rishi- ab mene kya kiya

Indira- kya kiya!!! Agar aap apne office wale ghar se uss deserted place mein nahi gaye hote toh abhi hum ghar pe hote...

Rishi- wah ji ek toh mujhe gussa hona chahiye toh aap ho rahi ho...waise bhi mene kaha tha Jhansi ki rani banne ko aur akele aane ko, rahul ke saath bhi toh aasakti thi

Indira- woh mein...

While they were discussing no actually having a cute fight they heard the car horn from back...rishi saw it and and called it

Rishi- yeh lo taxi aagayi ab baitho

Indira- thik hai

While there were in the cab indira held rishi's hand and rest her head on rishi's shoulder remembering the moments she had few minutes before

Indira- do you love me

Rishi*mischieviously*- kyu kuch ghanto pehle trailer nahi dekha kya...bhul gayi phirse dhikhao

Indira- plz reishi m serious

Rishi- yeh kaisa sawal hai indira ofcourse i love you..u r my life, i want to spend whole of life with u, mein aapke khushi aur gham dono mein aapka saath dena chahta hu...mein aapke saath apni choti choti khusiyan batna chahta hu...aapko hasta hua dekhna chahta hu...mein aapko pyaar karna chahta hu...i can give mah life for you khali yeh janam mein nahi balki agle 6 janam mein aapke saath rehna chahta hu...aapke saath rona aur hasna chahta hu aur toh aur aapke saath humare bache ko bada hote dekhna chahtu...indira i love you...i really do nd i will always be there for u

Hearing those indira had no words just tears were rolling down and those tears said wat indira want to say...she just hugged him and whispered in his ears

Indira- i love you too rishi...i don't have such fantasy words to tell you but i just know one thing that i love you and will always love, in any circumstances i just wanna be with you

Rest of the journey went in silence...finally they reached home where sana and rahul were impatiently waiting for them...indira and rishi entered. Rahul and sana saw smile in their faces and understood everything so they didnot ask anything...all four were happy...their life was perfectly goin on...

After one week

Rahul- kaha hai yaar tu kab aayega kitna sara kaam padha hai aur tu hai ki gayab hai...jaldi aa rishi

Rishi- ha ha aaraha hu mein konsa bahar masti karne gaya tha kaam hi toh karne gaya tha...

Rahul- jis kaam ke liye gaya tha hogaya

Rishi- ha hogaya...invitations dediye, decoration walon ko bol diya aur pandit ji ko bhi phone kardiya

Rahul- thik hai ab jaldi se ghar aaja...

Rishi- yaar sun ek baat bolu...yaar mujhe toh abhi bhi yakeen nahi horaha ki humari shadi horahi hai...meri aur indira ki aur teri aur sana ki...

Rahul- ha yeh baat toh hai kal tak jis insaan se hum anjan the aaj ussi ke saath life bitane ki taiyariyan kar rahe...

After their confession rahul nd sana to confessed their love for eachtother in this week and now all four best buddies were getting married it was like dream come true and yes it was actually dream cum true

The day aarived when rishi with indira and rahul with sana were getting married. This was the day indira dreamt of and now it came into reality...she was actually going to tie a knot with her love of life, her rishi. The last sentence of panditji seemed like boon to their life "ab aap pati patni ke bandhan mein bandh chuke hai"marriage was over, her beautiful evening came to an end...now they entered in the new journey of their life but not as kiraydar ji and makanmalkin ji but as husband nd wife...now indira was not just simply indira but she was MRS INDIRA RISHI KUMAR.

Flash back ended

"Sir, excuse me sir" the staff of his office called him

Rishi- yes

Staff- sir this is da file boss gave, you have to sign it

Rishi- yaha rakhdo mein dekhlunga

Staff went and rishi turned towards the photo, it was the photo of their marriage as the bride and bridegroom...seeing the photo rishi smiled

Rishi- happy anniversary aaj hi ke din hum ek hogaye the mrs indira

Phone bells rings

Rishi- hello rahul kaisa hai

Rahul – thik hu

Rishi- sab taiyari hogayi na

rahul- ha ji sab hogaya bas ek cheez reh gaya

rishi- kya

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