OS-You Drive me Crazy, Part-III,(last ud) pg-6 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
Chapter 1-
Whoa!
This is called utter craziness...
Kiss without even the common pleasentryšŸ˜†

Chapter 2
Boss ho tho aisašŸ˜†...
Na koi kaam diya na apni shakal dikhayi...
Bas one way mirror se usse goortha raha...
Superb ASTšŸ‘šŸ˜†...

Good job Jo
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
wow... amazing OS..:) kiss at 1st sight...??? OMG..!! dis is reallly strange...here avi is t0tally diff frm our sharmilla avi...<3 lov it...update it sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: prash_t

Heyyy Jo Darling😳 Hii Mrs.Thakur😃

I didnt resd my post this time..šŸ˜›

Hmmm Hmm..so Mr Avi has appointed her purposely..Thts sweet!!

Shikha gave him correct advice...šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ First apologise, make freinship with her and thn tell ur feelings😳yap she has done her duty of good sister but bhai manta kitni hai dekhte hašŸ˜†išŸ˜‰

He is totally crazy for her🤪 I love thatšŸ˜‰

But Arpi is scared of him... How will he deal with this

Nd yeah ..I hope Arpi forgives him😳 hehe just wait for UD dear you will find it allšŸ˜‰

Plzzz update soon...

Love you sweets😳 love yaa too darling😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: danno

hehehhe
just love it
yeh wala avi toh bada hi dabangg haui...
hehehe
love this part...and new bos and secretory...hmm...
love it
keep it up


Hey Sharu dear hw r u doing?
hehehe abhi to Avi ki Dabangaii shuru hui hai
wait for next šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Cuty16

šŸ˜› hye jo

loved it reading dear.
U was right avi is not going to cum in reality now.But now atleast he is applying his little sense.
He spended whole night in front of her house what a luv yaar.
I loved d avi talked to d Principle.
But is scared of avi hope she forgets everything and now she is avi's PA also,
just dat after knowing d boss dont know she will continue to work or not.
But i know avi will soon make her fall for him.
Thanks dear for dedicating such a nice part to me.
Will wait for next one.


Hey Rups dear
thanx for liking it
he can't come back now,
spending nights for one sight is nothing just wait for next
yap deewngi asar to karegi hi naa,😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Chapter 1-
Whoa!
This is called utter craziness...
Kiss without even the common pleasentryšŸ˜†

Chapter 2
Boss ho tho aisašŸ˜†...
Na koi kaam diya na apni shakal dikhayi...
Bas one way mirror se usse goortha raha...
Superb ASTšŸ‘šŸ˜†...

Good job Jo


Hey Nidhs thanx for comment dear
and thanx for your suggestions,
AST ki craziness ab dekhošŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gkdlover

wow... amazing OS..:) kiss at 1st sight...??? OMG..!! dis is reallly strange...here avi is t0tally diff frm our sharmilla avi...<3 lov it...update it sooon


Hey GKD lover/Hamda (m i rightšŸ˜•) dear
thanks for liking😳
yap this Avi is not like our Dagaddumm shy Avi,
yaar That Avi is just incomparable can't even think to draw anyone like himšŸ˜
but inki deewangi kuch hatke haišŸ˜†šŸ˜†

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey gals thanks for liking the previous parts of OS
here is the last part for it,
hope you will like it,
this one is the longest one hehe..

Part-III

Arpita determine in her mind and knock at Avdhesh's cabin door, while Office was almost vacant,

Arpita-"May I come in Sir?"

Avdhesh-" Please come in."

Arpita- to herself "'Please'! Strange" to him "Excuse me sir, I came to ask for my job, is there any work for me or I don't need to come tomorrow?, I mean You don't ask me to do any thing whole day! You have any doubt on my abilities? If is there anything like that its fine I am not coming tomorrow onwards."

Arpita said that as she was feeling odd now and whole day she felt like some one was looking at her.

Avdhesh was shaken by the thought that she will not come the next day without any second thought he turn toward her and said-"Why? Is there any problem? Why don't you want to come tomorrow, its your Office you don't need to work like employee like others, you are special."

Arpita was shocked to see him as her boss-" Tum! Oh My God I should get it earlier when I got this job without interview, how foolish I was, Listen Mr. M not scared of you any more OK , and m not your employee any more, M leaving and you don't dare to follow me any more."

She was about to leave when Avdhesh hold her wrist tightly and throw her to his chair, he set his hands on it, now they were just few inches away, he was observing her face closely while she was seething with anger,

"let me go" she pushed his hands from chair to find a way out but all vain again he was in own world.

"You know something, yesterday, just before I saw you, or I should say you touched me, I was telling Simple that there can't be any girl who can made me to love her, to feel for her, but just next second you were there and I forget my own self ,

(he smiled or Blushed) you know I should admit it You drive me Crazy Girl, I don't know what I m doing? May be this is what others called love I just know one thing when see you I feel like hug you, like kiss you, don't you think about leaving me ok I will follow you till my last breath, can't live without watching you, you get it naa." And he winked at her, while she was scared by his words.

Arpita-"what do you think of your self? I m not doll you want to play with, and I m not scared of you, what do you think, you will show me your money and status n I will be yours forget it Mr. m not like gals of your town, just let me go." She pushed him hard and this time he stepped back so she can be on her feet.

She stands up and face him confidently "look Mr. I don't care u r MD or what of this company m not your employee any more, n let me tell you one thing clearly that you would be nothing if your Dad didn't give you all this."

She was about to leave when he hold her from back and drag her close by waist, he was unaffected by her words, he was feeling her, smelling her hairs , he whispered in her ear-"you know some thing I didn't hear any word of yours," he turn her to face him, look strait in her eyes this time he was breath close to her, his eyes in her eyes, -"I don't know how to express my feelings, I was never so bad in wording my thoughts, this time its different thing, I can feel it but can't express it, I want you to feel it that's why I kissed you, you may call it lust if you want, but I don't think its any thing like that, if its that why its getting stronger every time I see you, every time I see you I feel it more stronger then before and if you are not in front of my eyes I turn rest less until I find you around me, I want you always in front of me," his voice and eyes make her numb, she forget that she suppose to resist, in his embrace, his breaths were striking at her face making her more numbered. She can feel his restless warm breaths, his lips were close to hers, he slightly touched her lip's corner with his, "I think I LOVE YOU" his words "I Love You" and that slight touch took her to other world. For few secs she was lost in his embrace her hands were on his chest earlier she was forcing him back but now she was feeling him, his strong muscles under her fingers and his heart beats, her hands were gliding to take him in a warm hug but at the same second.

"Avdhesh! What the hell is going on here?" It was Mr. Thakur Avdhesh's dad.

Arpita get her senses back by his thunderous voice and she push Avdhesh back and rushed out of the cabin to leave the place.

Arpita reached home, this time she was not scared not crying even she was wondering at her own reaction to his words, How can she do it?

"I was here to do something, to be something in life, and here I m! What s going on in my life? God give me some hint, what to do? How can I trust his words when I don't know any thing about him, oh he himself don't know he love me or not he said he Think he loves me."

Right then Manjari returned from collage-"Arpita what happened why are you looking so confused? How was your day? You got the job naa!"

Arpita-"yeah, got it and loose it too,(under her breath- "and loose my peace of mind and soul too")

Manjari-"What? Have you said anything else? How did you loose the job in just one day?"

Arpita-"Leave it yaar! I just want to rest in peace for some days. I am not going to anywhere for few days, I have to find my self first, lost it some where today, may be in his eyes."

Last line was again very slow so Manjari thought she was talking to herself.

They had dinner thought Arpita was not interested Manjari forced her for it, She suggest her to go out for night walk or coffee in coffee house in front of their building but Arpita refused it too, When Manjari fell asleep Arpita too tried to sleep, she closed her eyes she was half asleep she felt like he was there next to her, she can feel his breath on her lips as she felt in office before she left, she smiled a bit, his worm lips were about to touch hers as he did in collage, suddenly Arpita get up and find he was not there its just her imagination, she was still stuck in those moments, she was still lost in his eyes and his words, she still can feel the intensity of those breaths, this time she was restless, suddenly an idea struck her mind, she rush to the window and find him standing there,

Yes Avdhesh was again standing under her window and this time he don't need to hide himself as she was there to see him as he was there to see her. They both were looking in each other's eyes for many hours, lost, away from time and spaces; they were in their own world.

Manjari shacked her shoulder lightly,

Arpita-"Huun, Manjari when did you woke up?"

Manjari-"Madam I m calling you from last half an hour you were lost in your own world, come back now it's almost 5 your alarm woke me but it can't affect you naa,"

Arpita-"5 oh my god!" Arpita was wondering she spent whole night standing by window and he was there whole night standing on road. She looked at him, yes he was there smiling at her, she blushed a bit and close the curtain to hide him from Manjari.

Manjari-"Oh ho so now madam ji is hiding him from me haan!" She taunted as she was watching them from last half an hour. "So its clear you both are in love haan!"

Arpita-"No Manjari there's nothing like that as you are thinking, he is crazy guy, and I m not like him OK, M sure He will forget me in few days when I will not come in front of him."

Manjari-"lets see, By the way why can I feel bit of craziness in your eyes."

Arpita-"shut up Manjari, there's nothing like that ok, I was not feeling like sleep that's why I was here, and now m going to sleep OK. You go to your collage and all, I m in mood to rest for few days, its going to be Greek holiday haha."

Manjri-"Oh ho you saw him down there but still you want to be at home alone! Will you not call police for help haan?"

Arpita-"Manjari, Dimaag mat kha, let me sleep ok , byeee" she throw the pillow at her and took the blanket to sleep or pretending to sleep she still want to have look at him may be he is still there.

Arpita spend whole day thinking about him, and again at night she gets back to her window when Manjari was sleeping "will he come tonight?" she asked herself, "Why I am expecting him? No he should not come; I should sleep by now then expecting him here." She was disappointed to not find him under window, as she turn to leave she saw him at the terrace of coffee house in front of her building. He was watching her every second since she came to window.

Week past this way just looking at each other whole nights, Finally Arpita decide to clear it all as every night she was feeling more attached to him. More restless to see him, is it love? She thinks to clear it and ask him to stop playing with her if he was doing so.

At evening after dinner Manjari asked her for coffee and this time she decided to go with her as she was asking her from many nights and she was denying her,

They reached at coffee shop, Manjari ordered two cups of coffee, and the boy bring it for them, Arpita was lost in her thoughts-"I have to make it fast, Oh god coffee must be so hot, I should finish it fast, what if he came and didn't find me there! If he didn't wait for me? What will I do?"

Boy-"Mam your Coffee."

Arpita-(looking at her watch) Oh no its so hot, I will be late, can't you bring it earlier,"

Manjari-"Getting late for what?"

Boy-"for our meeting"

Arpita looked up at him he was none other then Avdhesh himself in coffee boy's dress,

Arpita-"what are you doing here? In that dress! Are you mad or something?"

Manager-"Avdhesh.. Table number 5, fast!"

Avdhesh-"Yes Sir." And he left them with a smile.

Manjari-"that's why I want to come here, don't know what happened between you both, but the next day I went to collage after your job day, He was not there, His friends were asking me about you, they were angry at me, I tried to find the reason then Simple told me that, he left his home and office from that day, his dad was angry with him don't know why! But he wants him to be at home but he is denying for it again and again, you know he is working here all these days, and even nights he is staying here, and I don't think I need to tell you the reason."

Arpita was confused, she looked at him, he give her a smile again, she lowered her sight," is this because of that day, because I said all that, or his dad was angry because of me?" she tried to find out herself.

Manjari left her alone, after few hours whole caf was empty, she was alone there, Avdhesh sit in front of her, she looked at him there was tears in her eyes,

Avdhesh-"Hey are you cring? Look if you don't want me to come in front of you fine I will not show you my face ever again, but plzz don't cry,"

He gets up and step toward the exit " but you can't stop me from loving you and looking at you, don't worry you will not see me, and I will not trouble you."

He opened the door to leave.

"Avdhesh!"

Avdhesh was surprised she called him, by name, she want him to stay, he turned and she just banged on him, she was in his embrace, Avdhesh want it to happen but never expect it out of him imaginations, and what happened next was out of his imaginations, she kissed him on lips, Avdhesh was on top of the world.

Avdhesh-"Wow! M I dreaming? Ohhh"

Arpita-"this time I don't know how to express my feelings for you so choose your way for it. Love you too, Hope you still think that you love me."

Avdhesh-"think! Arpita I love you! God You really drive me crazy Girl, I never thought that I will do all this, You know I didn't sleep till the moment I saw you, whenever I close my eyes its you who come in front of me, and I forget everything even to sleep but when you looked at me I feel so fresh, and alive, I never thought I can live without my car, out of my luxurious home, listening someone's words with pleasure, with smile and here I m doing all this a waiter's job with pleasure, because I was waiting for night when I could see you."

Arpita-"I m sorry, because of me you had to do this job, you had to left your home, is your dad still angry with you?"

Avdhesh-"What? Neah, My dad was not angry with me, he was a bit furious earlier but he know that I m love and he give me freedom to do anything to get my love, that's why m here."

Arpita-"What? You are here for me!"

Avdhesh-"haha you thought m working here for money and all no ways yaar, I m working here as it is in front of your building, and its owner allowed me to stay at nights on terrace."

Arpita-"What! You know something You Are really Crazy."

Avdhesh-"No, YOU DRIVE ME CRZY"

And they hugged each other with all love.

Some times words turn feeble to express feelings,

But feelings find its way to express it self,.

When thousands of words turn to nothing

Only a touch is enough to speak it all,

When all poets loose their words,

Just a glance of someone express it all…

You Drive Me crazy


Plzz drop your comments,
and press Likwa if you like it 😳
n yap m open for criticism too.. thanx


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Posted: 14 years ago
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dear realy i have readed it
it is so funtastic
see house full
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Posted: 14 years ago
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1 small request neha,if u can fulfil. . .can u plz plz plz write a super duper romantic date on dis cute couple. . .plz. .just askn. .if u cnt thn its ok:(:(

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