Blast to the Past!! Last Part, PG. 19!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys I was bored and had two ideas for a fanfic so I wrote a first part for both of them now you have to choose which one you want me to continue.

Fanfic 1:

The dark rainy night reflected Harry Potter's foul mood. He sat there lifeless, his hands around his knees and his face clamped against the window. It was all too much for him, losing Dumbledore, Ginny, his best friends and now almost his life. His heart ached with all the pain bubbling within him. He had nobody-nobody to share his feelings with, it was in these times he would wish that his parents would break the barrier between the dead and alive. He knew it would never happen but he believed he had the right to want things. For days his body was slumped against the window as if it were his life line. This made things easier for the Dursleys. They were happy that he didn't leave his room, they were happy he didn't eat, they were happy he didn't eat, they were happy he was miserable. "Freaks like you shouldn't be living; you should be starved to death." This was one sentence he heard every day, but since his sixth year ended he never heard it, maybe because he chose not to.

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The faint tip tap against the cold window stirred Harry awake. He managed to grab his glasses without leaving his slumped position. It was then when he realized the tip tap was not the rain but it was pig, Ron's extremely hyper owl.

"No, it can't be Pig, Everyone's mad at me then why would they send me a letter, maybe it's a howler."

Harry carefully let the owl in; he grabbed Pig before he went flying everywhere, but to his surprise, Pig was quite even sad maybe. Harry sat him down with Hedwig and began reading the letter.

Dear Harry,

It's Ronald here, Mum would like me to ask you to come over this summer because of Bill and Fluers' wedding. I told her you wouldn't wan to come but she insisted. Let me know if you want to come so I can send some Floo powder for you traveling issuers.

Your best mate

Ronald Weasely

"I guess we're not best mates anymore"

Harry read the letter five times making sure he was invited. He sat there with a quill wondering if he should write a yes or a no. He wanted to go, he wanted to get out of this dump and see the Weasleys' who he loved more then anything, but it would be hard with Ginny, Ron and Hermione. He finally chose to say "Yes." He tied the letter pack on Pigs' little feet and let pushed him out so he can have good balance. Pig seemed a little weird so Harry sent Hedwig to see if he got there OK. Hedwig smiled gratefully (it seemed like she did) and left after the little owl. He wondered when he would leave this place. He began thinking what he would say to everyone, how he would greet them. A short while later Harry got all his belongings (which weren't much) and packed them securing them with a quick spell he learned from Dumbledore. His eyes glistened as thoughts of Dumbledore ran through his mind. He quickly shook his head in attempt to drop all his thoughts in a little place in his head which he hid from everyone, even Ron. At that point Hedwig soared into the room, Harry stared at her, he had forgotten how beautiful she was, her snowy feather glistened as she shook herself in attempt of drying off.

"Me and her really have lots of things in common"

Harry ran toward her and gave her a quick pat and hurriedly untied the packet and letter from her legs. She flew into her cage to show she was ready to leave.

"At least I know one of my friends is not mad at me."

Harry opened the packet revealing the green powder and his first smile in days.

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The time read 2:30 P.M. Harry grabbed his bags and Hedwigs' massive cage and made his way through the hallway into the living room where he found the Dursleys watching T.V.

"Well I'm off" Said Harry, wondering if they actually cared. He stood still for a couple of minutes thinking if he should just go.

"Are you leaving for good?" Uncle Vernons' voice boomed.

"Man his voice is as big as his head!"

Harry smiled at his own thoughts. "Should I take that nasty smile as a yes?" snarled Uncle Vernon.

"I guess so." Harry said unsure of his movements.

"Well then do you need a ride to anywhere?" Uncle Vernon asked politely. Harry's mouth dropped open as he stared at the large Dursley.

"I-I'm traveling by Floo powder, you know from the fireplace." Harry stammered unsure of the response he was about to get.

"Well then get a move on, come on you don't have all day." Aunt Petunia spoke up. She pushed him in front of the fireplace. Harry grabbed some Floo powder and threw it in the fire and looked around wondering if he should stop by Diagon alley to pick of gifts for the Weaslys', but he guessed that might hurt Rons' feelings so he stepped in the flames and pulling all his stuff close to him and yelled "The Burrow", just like that the living room vanished into thin air and he began spinning harshly.

OR

Fanfic 2:

"Evans wait up, come on listen to me please!" A panting James yelled after a slim figure with curly hair.

"What?" Lily Evans bellowed.

"I didn't – I mean – I didn't think --"

"Exactly Potter you never think, never think that maybe these stupid pranks could actually hurt some ones feelings!" Lily snapped. Tears sprang in her eyes as she disappeared behind the doorway leading to Moaning Myrtles bathroom.

"Awww…. Lost your girlfriend, Potter?" Snape, Sevres, Snape jumped from behind the banister.

**Pause**

Hey, Im Tanu, short for Tanasha. Your probably wondering what I'm doing here, right? Well actually it's all Professor D's fault, Short for Professor Dumbledore. Actually he keeps all kinds of things near me that he knows will get me curious. Okay let me start from the beginning. Im from the future, yeah I know it's weird, actually I found that out only minutes ago. Ok so here's the thing, I'm the famous Harry Potters' friend. You may not know me, well because you've never heard my name even though I went to Hogwarts. The reason you've never heard of me is because Professor D. used to keep me isolated from everyone, I had my own room in the back. He used to teach me everything from potions to charms, you name it, he taught it. I never asked him why he kept me away from everyone well because part of me liked the isolation, the other part wanted to go out and make friends. But anyways I say this one box that I had never noticed before--- oh wait one detail your probably wondering rite now is that if Professor D. kept me from all the students how did Harry know me. Well Professor D. made us meet and we became fast friends……..and close, very close friends. Anyways back to where I left off, the box, I rummaged through it and found a button, yes a button, it said something like…ah Blast to the Past, or something like that. Well driven from the curiosity I pushed it and found myself on the floor outside Professor Ds'. Office. I tried going back in but well the password had well changed. I wondered how, I mean I had gone in only moments before. All of a sudden I saw Professor D. and he looked different……younger to be exact. I asked him if he was ok, guess what he said, "Who are you?" I stared at him and said come on Professor D. stop playin. He said that I think you're from the future, from the way you talk.

"So the Blast to the past thingy works?" I asked amazed.

"Apparently," he answered, so I asked him what year were we exactly in. He asked me if I knew Harry. I said yes wondering why he changed the topic. He said that we're in Harry's dads' time. I had only one thing to say COOL!! So here I am, witnessing a fight, well not yet.

So how cool is that, now lets' go back and see Harry's dad in action. Oh yea if I start babbling to myself in my thoughts don't mind I do that……..a lot.

**Resume (I guess) **

"Shove it!" Snarled James.

But that's when James noticed me. (Darn my covers blown.)

"Ummmmm…..hi." James said.

"HI!" I replied coolly. (It's time for my Spidy escape, psh, psh, psh, darn gotta get these things fixed!)

"And who are you?" Snape asked, with no emotion.

So which one will it be??? The first one?? The second one?? Or none?? Hope you liked at least one.

~~~Mahak~~~

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow great yaar love the first one
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Both are awesome!!!

and both are different
u can do 1 thing
continue any 1 now and then when u finish it write the other...
in that way we will not loose a gr8 fanfic at all 😉 😉

BEST OF LUCK!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ya agree with vaisho & ur chaoters r gr88888888888888 👏 pls continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Start with the second one.... It's nice,,,,,, the "Blast from the past" thingie...

-Sam 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok
so I'll start with Blast to the Past and then when i finish it I'll start the other one

~~~Mahak~~~
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Posted: 19 years ago
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start with the first one its sounds more interesting...
n then when u finish the first one continue with the second one as i dont want to miss ur 2 fanfics 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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well ma reason for telling u to write the first fanfic is coz there r lots of lily n james fan fics so it will be good to have harry's fanfic for a change...

but the last decision is always urs as u r the writer.. choose whch one is better to u
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Oh ok
Well I got some PM's
saying taht i should continue the blast to the past
so I'll start that one
first
hope ur all ok with taht!!

~~~Mahak~~~
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sure!!!

just waiting to read it!!!!

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