Blast to the Past!! Last Part, PG. 19!!!

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@Mini786

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Posted: 18 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: ~Sirius*Ysh~
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I am not going to talk to you!

You update and not tell James' evil friend?????? 😡

Honestly Tanu... u know how much i lyk ur fic??? 😭

a little heads up would have been nice!!!!!! 😡

ok ok im done with all the yelling!!!!
now for the hugging!
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Love it! love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was sho cute 😳

hopefully next time i get to read it before the others *hint 😳 hint*

brilliant chapter... wana know the plans though...

do continue...
or you never know what James' evil friend just might do!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

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@Mini786

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: ~Sirius*Ysh~
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I am not going to talk to you!

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You update and not tell James' evil friend?????? 😡

Im showy! 😳

Honestly Tanu... u know how much i lyk ur fic??? 😭

Um - Hum 😳

a little heads up would have been nice!!!!!! 😡

Showy Again! 😳

ok ok im done with all the yelling!!!!

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now for the hugging!
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Yipeee 🤗 🤗🤗

Love it! love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you! 😳

It was sho cute 😳

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hopefully next time i get to read it before the others *hint 😳 hint*

Oh...are you thinking wat i think your thinking, because what im thinking is just a perfect thing that i think u would be thinking...*I need to calm down with F.R.I.E.N.D.S..* 😉 Okie Dokie😳

brilliant chapter... wana know the plans though...

Oh you will know..Dont worry...😉
thank you😳

do continue...
or you never know what James' evil friend just might do!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

😈 ohhh Ysh do i see/hear/read a new evil kid in town? 😆
Oh dear, im scared...and your james' friend too..more scarier, with the pranks, and the animagi, and then the Snivillus with the shampooing his hair(sorry too much candy)!!
😆😆

Mahak!!! 🤗

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@Mini786

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: diyafah
wow awesome mehak. 👏 👏

Thank you Anu! 😃 .
u had a fan-fic and i had no idea

Tolly didnt tell u..😳

gosh..itz kk!plz contine fast!love it! 😳 😳 😳

Thank you! 😳

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Mahak

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Shaitaan Anu

@diyafah

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Posted: 18 years ago

#124

ur welcum mehak and i am waiting!!!!! 😳 😳

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Vaishnavi (YSH)

@~Sirius*Ysh~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Mini786

Itsh ok!!!! 🤗 ur forgiven 😳

Oh...are you thinking wat i think your thinking, because what im thinking is just a perfect thing that i think u would be thinking...*I need to calm down with F.R.I.E.N.D.S..* 😉 Okie Dokie😳

Of course of course!!! And i do the same thing to calm down too... FRIENDS 😳 🤗

Oh you will know..Dont worry...😉

Yea... waiting...

😈 ohhh Ysh do i see/hear/read a new evil kid in town? 😆
Oh dear, im scared...and your james' friend too..more scarier, with the pranks, and the animagi, and then the Snivillus with the shampooing his hair(sorry too much candy)!!

:P Thats fine... i never get tired of candy... but u should be scared and write so fast...
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Punam Rai

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Posted: 18 years ago

#126

wow!! i just read the whole thing!!!!!!!!!!its wonderful!!!!!!!!!pls cont soon. and by the way, u said smthn about someone pming u to stop?? y do i get the feeling its a certain newbie with about roughly 8 posts whose username starts with v? dun worry, ur not the only one she critisized. she told a perfectly good ff writer to stop writing her indianized harry potter ff and she used rather colourfull language too. personally if you ask me, she is obviosly jealous because she can't write as good as you. although i'd like to see her try

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indira3

@indira3

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Posted: 18 years ago

#127

PLease Continue
This fan fic is so exciting !!!

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@Mini786

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#128

Hey Guys!
Im glad all you liked it!
Here is the next part!!!!!
Hope u like it!
Oh and this part has not been edited…Not even by me, I typed what cam to my head! Yea I fixed little errors I found later…so sorry about that
:D

It was strange, very strange; there was a time when she used to find the boy walking with her a very annoying git. But now she thought of him as a friend, as a best friend, she could go to him for help, she could go to him for advice – 'Oh who am I kidding' thought Lily, 'going to Sirius for advice is like asking McGonagall for a whole year worth of detention! Yet, I walk with him and listen to his immature plans on how to tell James!'

"-So I was thinking that you can give him the menacing potion-"

"Sirius! I am not going to give James a potion, that is absolutely – Hey wait a minute, why would we want to give James a menacing potion…doesn't he already like me?" exclaimed Lily.

"Well…see…I….thinking…funny…" Sirius said backing away from Lily quite noticeably.

"Sirius Black, you would give your best friend a menacing potion?" Lily exclaimed looking shocked yet amused.

"Oh Evans don't act like you've never given someone a menacing potion….I mean come on…!"

"Cough…cough…" Tanu said walking in behind them.

"Hey Tanu!" Lily said smiling at her.

"Heya…maya…!" Sirius began singing and jumping around Tanu and Lily.

"Why do we know him again?" Lily asked looking at Sirius skeptically.

"I don't know!" Tanu said looking at Sirius, "Well I have to go, Professor D wanted to see me, but while I go…ah…Sirius…Nicolle is coming!"

Sirius immediately stopped and began talking to Lily in a serious tone. "Lily, I don't think you need a plan – Oh Nicolle I didn't see you there!"

"Hey." Nicolle said walking by them smiling.

"Sirius…what was that?" Lily asked him.

"Oh nothing, anyway so here is the plan…."

"You like her don't you?"

"Well…yea…sorta…." Sirius said looking indifferently around them.

His face was so serious, that Lily couldn't help it, she turned him to face her. "I, Lily Evans, promise to help Sirius Black win over Nicolle, if he helps me to win over James Potter!"

Sirius smiled at her. "Okay now lets get to business, here is the plan: tonight we all go to the common room (like usually) while all the Gryffindors' are sitting in the common room with their usual activities such as watching us Marauders play Wizards chess, or playing their own games, or doing homework, or dancing like chickens, or eating their chocolate frogs, or-"

"I get your point, get on with IT!" Lily said.

"Fine, *his voice in a mocking way* im just trying to help, but Evans just wants to be all feisty and…." Lily glared at him, "and I was saying that when they are doing what every activity they are doing, I will jump out of no where and start singing Where's the party is tonight, and then I will say Woogi woogi! - "

"Then I go talk to James?" Lily asked.

"No! After that I will run about with a stink-o-thing," after looking at Lily's face, Sirius explained, "A spray that makes everything stink!"

"Oh I couldn't have guessed!" Remarked Lily.

"You know I don't have to explain this plan to you, I am being extra nice explaining this plan and you are being all mean, but anyway I'll spray the whole common room, and it will stink, so everyone will run out! - "

"Then I go talk to James?" Lily asked hopefully.

"No Evans have some patience! McGonagall will come, and use her stink away thing to make the Common rooms smell good, and then she will asked who did this…I'll say my name!"

"And then when McGonagall is talking to you I talk to James?" Lily asked again, a little irritated.

"Nope, after she asks, I will get my punishment, after that, I will go play a game of wizards chess with James, and then between the game I will go get some water-"

"Excellent! Then I got talk to James!" Lily asked smiling.

"No, then I come back, we finish the game, and start some of our homework!"

"You guys actually do your homework? Wow, that's interesting!" Lily remarked.

"Evans, let me finish will ya? Then I will come to ask you for help!"

"Then I go talk to James acting like I am helping him!" Lily said.

"No, you are going to help me, I wasn't listening in class, I was to busy playing hangman with Tanu, did you know that game is fun?" after again seeing Lily's face, Sirius continued, "After helping me, cough doing my whole essay for me cough, I will go and sit with the Marauders and plan out next prank, and then, you being a prefect will come, and scold us!"

"Oh I will act like I'm scolding but im actually going to talk to James?" Lily asked uncertainly. (Why wouldn't she, I mean looking at the past five minutes!)

"In the French way of saying NON which means no! Yeah, Evans you probably thought that I don't know French but HA! I do! But anyhow as I was saying, after scolding us, we will be disheartened, and we will eat some chocolate frogs, and I will tell prongs to offer you some!"

"Right, then I go talk to him!" Lily said.

"In the German way NIEN, which means no! After that, You will accept it, and will go with your friends Alice and Nicolle!" After saying Nicolles' name, Sirius went into a dream like estate, but after Lily Jabbing him hard in the ribs, he continued, "and you guys will go up to your dormitories, after that in like 10 to 20 minutes you will come back out, and you will go with Prongs to do patrolling!"

"Let me guess, I still don't talk to him!"

"Nope, then you guys do your patrolling, and come back, after that everyone is doing their activities once again, and me and the Marauder sit and have fun, while you and your girls, have your own fun….if it's possible! Then after that I will dance on the table, and you will come and tell me off………………………………………………!"

For two long minutes, no one said a word! "Why did you stop?" Lily asked.

"Oh, I thought you were going to ask if you talk to Prongs then, but before you do, you don't talk to him."

"I wasn't going to ask!" Lily exclaimed looking at Sirius dangerously.

"Well after that, it will get late, and a lot of people will leave to their dorms, and they will go to sleep, the Marauders like usual, will sit and fool around until the last people leave, but unlike usual, I will start saying come on guys lets leave to the Marauders, and they will look at me weird, but will come along, and if we leave, everyone leaves! After everyone leaves, we come back—we meaning the Maruaders!"

Quiet for a minute this time, "I wasn't even going ask!" Lily said

"Oh I no, I stopped for dramatic effect!"

"Im surprised you even know what that means!" Lily said.

"…Well...someone isn't in the right state, now are they? Well anyway, then we will sit, and stay down there for a while and leave, and that I the end of the whole Lily-asking-and-talking-to-prongs-day-and-night-thing!"

"Sirius?"

"Yes, Lily?"

"You forgot one tiny little thing."

"Oh really, and what will that be?" asked Sirius, thoroughly confused.

"The little part with me ACTUALLY TALKING TO JAMES!" Lily screeched!

"Oh did I forget to mention that? You were supposed to talk to him before we all went to the common room!" Sirius said smiling!

"You mean to say, that I was supposed to talk to him, before all this stuff?" Lily asked innocently.

"Why yes!" Sirius responded equally innocent.

"Then may I ask, why you made me listen to all this stuff, when everything I needed to know was before all THIS?

"Well you never told me to shut up!"

"Because I thought the part with me talking to James wasn't there YET!" Lily said, taking her wand out.

"Well, to bad, hey why are you taking that wand out? Sirius asked his voice shaking.

"Oh you know.."

"No I don't!" Sirius exclaimed backing away.

"Well then, I would advise you to RUN!" Lily yelled.

And so the chase began….Sirius ran and Lily behind him. Lily caught Sirius as soon as they entered the common room….

*What happens after this part will be revealed later…I mean in the next part, the reason it is not contained in this part, is because….well its to sad…oh so sad!*

Did you like it??
Leave comments please!
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-Mahak-

Edited by Mini786 - 18 years ago

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Vaishnavi (YSH)

@~Sirius*Ysh~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#129

TANU!!!!!!

NOW I AM SO GOING TO YELL AT YOU

THIS IS THE BEST PART I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rocking Hilarious Funny AND ABSOLUTELY STUPENDOUS

lovely
and sirius 😳 was funny as ever 😳 and i lub him in lub with nicolle!!!!
and it was sho sweet
and i get to be ur first reviewer too 😳
and this part was so funny...........😆
especially sirius saying the whole thing and no everytime Lily asks when she should talk to prongs🤣🤣
awwwww...
u gotta write fast!
trust me this is ur best part yet!!!!

This one --> "Why do we know him again?" Lily asked looking at Sirius skeptically. --> was particualrly cute!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

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luvya for the wonderful part!
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ps post soon

-🤗😳🤗Ysh

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Vaishnavi (YSH)

@~Sirius*Ysh~

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Posted: 18 years ago

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