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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the awesome update.waiting eagerly for the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
eewonderful update keep writing. i,m new to dis forum read all ur updates ll were awesome😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: baspa

eewonderful update keep writing. i,m new to dis forum read all ur updates ll were awesome😊


first of all a grand welcome to you...
thankyou somuch...
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Posted: 13 years ago

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u wroye a sexiest post man...


hehehe thankyou so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just awesome.
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update...
plzzz contd soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi,must say,it is the most beautiful way of bringing Rishi and Indira together,and I really hope the writer,as well as the CVs read your updates and learn how to maintain the integrity of characters and smoothly move the story forward.You know at present,we'll need a release from this constant anxiety and fear,which 'HD' is making us go through.And add more to this state,the writer has absolutely messed up the story.I believe its only our imagination that is going to take us out of this state, and thanks to you for that.
Keep up the good work😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww loved the update!!! i really like how you wrote the confession..it was so Inshi style😳 loved the whole collar bit, and the "How can a guy not be in shock when the girl whom he loved with all his heart...whom he loved more than his life proposed him for marriage that too in a weirdest way by holding his shirt's collar and giving him look that "if you said no i gonna kill you". I really loved this part.. it really described the scene well, i could picture it! i loved the whole conversation they had, it was very cute and funny. and the convo in the taxi as well (aww they held hands and she rested her head on his shoulder😳)!! i really liked the entire part, at the end i was like no it ended, i wanna read more!!😆

great job!! please do continue soon :)

-Simran

Edited by -RaSu- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊 Awesome work..

Realy loved the confession and convo in the cab.. 😳

Once again gr8 work.. 👏 waiting eagerly for next update..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -RaSu-

awww loved the update!!! i really like how you wrote the confession..it was so Inshi style😳 loved the whole collar bit, and the "How can a guy not be in shock when the girl whom he loved with all his heart...whom he loved more than his life proposed him for marriage that too in a weirdest way by holding his shirt's collar and giving him look that "if you said no i gonna kill you". I really loved this part.. it really described the scene well, i could picture it! i loved the whole conversation they had, it was very cute and funny. and the convo in the taxi as well (aww they held hands and she rested her head on his shoulder😳)!! i really liked the entire part, at the end i was like no it ended, i wanna read more!!😆


great job!! please do continue soon :)

-Simran



thankyou so much simran...
well i luvd tht confession part in da show so i kept in my ff...it was best till date
dont worry will continue soon

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