OS-You Drive me Crazy, Part-III,(last ud) pg-6 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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waaaitinggg dear for d update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Kalitondra

Tell us more, so if i don t like , i'll kick Priya very well 😆😃😃

btw , wher is the next for Rajkumari Arpita & Avi the Gentelman & Pappu the monkey 😆, i'm waiting 😔



Hiii Di 😃

hehe yap i know you can't be harsh to anyone specially to us 😉 so need to worry Priya😆
Your Princess Arpita and Avi is on the way di, hope if my net not trouble me much i will Update by eve😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: MuktaJaiswal

😊Hi Neha dr 😊

Nice update dr👏

I am sure priya will fnd sm gal 😳fr Avdesh n will change his thoughts abt lv.❤️

N @priya no worries 😃dr I wuld never kick u, as I wud be blwn by the zatkas u will gv in this OS 😉😉hahahha😆😆

waiting ur UD 😃

@priya

bye


Hi Mukta di thanx for liking this one,
😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hye jo,
thanx for writing sumthing once again.
Liked the preview,so Avi u dont belive in luv ok no probs dear soon u will start beliving.
Title is too gud waise.
I will wait for d update.
Sorry dear for late rply i was a bit busy, beg me!



Hey Rups dear 😊
than mat bol yaar,
or i should thank you for bearing my writing 😆😆
if you liked the title then check the Update too hope you will like it too
and Sorry for what ???😕
my net is too busy so i can't notice your delay in commenting hehe😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: yoga23priya


Saku i know that ☺️☺️☺️

till you are no one will do anything to me 😳 Lo ye love birds fir shuru ho gaye 😆😆


Priya and jess dear i know how true is your love
i think we should think something about this couple😃 don't know whr is CP and 'Family' our OS😕

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Posted: 14 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Any doubts on whom Bahiyaaji is lattoo

Arpita is always his undoing na😆
Continue on👍🏼


Hey Nidhs dear
yap we all know on whom he is lattoo
but lets find how crazy he is going to be for her😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi everyone,

than for liking the Pre of OS
here is the first part of it hope you will like it
and for this time as Priya suggested their will be no song and not even ma boring shyari hehe,
this UD is dedicated to Priya for such beautiful OS and Meera di for bearing my Hindi hehe

You Drive Me crazy

It was as usual day of his life but he don't have any idea what fate has in store for him,

RV Tanmay Chulbul Simple all were standing out of canteen as usual as it wad their daily routine to bunk classes until their gang leader join them His car stopped with a scream as it was at high speed as always and it announced his arrival, ,

RV-"Oye Avdhesh where were you buddy, this collage seems like a ruin without you yaar" RV delivered a high fine to Avi as he sit between him and Simple.

Avi-"Aree yaar same thing again, Dad's office work, you know how's my dad." Avdhesh was only son of his family and he was helping his dad in his company beside his collage as it was his dad's orders.

Tanmay-"see I told them you must be busy with some work and this Chulbul said "May be you were busy with some girl friend or girl friends"."

Avi-"Ah you guys know M not interested in romantic stuff and your so called love and all only exist in romantic novels only, (Simple glared at him) come on yaar, I mean how can you go mad for some one just in one sight haan?"

Simple-" Ohhoo Mr. Thakur we will see , let the time come when you find the one who will drive you crazy.."

Avi-" Ha! Simple sweety that girl does not exist on this earth at least not in this town, look around you ever girl want to be with me, and I don't like them at all.."

At the same time someone's hand touched Avi's shoulder and she move ahead without looking at him, she just said

"Oh I m really sorry!"

Avi felt a bit moved by that touch, but at the same moment his ego asked him-

"how can someone ignore me, without looking at me how can she move ahead, besides her voice was quite different from others he didn't heard it before , is she new?" he left all behind and followed the girl she was with someone may be her friend. Avi get that she touched his shoulder as she was falling at that moment, Avi stopped at distance from them, the girls stopped at the counter, Avi can recognize one of them she was Manjari one of his die heart fans , he getr v\back to his gang but his eyes were set on them as he can read lips he was getting what Manjari was saying

"OH don't worry dear you will get one very soon"

Avi want to enjoy with friends but his heart was not allowing him for it .He want to look the girl's face who touched him few moments ago, the owner of that voice, girls ordered something at counter and then they sat on chairs, It was all Avi's luck that their chairs were in his sight, but girls was not facing him her hairs were on her left cheek, which was facing Avi and she was arranging her right side. Avi noticed her appearance she was dressed in decent Salwaar Kameez of red and white her figure was just perfect not skinny not so bulky even she was wearing her red net duppata wide open but it was showing her curvy figure more beautiful, Avi's eyes were set on her face this time as it was hidden behind hairs just for one look while others were busy in chatting and all Avi's eyes were turning intense every second , the wait was driving him more restless, He just banged his fist on fence he was sitting , It attract others attention, but Avi didn't realized it as at the same moment the girl got up from her chair,she got some call . Manfari was holding her wrist as she want her there with her for more time as she get up and turn out side to leave , Her face was visible to Avi this time , Her beauty mesmerize him totally she was Pink in color just light pink lipstick may be it's the natural color of her lips because Avi can see only a thin line of kohl in her beautiful eyes, she was in hurry she get out of canteen and as they were sitting in the way t main gaite she came toward him , he too get o his feet and start walking toward her as she was proceeding to him he was drowning in her beautiful eyes , they were getting closer, for Avi it seemed like she was only one thee with him and they were in walking in some other world, , time has stopped , only thing visible to him was the girl in front of him,

As she was about to pass him (again without noticing that he was looking at her like an idiot with sweet smile) Avi hold her wrist , he drag her back and next second she was in his arms, for a second he looked in her dee eyes and then he did what his heart ordered him to do, Her lips were alluring him and he accept their accepts it , he kissed her passionately as that's his first and last desire, as she was their for him, as they were alone in whole world at that moment.

Avi was lost in her in kissing her, In feeling her at the moment, he didn't felt anything else since the moment he saw her, he didn't realized that al most whole collage was gathered around them as he was holding the girl tightly and kissing her like an old mad lover, while she was protesting since the moment he hold her wrist but in his dreamland Avi didn't realized that he was practicing force on her, Girl was trying to push him back by all power she had but her power was nothing in front of his passion,

Firstly whole gang was shocked to see Avi approaching a girl, and then more shocking was that he was kissing a girl publicly ,

Chulbul-"see I told you guys he has a girl friend, and she is here in front of you all, look at him, he is mad for him,"

Tammy-"OMG yaar, I can't believe he was hiding her from us."

RV-"If he wants to hide her, then why is he kissing her in front of everyone? Something in wrong here."

Simple-"Oh no guys we are in trouble, stop Avi. I m sure this girl is not her girlfriend if she is, she is not in good mood, just look at her she want him to leave her, he is forcing himself on her."

When simple noticed that the girl was hitting Avi at chest as hard as she can in his strong hold she suggest others to stop Avi and let the girl go. RV stepped forward, though it was embarrassing for him but he patted at Avi's shoulder, Avi didn't respond to his pat, after calling his name twice finally

RV hold his arm and drag him away from girl, she was shocked and horrified.

Avi's eyes were still on her as he want to say some thing but he came to reality when he noticed tears in her eyes.

Avi-"RV leave me yaar, she is crying, leave me."

RV-"yes she is crying, if you insult some one publicly like this she will cry. What the hell you were doing Avi? Is she your girl friend? You never told us about her."

Avi was shocked as he realized they were surrounded by whole collage and guys were whistling and clapping while girls were frowning at the girl, while she was crying, Avi saw her tear and he pushed RV back and again came close to the girl

"hey look, plz don't cry.."

He want to say a lot of things , he want to explain his feelings, which he never felt before he was searching for words suddenly girl slapped him hard and run away from their.

Her slap didn't hurt him but her the flow of tears he saw on her cheek , the moment she faced him to slap was unbearable for him, he want to go behind her, he followed her till gate but she get in the auto riksha standing out there while RV, Tammy, Chulbul hold Avi to stop him from going behind the girl.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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First of all... Lemme say..

It was a fantabulous update...!!! Lovely..Juz lovely update...

Areee waah!! He kissed her in front of everyone...😳Im juz thinking about Arpi's condition...

Omg...she must be soo embarrassed..

Bt darling Jo...lovely start yaar,...


Continue... Plz update sooon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!!!!!! He kissed her..without even having any type of introduction..etc..😲😲

Now dat must have been really embarrassing for poor Arpi...

But this shows hw crazy Avi has gone..😉😉

Awesome update Neha..👏👏

Love ya..🤗🤗
Edited by jes_jade - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hye jo,
haaha ha loved it.
Arpi drive him so so so crazy .
Hope ki avi came back to reality soon and realized what he had done.
First time i was laughing when avi got slap.
🤣 🤣

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