Blast to the Past!! Last Part, PG. 19!!!

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Tasneem

@lovelyprincesst

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Posted: 18 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Mini786
oh im osrry..
just dont hvae time lately..
teacher give so much hw that i can only come and check up here, i never hive time to type it up!
im sorry!
😭 ill try tho

~~~Mahak~~~

oh its ok yaar..
if u have writen in word thn just copy n past it..
will be waiting for u too be free from schools so u can post it

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@Mini786

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Posted: 18 years ago

#112

Sorry, Sorry and Sorry!
I haven't continued for how many months now?
Just getting busy, and also I got lazy.
But after having a talk with Nutzzz and Ysh (I dedicate this chapter to them! Only because im scared they're going to come kill me If I don't continue...J/k)…I decided to continue this ff.
A short recap (Because im sure you guys have forgotten): Lily's parents died and she is devastated. Tanu is doing her best to help her, while fighting with herself, because the time in the past is running out, and she doesn't want to leave her new friends. James is maturing and James and Lily have had some moments. Sirius and Nicole are getting along, and lastly Remus and Alice are still shy.

*Short part, bigger will come later!*

Lily was becoming as she used to be, all her homework was turned in on time, she was talking to Nicolle and Alice like they used to, she began pushing Alice to talk to Remus, and telling Nicolle to go with Sirius, but still no one except Tanu knew about her parents passing away. She was getting on fine, even Tanu thought so. Everything was going accordingly, but her heart. Her heart, it kept repeating James, James, James, James. She knew he had changed, but after 6 years of refusing him, had she finally began falling for him? After 6 years, she felt guilty; she should have given him a chance!

Tanu kept nudging her to go on, talk to him, but it wasn't that easy, I mean how can you just go up to a person you used to hate and say I like you? Did that sound crazy to only Lily?

Lily sat alone in the common room, humming quietly to herself, while she looked over her potions essay. Yes, everything looked alright! She read over the first line, also known as the thesis statement. The one way….she read, thinking who needs a thesis statement; people can totally live with out them! When she heard footsteps, she turned to see Sirius standing there looking tired.

"Black," Lily greeted.

"Evans," He greeted back, and took a seat in front of her.

"How many times do I have to tell you, you are my friend now, you do not have to call me Evans!" Lily said, gazing at him intensely.

"Well then don't call me Black!" He replied staring at her, his eyes wide, mouth on the side and finger pointing at her accusingly.

"Okay, okay, calm down, and what is up with you, you like tired! Lily asked putting her books away and tipping back her chair.

"Oh you know the usual, Marauder stuff, and trying to win Nicolle over, is getting kind of…er…agitating. How about you? He asked.

"In a way same here-" She said

"What do you mean? Is there a guy? Lily please just give James a chance you know he is not half bad and-"

"Sirius let me finish, will ya? I am talking about James!" Lily said, "and never try to lecture me again, in one lecture you talk about the whole world!"

"Oh sorry---Wait did you say it's James? Oh man! Im so happy—"

"Not yet, I haven't told him yet!" Lily said, "I don't know how to!"

"Why Lily, the coolest, best looking, smartest, most—"

"Conceited?" Lily questioned innocently.

"Yes—I mean no—wait ye- Is that a trick question?"

"Just get on with it!" Lily replied!

"Oh, okay, here is what you do, Marauder style, you know how his birthday is coming up, and Tanu is throwing him a surprise---"

*Everything Goes Mute!*

"Bloody Brilliant! I didn't know you were smart Sirius, you should have told me before!" Lily exclaimed!

"What? Excuse me since when do you say Bloody? And second, it wasn't my idea, it was Remus! I have a better plan, but for starters we must start with Remus' plan, otherwise he will kill me!"

"Riiiight! Your plan better then Remus' please!"

"You don't believe me?" Lily shook her head side to side. "Fine then, here is my plan--!"

*Everything Goes Mute!*

"Are you Crazy! If I did that James will kill you! And plus those friends he has Sam, Nutzz and Ysh, they are evil, they will give him ways!"

"Right, always think that Sirius' plans are flop!"
"Now, listen to my brilliant plan!"

"Evans you make plans, oh I have taught you well!" Sirius said wiping a "FAKE" tear.

"Not that kind of plan Dufus!"

James walked in, and looked at the pair skeptically. "Hey guys"

"James! Guess what, Evans-"Lily kicked him. "Ow!"

"Huh?" James asked.

"Nothing, Sirius is well not being serious, I mean how would he, he's just Sirius, and you if Sirius is serious then, everything will go wrong, and if he is not serious then everything is okay because he is acting like Siri-"

"Evans you're babbling!" Sirius Said, getting annoyed, "How dare you make fun of my name, I am the only one who can make fun of the name Serious! No that's not how you spell it, is it Seeerus, no that's not it, -"

"Im ganna go, you guys can fight all you want over Sirius' name! Okay, good night!" James said running up the stairs, thinking, yea they took a potion, don't want to be around them, I mean Lily was actually babbling! And Sirius was…..being Sirius…Oh wonder if Sirius gave Lily something? Ahhhh!

😃

-Girl who feels bad for continueing oh so late!-

Edited by Mini786 - 18 years ago

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Ammu

@ammmu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#113

Wow! 👏 👏 👏 Just read the whole thing. ur story is very different..!! and nice new update too! 😃

would like you to continue the first one too, that one seems really interesting well..... when you have time! 😉

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Eran

@umrao_jaan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#114

TANUUUU!!!!!! 👏

FINALLYYYY!!!! FINALLYYY!!!! 😉 😉 😉

I thought this was NEVER coming but seems like my partner in evil has returrnnneeeddd!!!!!

Thankyooo for the dedicateed chappie Mahak!!! And James EVIL friends!!! Heeeheeeheee!!! I LOVE it!!!
😆

GR8 chappie, pie(partner in evil! 😛 ) but lemme say SHORT!!! I really like the dialogue between Sirius and Lilly and the way you put *everything goes mute*!!!

Wayyy to go!!! NEXT chappie BEFORE next WED okie???

Partner In Evil,
Nutzzieee 😉

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125289

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Posted: 18 years ago

#115

FFFFFFFIIIIINNNNAAALLLLLLYYY

YOU POSTED THE NEXT CHP....

It is wonderful....great job (as usual)

can't wait until next one...

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Vaishnavi (YSH)

@~Sirius*Ysh~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#116

😡

I am not going to talk to you!

You update and not tell James' evil friend?????? 😡

Honestly Tanu... u know how much i lyk ur fic??? 😭

a little heads up would have been nice!!!!!! 😡

ok ok im done with all the yelling!!!!
now for the hugging!
🤗
Love it! love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was sho cute 😳

hopefully next time i get to read it before the others *hint 😳 hint*

brilliant chapter... wana know the plans though...

do continue...
or you never know what James' evil friend just might do!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

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Shaitaan Anu

@diyafah

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Posted: 18 years ago

#117

wow awesome mehak. 👏 👏 .u had a fan-fic and i had no idea
gosh..itz kk!plz contine fast!love it! 😳 😳 😳

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@Mini786

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: ammmu
Wow! 👏 👏 👏 Just read the whole thing. ur story is very different..!! and nice new update too! 😃

-Thanxx!!

would like you to continue the first one too, that one seems really interesting well..... when you have time! 😉
-I will try, once i finish this one off!

Thanx again!
😃

-Mahak-

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@Mini786

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: umrao_jaan
TANUUUU!!!!!! 👏

NUTZZZZZZ😛

FINALLYYYY!!!! FINALLYYY!!!! 😉 😉 😉

YUPPPP!!!! FINALLY!!! 😳

I thought this was NEVER coming but seems like my partner in evil has returrnnneeeddd!!!!!

Yup! *Muahahahahahaha!* 😈

Thankyooo for the dedicateed chappie Mahak!!!

No Problem Nutzie!

And James EVIL friends!!! Heeeheeeheee!!! I LOVE it!!!
😆

You are evil (MY evil partner!😈), and u do like james..rite? Thus, you have been named his evil friend...cough and mine cough!!!!!😆

GR8 chappie, pie(partner in evil! 😛 )

PIE? Like it!!!😉

but lemme say SHORT!!!

Showwy...😳

I really like the dialogue between Sirius and Lilly and the way you put *everything goes mute*!!!

Hehe, Sirius always reminds me of humour, and when your with sirius, ur so not sirius, i mean serious ...?😆
Thankk Youu!!

Wayyy to go!!! NEXT chappie BEFORE next WED okie???

*Everyhting goes mute* 😆
Hmmm before Wed..Well it is wed today..but i cant do that..Showwy, too much work......But I solemnly swear the next chapter will be up this weekend...😛

Partner In Evil,
Nutzzieee 😉

Partner In Evil,
Tanu...😉

😃

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@Mini786

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: hadia353
FFFFFFFIIIIINNNNAAALLLLLLYYY

I NOOOOOOOOOOO 😛

YOU POSTED THE NEXT CHP....

Yup! 😃

It is wonderful....great job (as usual)

Thanx u!

can't wait until next one...

That will b up soon!

-mahak-

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