FF YOU ARE MINE Part-4 'Wen I lvd U-IV'page-19

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello Guys i am back with my new FF hope you all like it 😳



Characters:-


Avdhesh Singh Thakur-

"Rich Arrogant, Rude businessman of India now hardly visit his nation only for his mother, world know this Avdhesh apart from this there's another side of AST which is revealed to only some close friends n someone special whom he valued more then life, but at same time there's someone in the world who's thought make his blood boil, he is searching for that person from years ."


Arpita Rai-

"Princess of state of Lalanpur, came back to her hometown after five years stay in London to get engaged to a Prince chosen by her Father Raja Saahab Mahesh Chandra Rai,"

Synopsis-

He is on search of someone he has some deabts to pay that person and he promised himself that he will make sure hell for that person who his whole world revolve around whether like it or not who changed his peaceful world full of love and happiness though he someone special for him now but whom he claims to his only solace that person should be HIS and only HIS and in his words " YOU ARE MINE"


Video Representation of Synopsis and Characters


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yGCoTP0pHtA[/YOUTUBE]



Precap on Page 2

Part 1 ... "The Journey Begins "on Page 3

Precap ... on Page 6

Part 2 ... "When I saw You" on Page 8

Precap... on Page 10

Part 3 ... "Welcome Back" on Page 12

Part4... "When I Loved You-I" on Page14

"When I Loved You-II"on Page 16

Precap... on Page 17

"When I Loved You-III" on Page 17

"When I Loved You-IV" on Page 19


waiting for you views and any mistake i'm sorry...feel free comment😉

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Cuty16 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hye jo, now congrates on your 3rd ff dear.
So avi in a new avtaar rich arrogant buisness man.
And arpi princess of Lallanpur.
Raja mahesh chandra(i started imagining mahesh rai kings get up)
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Both the title is nice but i think
"U Are Mine" is more nice.
I know dis one also going to be as rocking as Desire.
Do update soon dear.
Edited by Cuty16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on your 1st, 2nd, 3rd FF :P
I never commented on or desire, i know... i'm too lazy to read it.. is it finished now??

Ummm.. you are mine sounds much better for this FF :D
i really liked the synopsis, it feels like their is another tragedy FF lined up now haha :P
Edited by amnaM - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hiee Sugar Pie.. Missed Ya.. New FF.. Oh Wow.. I want title as YoU ARE MINE. It suits the FF. lovely concept..





update soon..
Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heyy neha !!🤗

hw r u??

missing u a lot..😭

Loved the introduction...⭐️

I guess YOU ARE MINE is perfect..👍🏼


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heyy Teacher ji 🤗🤗

Congo Shongo on your 2nd FF 🤗 🤗

if you ask my opinion then i think Love May Be will be good 😳 😳 but You are mine is also good 😳

Love ya TJ 🤗
Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi everyone,

congrates Neha fo this new kahani, liked, i know both speak engrezi hai very well 😆, 'nd may be they 'll talk in english, but i have a preference to "Tum mere ho" , i feel it more romantic ya u can say "Tu es moi ", (isn't frensh 'nd Paris romantic 😉😆)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Neha, I love your new ff. Why didn't you send me a pm, I feel so bad for commenting so late. It is very interesting, please continue. I wonder who Avi owes debt to,. OMG Arpi is going to marry another man. I can't wait to see Avita's meeting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Precap
Hey guys thanx for such nice responce ,
n about the title too so its decided its
"You Are Mine"
"A beautiful face, full of innocence , love, kindness" he closed his eyes, and the face emerge more clear in front of his eyes, A young girl around 12 running in corridors , garden

"Avi catch me if you can!"

A soft sweet smile run on his lips , but in a flick of second that smile vanished , muscles turn stern as the sweet voice turn in harsh n full of disgust tone

"Avdhesh you don't deserve me! I hate you! Don't you dare to touch me , or show me your dirty face ever in life, !"

His clutches tighten n the wine glass he was holding got crushed n a drop of salty water rolled down from those eyes on ground with few drops of blood.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heyyy TJ 🤗

Me first me first

Precap seems to be Interesting 🤔

Ouch Ouch Avi dear...i know TJ is cruel to hurt you but don't worry when i will Update i will add loads of Romance 🤣

Got job as FF editor * Mom Dad you are baby got a job finally 😎 🤣*

love ya 🤗
Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago

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