OS-You Drive me Crazy, Part-III,(last ud) pg-6

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joliefille

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Pallavvi
1 small request neha,if u can fulfil. . .can u plz plz plz write a super duper romantic date on dis cute couple. . .plz. .just askn. .if u cnt thn its ok:(:(

Hey Pallavi dear
thanx for liking and about ur request,
well i think i am pathetic when i came to Romance
but will try to write one for sure atleast uske baad no one will expect any romantic thing from me hehe😆

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joliefille

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: jes_jade
Neha !!!🤗🤗Jess!!!!🤗🤗

Hw r u ???

Read part 2 & 3 !!!!!!!!

I have no words...am just speechless...👏👏👏
I'm fine dear😳

what about you aajkal dikhti hi nahi😕

awww😳😳😳😳

Ur OS is just outstanding ... mind blowing !!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Arpi drives Avi crazy...& ur OS drove me crazy..It was so beautiful !!😍😍😍
Naa yaar , how can i dare to do that ur hubby will kill me😆😆

Hats off to u !!
awww my romantic climax writer u gave "Haafiz" a beautiful end if you hav time and can write one for this one too as a perfect date😉😳 i'm not asking to write whole but just like previous one all most\ whole hehe

Love ya !!!!🤗🤗
Love yaa too dear🤗

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joliefille

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Cuty16
Hye jo,
thanks dear for such long part,just loved it,wow avi left d house and everying for arpi what luv dear.
Arpi understand him and started loving also dats wonderfull part of d Os,
loved it jo hope to read more such os and ff by u.

Hey Rups dear😊
Yap he was crazy for her that's why materialistic pleasures doesn't matter for him😉
and his love and passion make her understand his love 😳
well don't know how long but next is on my editor's desk so ask Priya for it hehe😳

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joliefille

@joliefille

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: danno
just love it
woww
arpita too kiss him...
yeahhh...

Hey Sharu hw r u dear😛
thanx for liking yaar😳
hehe when he can kiss her publicaly then why can't she hehe yaa its othr thing that that time they were alone😉

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joliefille

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Eowyn
Pyaar jaisa shayadh hi koi pagal pan hoga is dhuniya mein...
And AvIta's love is craziness at its peak...
It brought a very rich spoilt brat to the position of a waiter...
It brought a very practical level headed girl who hated the mad guy who kissed her to mad world of his love...
Loved the ending Jo👏

Hey Nidhs you are absolutely right dear,
pyaar se badhkar koi paglpan ya nasha ho hi nahi sakta,😉
ans our Avita is always on its peak no matter is it show or some FF or OS😳
Love has the power to change the world yahan to sirf nature aur thinking hi change hui hai❤️😳
thanx for liking the ending dear
it was all about how much a feel can change you , feel of love, feel of someone special in whole world , who meant for you only😉