Blast to the Past!! Last Part, PG. 19!!!

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Tasneem

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Posted: 19 years ago

#21

loved it to the tee...

well do continue fast..
want to see the reactions of all the people 😛

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#22

Wow really good fan fic
cont soon!!

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Chandni

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Posted: 19 years ago

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ohhhhhhhh, pls write the next chapter or i will go mad

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Eran

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Great work Tanasha(Hope u lyke dat name!!) Pls do continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SSSSSSSSOOOOOOOnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Thanks for the awsoeme comments 😳
I will post later on because Im trying to make this next chapter a LONG one!!!
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~~~Mahak~~~

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Vaishnavi (YSH)

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Posted: 19 years ago

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radical@@@@@

i luv it!
and its gr8 tanu is confiding in them!!!!!!!!!!!!

it makes the hole thing so less compli!!!!!!!!!!!!1

continue soon!

i lyk it a lot!!!!!!!!!

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@Mini786

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Hey guys….
Here's the next LONG part:

The group of seven fell down hard from the places they were sitting and started laughing uncontrollably. "Seriously," James began, "what's the big secret?"
I glared at him, "that's the secret, and it's true I'm from the future!"
"No joke?" Sirius asked
"No!" I replied a bit too rudely.
"Okay, we believe you." James responded oh so sarcastically.
"Okay, I have an idea. You guys have only and only told me your names, right?" I said brightening up.
"Yea." The lot said together.
"Okay, then how come I know that you four," I nodded to Peter, Remus, Sirius and then James, "are called the Marauders?"
"The looks on their faces were priceless, if only I had a camera)
"You could have heard from someone." Lily cut in.
"How could I know that you're a----" I started ignoring Lilys' protests.
The looks on the Marauders faces stopped me from letting out Remus' deepest darkest secret, he is a werewolf.
"Look Professor Dumbledore told me to keep this a secret---"
Lily cut me off, "then why are you telling us this?" She inquired.
(It's official they don't believe me.)
"Because I needed to tell someone, and well I knew I could trust you guys." My eyes traveled to the four bewildered guys.
"I believe her." Remus stated and smiled at me.
Lily and the girls stood up and left giving me a stare.
"Can I talk to you in private for a minute….please?" Remus asked.
I smiled gratefully, "sure."
"You know about---"
I cut him off, "yea, I know about it, and don't worry I won't tell anyone!"
He smiled greatfully, "Hey Remus, do you think everyone else believes me?"
"If they won't then I'll make them, well the guys anyway."
"We the Marauders have decided we believe you." Sirius said dramatically.
"Are you sure Padfoot?" I asked.
"Yea now it's official." Sirius said his eyes open widely.
James shot Remus a look, "She knows?"
"Yea." Remus replied coolly.
"Fine, we believe you, but you mustn't tell anyone!" James stated firmly.
"I solemnly swear I won't tell anyone." I said with a slight grin.
"How much do you know, and how do you know?" James inquired a little dazed.
"Your son Harry showed it---"
"Opps" I said hoping he hadn't heard
"I have a son!" he yelled
He began singing:
"I'm a dad
Oh yea
I have a son
Oh yea."
While the other three Marauders began singing something different:
"We're Uncles
Oh yeah, Oh yea
We're Uncles
We're Uncles."
"You guys sound pretty good, you should make a band." I said amused. The five us sat together, and got to know each other better. (Well they got to know me better, I already knew them.)

James POV:

"Sirius, wake up we'll be late for breakfast!" I yelled in Sirius' ear.
Sirius jumped up and toppled out of bed. "Seriously, how did you become my best friend?" I asked.
We ran to find all the students leaving except one, Tanu.
"Wonder what's up with her?" Sirius asked more to himself.
She walked to the Professors table and crossed her arms, then walked away looking mad.
"I guess she lost." I said
"Lost, lost what?" Sirius asked his eyes widening.
"The argument." I responded. I knew when an argument was going on, I had one everyday.
"Argument, they were having an argument?" Sirius asked.
"Yes, my little buddy, they were having an argument and Tanu lost." I answered angrily. I had a Popsicle as a friend.
"How do you know she lost?" Sirius inquired.
"Because she looks mad!" I exclaimed madly.
"You look mad too, but you didn't--"
"That's it," I cut him off, "Your going down!" I plunged at him, but only minutes later Tanu levitated me off him.
"What's going on?" She interrogated.
"Nothing just got mad because I missed breakfast. Today I was going to---"
"Ask Lily out…. again?" She finished for me.
I stared at her for a moment skeptically but then I remembered and got over it.
We started walking toward potions, but the bell rang.
"Man, we're late." Sirius said as he punched the frame of the picture we just passed. The guy inside gave Sirius a murderous look before turning his attention back to his friend.
"Oh dreadful were late. Get over it dude, plus I thought you were used to this kind of stuff, being late an' all." Tanu said acting out the "dreadful" by placing her hand on her head and signing.
"Well were going to get a detention and I can't get one right now!"
"Why not?" I asked curiously.
"Well Nicole---"
"Oh god!" I said and passed him and hurriedly ran to class.
"Ah late again, Mr. Potter and Mr. Black, whose this young lady?" Professor Slughorn asked.
"I'm Tanu" She muttered, "I'm new." She added.
"Very well then, please be seated, and yes one detention for all three of you!"
"My first day here and BAM, I get a detention!" Tanu exclaimed, "I'm good, too good!"
After class we all went and sat by the pond. Remus read, Peter, god knows where he is; Sirius just sat there looking at a list of spells to hit that grease ball with. I just sat there and stared at Lily. When would she ever take me seriously, well she does but never looks at me in any other way, just the same ol' hatred works for her. She is just so beautiful, her green eyes sparkling and her hair bouncing at her ever movement.
"EARTH TO JAMES!" Sirius bellowed startling me causing me to jump. I fell down but to my surprise the ground swallowed me in, I couldn't breath. That's when I figured I must have fallen in the pond. I surfaced to see every one laughing uncontrollably, even Lily grinned. I smiled sheepishly at them and jumped out of the water. Only to jump back in when Tanu yelled my name. Again uncontrollable laughing and giggling could be heard. I jumped out again.
"What?' I snapped at her.
She looked like she was going to push me back in the water, but she thought better of it I guess.
"I wanted to show you something. Come on." She pulled me into the castle and turned around. She raised her eyebrows at me, then put her head in her hands, muttered a quick spell and I was dry. She took me to her room and ran to some bags.
"Hey, whose are those?" I asked her. She didn't bring any bags when she came here.
"Mine, Professor D. got them here somehow, but anyways look at this!" she said.
"What is---?"
"It's a video camera, I'm going to record you guys now and show it to your son, to show him how you guys were." She said excitedly, "He'll love it."

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That night only Lily and I were in the Gryffindor common room.
This is my chance.
I went up to her, "Er, Eva---Lily I was wondering---"
"No!" She replied sternly, she took her books and walked in to the girls dorms.
I stared after her, one day, one day it will happen.
I ran up to the boys' dormitory and found Remus staring out the window.
"Hey, what's up?" I asked him, he looked sad.
"Nothing." He replied.
"Come on, tell me man, we've been friends for this long and I'm sure you can trust me.
"I was just thinking, I have the coolest friends in the whole world, and how lucky I am for such friends who will, every month, go thru trouble just for me."
"I thought we were over that, were here for you Moony, if you need us, or if you don't, well always be there watching over you." I said
"Thanks man." Remus said coming up to me and giving me a brotherly hug. He went off and went to sleep immediately.
He smiled as he looked at his sleeping friends, what ever it is he would never leave there side.

Hey guys
Is this long???
I think it is
So did you like it??
Hope you did!!
Read and review please!!
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~~~Mahak~~~

Edited by Mini786 - 18 years ago

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Sam

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Posted: 19 years ago

#28

Nice chapter Tanu (can I call you that?)

I would give an arm to see Harry's happiness when he sees the video!!! It will be sooooo cool!!!

I wonder when James will find out that he's dead...

-Sam 😊

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Chandni

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Posted: 19 years ago

#29

Ohhhh, really good Harry will be really, happy but wonder if Lilly finds out that she is married to James in future 😆

Please post next chapter Mahek

Love Chandni 😛