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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
nice one..
now m going crazy thinking wht did snape do to cause this much ditres to lily 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
oh wow confusion....
what did snape do...
yea and i agree wid viash
if u dont continue soon..then dun dun dun...
😃

~~~Mahak~~~
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
Chapter 9 – The Snape Encounter .



James was furious. It was Snape who had done something to Lily. But she was still alright after that night. She started avoiding him only after he asked her out. But still James didn't bother to think about that reasoning. He had to find where Snape was. And he did.

"Snivelleus," he said in a mock sweet voice, "Where are you heading to? The bathroom? Are you planning to wash that slime ball of yours at last? All Right! That's great news!"

"What do you want Potter?" Snape spat out whipping out his wand.

"Whoa! Calm down man! I am here to worship you," James retorted sarcastically also taking his wand out.

"Where are your faithful sidekicks?" Snape asked peeking behind James as if the rest of the Marauders were hiding behind James.

"Scared?" James smirked.

"You wish. So what is it now? Have I done something wrong?" Snape asking in a mock scared voice.

" Oh no. I'm here for a mere investigation. I'll let you go if you give me the truth. So will you?"

"That depends Potter."

"On?"

"On the question you ask."

"Fine. What did you tell Lily that night?" James whispered.

Snape smirked. "Why does it bother you Potter?"

"Oh there are many reasons you wouldn't want to know. What did you tell her?"

"James!" said a voice behind them.

James whirled around to see Lily.

"What do you want?" James asked rather harshly.

"I don't like your tone, James. You needn't use it on me," Lily replied. "Why are you here? You should be in Charms now."

"YOU are supposed to be in Charms. I'm here on important business."

"What's that?"

"Is that your business? To hamper my business?"

"I was just trying to help."

"Oh Thanks. Looks like I don't need it."

"James what's the ma-."

"What's the matter, my foot! What's the matter with you? You were the one who is hiding things."

"Don't you think you're over reacting? Why do you care what Snape tells me?"

Snape's smirk grew wider.

"You're the one who is over reacting! I just asked you out! And you stop talking with me!"

"That's not the reason James!"

"Then what is it? You turned me down and I need to know why. Oh, Wait. I forgot! You won't tell me."

Lily remained silent. She looked at the smirking Snape and at the glowering James.

"Fine. I'll tell you."

"Evans! Don't even think about it," Snape spat.

"Why not? Its affecting too many people around me Snape. I'm sorry."

"James, Snape asked me out. That's all," Lily said.

James was shocked.

"That's the reason? Honestly Lily, I really don't understand why you should act like that. He just asked you out and I'm sure you turned him down…"James said doubtfully and Lily nodded. "Then what's the point?"

Lily looked embarrassed.

"I don't know what you're talking about." Lily said eyeing Snape.

James got the point... So did Snape.

"Oh I'm intruding your privacy am I? Fine, I'll leave. For now. But you'll be sorry you ever turned me down Evans. I gave you a chance. But you didn't use it. Now its revenge time. You'll face a sticky end!" Snape warned.

"Oh I can hardly wait to see what you are going to do Snape. You'll be the Worlds No. 1 LOSER who takes vengeance on a girl he fancied. Hats off to you!" Lily said in a sarcastic tone and walked off dragging a completely shocked James.

"I can't believe it! I just can't believe it!" James said in a hoarse voice.

"Yeah. Shocked me too," Lily said.

"No its just that he was polite to you!" James said.

"He was not polite! He just threatened me!" Lily exclaimed.

"Well if you ask me… that was very polite from Snivelly. So, since we skived Charms anyway. Care to join me for a walk around the lake for a good chat?" James asked offering is arm.

"Oh, No thank You! I better go and apologize to Flitwick and join the class," Lily said checking her watch.

"Oh I don't think so! I need to know why you've been acting like that," James said pulling Lily toward the door.

"Fine! I'll come. But no Laughing!"

"Fine."
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Okay....This Chapter came out a bit tooo tooo soon....

Well couldn't resisr.

Its just Ok.... but the next one wll be a treat .. I promise...

I haven't given it to even Sam yet..

I'll wait to c the response for this chap...

Moreover I'm sure you guys will try to stab me when u find out the reason for Lily's stupid behaviour.........


Well Reviews plsssssss
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
APARNA!!! you darling! i am so gonna giv u a chocolate wen i see u nxt.... i guess in the trip...

but gr8 gr8 gr8 chappie!!!!!!!!!

luvya!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
yayy...
awsome..
i knew it..
😃

~~~Mahak~~
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
good one..
plz continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
Well Its been a month since I updated and 3 reviews..... God! My fanfic must suck..

I'm not letting that get me though...That too on Diwali eve...

I'm giving my next chapter to Sam... so it should be up soon. Hope you like that

So every1 just here to wish you all A HAPPY DIWALI

Cheers!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
Chapter 10 – The Walk and Talk



Lily and James walked around the lake and an awkward silence prevailed until James broke it.

"Well?" James demanded.

"What?" Lily asked forging innocence in her voice.

"Don't play with me. Why did you avoid me?" James asked.

"You're so nave James! Seriously I never imagined anyone, any boy for that matter, would mind if I avoided them," Lily said.

"Thanks for that. But I still didn't get an answer!"

"You find every way to embarress me, don't you?"

"Well, I can't help it if it embaresses you now, can I? So go on tell me."

"FINE." Lily stopped on her tracks and turned to face James. James was astounded by the way she looked at the moment. Her green eyes were blazing and her blood red hair curtained her perfect face.

"I'll have to start from the beginning," Lily started, "The reason I was avoiding you was because I was confused. And the reason I was confused was because Snape asked me out. You asked me out for the first time in our 4th year. And to be frank, I seriously didn't like you, let alone fancy you. You were extremely handsome and smart and famous, no denial, that was about everything a girl can ask for. But you were big headed and egoistic and that was the biggest turn off for me.

You tried to get me to date you for all these years but I had nothing for you. Then came the seventh year. You were in the Head's Compartment looking as good as ever, and asking me to become your friend. I thought you had changed. You had changed. You were a good Head, good wizard and best of all, a good Friend." Lily paused and then continued. "And then Snape asked me out and I refused. Why? He was the meanest person I've ever met. He had nothing I desired of. One fine day you asked me out. And I, as conventionally as ever, refused. It was spontaneous for me. I didn't think. I refused. But it made me think. I turned down Snape as I hated him and I had I reason. But you? You were a lot better these days. You were the ideal man."

James eyes widened in shock.

"That made me confused. That made me think. That made me realize. I had nothing against you. But I didn't want to accept. You know, I couldn't accept the fact that I had actually fallen for your charm, the James Potter Charm."

"Cheers, Lily. I need that compliment," James said dryly and Lily laughed.

"Well that's the reason. I know it is stupid. But… I couldn't…you know," Lily stammered looking at him.

"I understand," James said and pulled her into a hug.

"You do?" came Lily's muffled voice.

"Mmm-Hmm," James replied and let her go and took a step back and in a formal voice asked, " So Lily, there is this Hogsmede weekend approaching…I was just wondering. Would you go out with me?" James asked.

Lily faked thinking and said, "Alright then, I'll meet you at the entrance at 11AM."

And then they laughed. It seemed so familiar. Just like the evening in the Quidditch pitch. And both of them knew that they had just encountered another evening, which they would never forget in their whole life.

They walked back to the castle hand in hand, ready to surprise their friends, they reached the entrance hall and Lily stopped.

"James I need to tell you this. I've spent 6 years hating you and its not easy to like you now. So give me some time and space, Alright? I swear I'll catch up," Lily earnestly.

"Anything you ask for, Sugar," James said with amusement in his voice.

"Sugar, urgggg,"Lily rolled her eyes and dragged him back into the Great Hall where their friends were waiting for them.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#99

Well

the next is up on Diwali nite and hope you like it..... plssss review i seriously need some encouragement

😭

and i'm not posting my next until i have at least 5 reviews

Edited by LilyJamesPotter - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Lolz, 😳

Really nice chapter, extremely cute!

And I loved the confessions part 😉 It was soooooooooooooo romantic cum cute 😆

James Potter....*sighs* how I love him *sighs again*

-Sam 😛

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