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part 12

Rahul-indira

Indira*turned*- yes

Indira was extremely excited and happy with all her heart and y shud she not be happy after all she was going to have her love of her life...she was going to get back HER RISHI...her eyes were still filled with tears and this time it was of happiness and when she was about to go rahul called her

Rahul- mein chod du...tum kab tak bhag ti rahogi...

Indira- mmm thik hai...chalo acha hai mein jaldi pahuch jaogi...pata nahi rishi kis hal mein hoga ...mene usse kafi dukh diya hai..

Sana- kuch nahi hua hoga bas ek kone pade ro raha hoga...jab tum jaogi na toh dekhna phir bandar ki tarah uchalne lagega

All three of them goes to tht place where indira will start her new journey of life, indira smiled and all the sweet memory came rushing in her mind, how they used to fight in no reason, the rishi's touch which made indira blush...it was hard for indira to wait...now one minute seems like one year...

Waiting was over...she reached tht place...ran inside but suddenly her evergreen smile disappeared...all her excitement vanished...there was NO RISHI...indira was shocked..

Indira- rishi*shouted at top of her voice* rishi

Tears rolling down...with broken heart again she called rishi but no response...rishi was gone...she has lost him...she cursed herself she hated herself...it was now her mistake...mistake which took rishi away from her...

Indira- rishi kaha ho aap...*kneeled down crying*

Rahul and sana felt something wrong and went inside...nd saw indira in this state...she was crying as if someone has tore her heart...she was crying with pain...the pain which at that moment killed her every second..

Rahul and sana too searched for rishi, they too shouted but no response, sana tried to call him but again no response...sana went near indira placed her hand on her shoulder nd hugged her...indira cried with all her heart...

Indira- mene rishi ko kho diya*sobbing* rishi plzz aajao..plzzz

Tears too rolled down from sana's cheek...nd whispered looking at the sky "where are u rishi, indira needs you plz come back"

Rahul- indira aise rone se kaam nahi chalega...rishi kafi dukhi hoga so woh kahi deserted place mein gaya hoga jaha usse thoda peace mile...indira socho aisa koi place hai..

Indira-*cuming back to her senses nd thinking hard*- pata nahi aisa koi place hai ki nahi...ha hai aur mujhe pata hai abhi woh kaha hoga

A ray of hope emerged out in her heart nd prayed tht this tym she finds rishi...rishi shud be there

Indira- i need to go there

Rahul- ok then i will come with u

Indira- no this tym i will go myself...

Sana- but indira its too late

Indira- plzz...plzzz

Rahul n sana believed indira and left from there and indira went to THAT place...that place was the same place where indira for the first tym was upset with rishi nd rishi came to manaofy her...it was that same place where both of them realised there was something special between them...

Now rishi is upset with indira nd it was her turn to manaofy rishi...indira soon reached there half by walking and running and half by auto which she found on her way..it was late night there was no one, her eyes searched everywhere but cudnot find him but wen she was searching for last time thn her eyes stopped and started staring towards the direction...there was her rishi sitting alone tears rolling down his cheek...indira cud clearly see his tears it was twinkling in this fullmoon night...she cud clearly feel the pain which rishi was going through that moment...indira was staring at that place where her man was sitting...nd without wasting any tym she ran towards him nd hugged him...she hugged him tightly...this tym she was not going to loose him...he was now hers nd only hers

It took a minute for rishi to realize what happened right now...he cudnot believe that it was his indira hugging him...he tried to close his eyes so that this dream cums to an end...there was a question in his mind "is this a dream????"

Rishi*still confused tht is it dream or not*-indira

Indira*still hugging him*- kya hai

Rishi- am i dreaming...

Hearing this indira pinched rishi

Rishi- oouch!!

Indira-dekha u r not dreaming...

IT WAS NOT A DREAM...that pinch really proved it..rishi nd indira were staring at eachother...rishi was smiling indira was smiling...nd there was something which rishi wudnot have expected but it did come unexpectedly...



Edited by girl_rocks - 13 years ago
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Its awesome.. I think u pasted it twice..
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Originally posted by: loveinshi

Its awesome.. I think u pasted it twice..


thank you
lol yes i noticed right now...
srry my mistake
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Posted: 13 years ago
cool.. very nice dear :)
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Nice update 👏. wish it could have been a much longer update...😍 ...Anywayz thanks for taking ur precious time and writting it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice 👏 👏 👏

Waiting for next 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful imagination.lage raho👍🏼
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Wow.😍.Its awesome.👏
waiting for next update.

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