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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Earnshaw

Hi,must say,it is the most beautiful way of bringing Rishi and Indira together,and I really hope the writer,as well as the CVs read your updates and learn how to maintain the integrity of characters and smoothly move the story forward.You know at present,we'll need a release from this constant anxiety and fear,which 'HD' is making us go through.And add more to this state,the writer has absolutely messed up the story.I believe its only our imagination that is going to take us out of this state, and thanks to you for that.
Keep up the good work😉


thankyou so much
i know writer has messed up the story...writer herself is confused with the story...i really wanted some beautiful scenes of inshi in da show but i think writer has some problem with it...
well yes i wanted to come out of this fear tht wen writer minds turns up and she separates inshi...i just posted my imagination how i wanted to see inshi...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: loveinshi

😊 Awesome work..

Realy loved the confession and convo in the cab.. 😳

Once again gr8 work.. 👏 waiting eagerly for next update..


thankyou
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updates. Read the last two updates today only. Its lovely. Please continue updating. Waiting for it. Thank you for giving us inshi moments.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dhanyar79

Awesome updates. Read the last two updates today only. Its lovely. Please continue updating. Waiting for it. Thank you for giving us inshi moments.


thankyou so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
very very sweet ff..loved each and every part and eagerly waiting for more..
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 14

rahul- ha ji sab hogaya bas ek cheez reh gaya


rishi- kya


rahul- tune woh pictures ko arrange kardiya jo tujhe indira ko dikhana tha
rishi- arre tnsn na le all is set bas evening ka intezar hai
[P][B]rahul- ok then meet u after sometym


rishi recalled that precious moment when he and indira
became one 1yr before and today was their 1st anniversary.he cudnot
believe that they have spent 1 yr together...indira's memory always gave him
smile ...and he called her


rishi- i love you


indira- i love u too ab bolo kya kaam hai kyu phone kiya


rishi- kya yaar saare romantic mood ka khoon kar diya...mein
apni wife se kya do minute romantic baatein bhi nahi karsakta


indira- hogaya aapka isiliye aapne phone kiya tha...rakhun


rishi- arre nahi mene toh yeh batane ke liye phone kiya tha
ki rahul aur sana india aagaye woh aaj sham humare saath apni anniversary
celebrate karenge


indira- kya aur aap mujhe ab bata rahe ho...saare mard ek
jaise hote hai shadi ke baad kuch aur shadi ke pehel kuch aur...


rishi- uff tum ghum phir ke issi baat pe kyu aatak jati
ho...mein batana bhul gaya...tumhare is bak bak ke chakkar mein batana bhul
gaya


indira- mein aur bak bak...phone pehle kisne kiya tha


rishi- acha mene toh romantic batatein karne ke liye kaha
tha tumhi ne mard aur ke upar lecture shuru kiya...ufff tumharo batein mujhe
confuse kar deti hai...


indira- thik hai thik hai...bolo aur kya bolna tha


rishi- arre ha...woh sana aaj sham ko 7 baje ghar aayegi
phir tum usse lekar GrandHyatt hotel me lekar aajana thik 8 baje tak nd plzz
don't be late


indira- thik hai but kyu


rishi- kitna sawal karti ho tum bas aajana...bye


indira- but rishi...acha bye


indira was wondering why rishi said all tht, he said he wud
not plan anything for tonight as he was going to attend imp. Meeting...but
suddenly, some thing is cooking in his mind


on the way to home she continuosly thought abt rishi's
convo, she knew tht rishi is planning for tonight but what??? This was totally
making her confused nd atlast she gave up


indira- uff yeh rishi bhi na hamesha koi na koi khurafati
karte rehte hai...mene kaha tha ki aaj ke liye koi plan na kare kyuki unki
meeting thi but phir bhi...woh toh wohi karte hai jo mein mana karu...meri
baton se unhe jaise allergy hogayi ho...


indira muttering to herself entered to the house and was
surprised to see sana...indira hugged her


indira- sana...how are you nd tum kaise aayi andar


sana- m f9 nd mujhe ghar ke duplicate keys rishi ne de diye
the...


indira- u met with rishi...aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi
nahi...go i don't wanna talk to u


sana- ufff rishi ne mujhe mana kiya tha tumhe batane se abt
my arrival...he said u will be surprised


indira- i knew he is planning sumthing for tonight...do you
know any thing abt it


sana- nopes...infact rahul is also upto sumthing nd i
guess these boyz are making plan together...it wud be fun


indira nd sana had there chit chat nd at 8 both the women
reached the hotel...as soon as they entered the hall everything went
black...they cud not see anything...indira n sana slowly slowly walked inside
and as they enetered the whole place was lighten up.


Both the gorgeous were shocked, indira looked for rishi but
cudnot find him then she saw spot light nd a figure cuming towards her nd she
took 0 sec to recognize him...yes it was her rishi...seeing him she smiled...


Rishi- ladies n gentlemen
i m going to sing a song nd tht song is dedicated to the most beautiful
woman of dis world, my love, my life, my
better half, my indira...indira will you spend your whole life with ur not so
handsome husband, with ur kiraydar...


Indira eyes moisten..with a broad smile she shook head and
everybody clapped and thn rishi bent down in his knees asked indira's hand and
put the ring on her finger...it was da same ring which rishi bought for her to
confess but cudnot gave her nd now was the perfect tym...rishi stood
up...indira hugged him and whispers in
his ears


Indira- thankyou nd i wud lyk to spent my whole life as well
as death with my not so handsome husband...with my kiraydar ji...i love you


Rishi's eyes too moisten...he broke the hug and went in the
middle looked at indira with lots of love in his eyes


Rishi- indira this is for you my angel...*thn he started
singing*


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<font>Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye

Meharbaani jaate jaate mujh pe kar gaya
Guzarta sa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
Tere nazara mila, roshan sitaara mila
Takdeer ki kashtiyon ko, kinara mila
Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri sauhbat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye
Tere milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maanu mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye

Rishi took indira's hand nd started dancing...mean while he
finished his song...they both were staring at eachother totally lost in
eachother's eyes...guest applause bought them into reality...light went off
and a spot light appears on them indira saw rishi and with her asked her all
abt dis bt riahi didnot say anything but pointed out towards the
screen...there some clips were being displayed...clips were of their marriage
nd the beautiful moments they had spent in this 1 year...indira seeing all dis
cudnot control herself nd hugged rishi...all tht she cud do is to thnk
him...she was crying nd rishi consoling her


Indira- thnk u so much... i don't have anything to give you
but one thing i can promise that i will love you till my last breath will
always there for you standing between the you and trouble...m sorry if i have
upset u in dis days we had spent together promise i wont do it again...all i
want to say tht i love you n will always do


Rishi- did i say i want anything...arre dumbo tum mere life
mein ho toh phir kisi aur cheez ki kya zarurat...u know wat wen i m with u i
feel complete...i love you u dont have to prove me i know u love me with all ur
heart...mein waada karta hu tumhe mein kuch hone nahi dunga...hamesha tumhare
saath rahunga till death...i love you


Till thn sana and rahul too came from their own
privacy...rishi nd indira broke their hug rishi wiped the tears of
indira...party went on ...everyone enjoyed...atlast it was over...all the
guest went only two couples were left one indira nd rishi another sana and
rahul but soon they to bid them goodbye and inshi remain there alone...after
completing some work, they too went their home.


Finally they reached their home...rishi was tired so he
went to his bedroom...indira too went inside...


Rishi- yeh kya...indira tumne yeh sab kab kiya


Indira- jab tum mere liye itna karsakte ho toh mein nahi kar
sakti kya...


Saying this indira closed the door behind rishi was amused
to see their bedroom all decorated with roses, candles and curtains...giving
full romantic scene...indira slowly slowly walked towards rishi...rishi was
confused seeing indira but soon got to kknow tht wat indira is abt to do...


Rishi- indira i m tired i need to sleep...tumhare dimag mein
job hi chal raha hai usse band karo chalo sone


Indira- acha...toh aap dimag bhi padh sakte hai...toh bata
bhi do mere dimag mein kya chal raha hai...bolo bolo



Edited by girl_rocks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.. Its gr8.. And the perfect song.. I just love it..

But what about the pandit..?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: loveinshi

wow.. Its gr8.. And the perfect song.. I just love it..

But what about the pandit..?



thnk u so much
lol srry my mistake i mixed two updates well i have edited it thnx for telling
this is wat happens when u dont sleep at night nd type ur updates instead of sleeping
well thnx for telling
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was an awesome update dear... Your imagination is superb .keep it up 👍🏼..Hope u will update the next episode soon...Pls update it soon. 😊 By the way thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome update...samu...just loved it...,n d song ws mind blowing...

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