Blast to the Past!! Last Part, PG. 19!!!

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Tasneem

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Posted: 19 years ago

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mmm its ok..
just start 😛

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@Mini786

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Posted: 19 years ago

#12

Hey,
Thanks for the comments
Here's the next part

"Ummmmm, Im Tanasha , but everyone calls me Tanu." I replied grimly (I think Im making friends with a greasy ol' git.)
"Nice to meet you." James cut into my thoughts.
"Potter, what are you still doing--" She cut off as her eyes flicked to Snape and then me.
"Who are you?" She asked confused.
"Tanasha, you can call me Tanu." I replied. (Oh no I didn't ask there names, if I accidentally say it then they will no something fishy is going on!!!)
"What are your names?" I asked feeling awkward. (I was asking Harry's dad what's your name. Now that's weird, I think)
"This here is Lily Evans, I'm James Potter, and that grease ball there is Snape."
"James?" Asked a slumber voice. I whirled around to see a pale looking Lupin. I smiled at him sweetly.
"Who's that?" He asked James.
I answered for him, "I'm Tanasha."
"Call her Tanu." James finished for me.
"I'm Lupin, Remus Lupin." He smiled warmly.
"Who are you?" Came a much deeper voice from behind Remus.
"I'm Tanu." I replied a little agitated. (How many times am I going to introduce myself?)
"Well I'm Sirius, a little curious!" He said, smiling sheepishly, "You get it James, Sirius, curious, it rhymes, so funny!"
"That's not funny!" said a irritated Lily.
"WHATS GOING ON HERE!" bellowed Mrs. McGonagall. Her eyes fell on me (Oh no not again!) "Who are you?"
I plastered a fake smile on my lips and said, "I'm Tanasha, I just transferred here. Actually Professor D—I mean Professor Dumbledore told me to tell any teachers who asked my anything to talk to him." (Sorry Professor D. but I was stuck)
"What house are you in?" Professor McGonagall asked eyeing my suspiciously.
"Well actually, Professor Dumbledore went out for some work and told me to explore the castle. When my eyes landed on the sorting hat, I was tempted to put it on. Well so I did, the hat said I'm in Gryffindor."
"Well we will have to go back and do the sorting in front of Professor Dumbledore, and all you back to your dormitories now." Professor McGonagall stated.
"Wow we got out without detention." Sirius mumbled happily.
"Oh before I forget, two day detention for all of you." Professor McGonagall said pointing to each student. (Except me woooooooo!!!)
"B-b-but Professor, I ---" Lily began.
"I'm sorry but school rules are school rules, I'm sorry." Professor McGonagall nodded briskly and began walking toward Professor D's. office.
The walk to there was LONG and when I say long, I mean LONG. When we finally got there, I found out the password was Liver scotch (interesting!). Professor McGonagall, (man that's a long name, gotta think of a password, hmmmmmmmmm….. got it… P Mac.) And Professor D. talked amongst themselves, I sat by Fawkes. "So Fawkes Ol' buddy Ol' pal, how's life?" The Phoenix stared at me like I was crazy. "What?" I asked solemnly. After what seemed hours the two professors came back.
"Please wear this," P Mac said, "on your head." She added hastily. I stared at her for a moment. (I no, I'm not going to wear it on my foot, I'm not stupid!)
GRYFFINDOR!!
I smiled; maybe hanging out with Harry's parents won't be too bad.

Hey guys, what do you think?? I know it's not the best at this point but let me get in to making friends and then maybe it'll be better!! And sorry it's not that long, I'll try to make them longer!! Post comments!!
😃

~~~Mahak~~~

Edited by Mini786 - 18 years ago

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Sam

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Posted: 19 years ago

#13

Mahak, that was really nice!!!

It was short, and sweet...

I really like the way she calls Professor Dumbledore, Professor D.... and the Fawkes part is soooo cute!

C y@...

Actually, g'nite

-Sam 😊

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Tasneem

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Posted: 19 years ago

#14

amazingly interesting...

i have to confess .. i thought it will be boring but now i do take ma words backs..

its fabulous.. 👏

cant wait for the next chapter 😛

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Chandni

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Posted: 19 years ago

#15

Can't wait for thye next chapter it is great and is ur name Tanasha Salim 😉

Keep the great chapters going, can't wait 👏

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@Mini786

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: Bollywood_mad
Can't wait for thye next chapter it is great and is ur name Tanasha Salim 😉

Keep the great chapters going, can't wait 👏

Okay u caught me😆

my name is Tanasha but my parents changed it when I was younger at skewl so everyone calls me Mahak. But I secretly tell ppl ot call me Tanasha sumtimes!!

~~~Mahak~~~

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Vaishnavi (YSH)

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Posted: 19 years ago

#17

hey it was so guid!
sorry for not replying earlier!!!!!!!

i think it was gr888888

w8ing for more!!!!

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@Mini786

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Posted: 19 years ago

#18

Hey,
Here's the next part:

"Now then if you could give us a moment Minerva." Professor D said to PMac (oh man this nickname thing for her isn't working; I mean I don't even know the Professor, so no nicknames for her!) She smiled (well, I think that was a smile.) and walked out. "Hear me out." Professor D started, "NO talking about you being from the future—"
I cut him off, "Wait I can't tell anyone, not even my best friends' father!"
"No, no you may not, if he finds out about his later life he will try to change things, thus messing up his or his families' future." Professor Dumbledore said.
"How bout I tell him I'm from the future, but I leave everything about how his life is in the future out?" I asked
"No, means no." Professor Dumbledore said. "Ah, yes one more thing, the Blast from the past, has a few defects." Professor Dumbledore said.
"I'm going to loose my memory?" I asked terrified.
"Oh no," he chuckled, "You will be stuck here for quite some time."
"How much time we talking?" I asked excitedly.
"One year." He replied calmly.
"Tight!" I exclaimed. (One year with the Marauders, this is going to be so much fun!) "Oh by the way where will I be staying?"
"Oh, you're staying in the perfects room." Professor Dumbledore replied.
"Excuse me?"
"Well, there isn't much space for another person in the Gryffindor dorms, so you will be staying in a perfects room." He replied, "It's rather comfortable." He added.
"Okay." I turned around to leave, but I turned around to look at the younger Professor Dumbledore, he looked so different yet so alike. (It's creepy!)

*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*

I ran through the corridors to the Gryffindor dormitories.
"Password?" Asked the slim lady in the portrait, my smile faded as soon as it came.
"You see I'm a friend of Professor Dumbledore and he well told me to come check on the students, he forgot to give me the password." (It's not all a lie!)
"If you don't know the password, you're not going in!" (Looks like I'm stuck out here for the night!)
"Grizzly Pines!" Came a voice from behind me, I turned to find Mr. Potter. (I mean James!)
"Hi." I said to both James and Sirius.
"Hey." They replied ushering me in.
"We meet again." James said smiling.
"Yea." I replied lamely.
I turned around to find Lily, two other girls and the whole Marauders group.
"So tell us about yourself." James said as he made himself comfortable on the coach, next to Lily, who abruptly stood up, gave James a cold look and sat on the opposite chair. (Looks like they haven't came to friendly terms yet.)
"Well, wait I know all of you except you to." I smiled at the two girls.
"Im Nicole and this is Alice." Nicole said smiling
"Im Tanasha, but people call me Tanu." I replied.
"So you were about to tell us about yourself." Remus said.
"Yea, well can I trust you guys with something." This caught all of there attention.
"Yea, you can." James said eager to hear a secret.
"Well, lets' go to my room, because you're the only people I want, to know this." I said excitedly.
"Where's your room?" James asked.
"Since there wasn't any room for me in the dorms, I got one of the perfects rooms'." I said happily.
"Really?" Lily asked surprised.
"Yup!" I answered and led them to MY room.
I opened to reveal the prettiest room ever. The blue and white curtains were hung slightly open letting the cool breeze blow in. The bed was highly furnished; it was like a queen's bed. The four stands reached up to the ceiling, holding a blue cloth over the bed, giving it a royalty look. "Wow!" I muttered. I looked to see the same surprised face on the other seven people. "Well come in." I said happily.
James snapped from the trance and asked "So what was the secret?" This brought everyone out of there trance and they gazed at me.
I ran behind them closing the door and gestured them to sit down. They did that immediately, making sure they didn't mess anything up.
"Okay, here it is. I'm from the future!" I said loud and clear.

Here's the next part.
Hope u liked it.
If you didn't, feel free to make comments on what I should change.
😃

~~~Mahak~~~

Edited by Mini786 - 19 years ago

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Chandni

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Posted: 19 years ago

#19

Wow, I love it u have to continues quickly, like the way she is dissobeying Dumbeldor 😉 and wonder what james will do 😃

plz continue soon

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Chandni

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Posted: 19 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Mini786

Okay u caught me😆

my name is Tanasha but my parents changed it when I was younger at skewl so everyone calls me Mahak. But I secretly tell ppl ot call me Tanasha sumtimes!!

~~~Mahak~~~

thought so😆

Luv Chandni,😛

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