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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey everyone thanx for liking the GKD of DVbharti, n sorry for updating so late n not replying ur posts as my net is not working properly. heres the second part.
hope u will like it.
Part II

Next day Avi reached at Arpi's place to hand over the script to Dr.shukla, Arpi was sitting in garden under the tree she was doing something with her thread n croshia , but she didn't respond when she saw him coming n ignore him completely Avi get in the house he looked out for Dr, everywhere but he couldn't find him anywhere, at last he had to come to Arpi "Arpi where is Sir?"

Arpi-"how do I know?"

Avi "if u don't know them who would know that!" he said it in scolding manner "I don't like fun all the time Arpi ! I m asking something bz of reason I had to handover him these pages ."

Arpi-"ok ok , then go and give him, may be he in bath! He has some workd to do ! you know he is not so free, that he could wait for u all the time." She replied back .

Avi-"(laughing) uh so tell me that way na , that he is in bath!"

His laugh make her more annoyed , so she gets up to leave him alone in garden,, as she turns to leave Avi cover her chair n said "today I m invery bad mood, I m warning u all , don't disturb me!"

Arpi suddenly turns back n shouts on him –"Avi I told u I don't like all these things, u always makes fun of me.!"

Avi-"no no I will not tease you even I will worship you , as you left me when u get chance to pull my leg haan?"]

Arpi didn't replied on this n sit there on grass , open her book , On this gesture Avi get that there is something serious so he said in very buttering voice –"Arpi!" "Arpi..!

Arpi didn't said anything just two pearls of salty water rolled down on her cheeks , n fell on the opened book.

"oh ! what happened Arpi? Will not you tell me?"

"nothing"

"come on tell me , tumhe hamari kasam hai!"

"why didn't you come at last eve?" she replied in shaking voice.

"what ! you are angry on this thing ! silly girl !"

"ya ya ! 'Angry on this thing' you came or not why should I care! Bade kahin kea aye , nahi aayenge to jase hamara ghar –baar nahi hai! God know s what the hell you think of your self!" she shout in irritation .

"oh so you were saying the same thing naa?" Avi replied laughing.

"let me complete first! Gesu's servent came last eve, it was her lil bro's b'day there was 'Kurankhani' in morning her mother called me ."

Avi- "so why didn't you go there?"

Arpi-"Why didn't you go?kisse puuch ke jaate ? you are coming now when everything would be finished !"

Avi-in consoling manner "oh so you should ask Dad naa! And you usually visit Gesu at her place"

Arpi-"yes ! but today she requested me to dance, if I did that then after you would said "Arpi you shouldn't did that, Girls should not behave in that way! They should do that way! And you would depart a long lecture on moral conduct , how I can I go without your permission ! without your permission I never go for even picnic , movie or even any fair!" and again few drops of trears rolled down n her cheeks.

"Pagli kahin ki , itni si baat par roona kaisa! Send his gift through anyone you can visit her on any other occasion."

"yes ! Chali jaana! Why should you care? Gesu must be hurtled , n now exams are coming when can I go now?"

"kab se hai tumahre exams?"

"why are you asking ? why should you care about my exams! How many times I asked u for a teacher ,, have you arranged it! No!"

"ok baba , ok I will arrange it very soon! Ok I will ask one friend of mine !"

"no no more asking I will wait for him today in noon! Or I will set my all books on fire! Samjhe ke nahi!"

"ok ok I got it!"

Arpi-" lo papa aa gaye!" Avi get up n followed Dr. Shukla for his study room while Arpi get in for kitchen .

Dr. Shukla didn't believe much in castism but still he preffer to have pure food ( made in clean kitchen by someone who enter the washed kitchen after having bath, n when no one else enter the kitchen except her).

He met Avi inquired about Pamela (Pammi) n Avi tell him what he came to know about her n Berty , Dr. shukla felt sorry for her , when Arpi called him for puja

"papa, I have prepared the mat for prayer "

Dr. Shukla –" oh , ok beti I m coming! Avi you have tea I m coming in a few minutes."

As Dr. Shukla left him alone he sit on his usual place , on table to work on Dr. saab's digrams n charts , when Arpi came in room .

Arpi-" shee shee Avi listen !"

Avi-"What !"

Arpi- she glared whole room in a glance n then came close to his ear n said –" will you like to have Nankhataai of rice !"

Avi-"ye kya bala hai?"

Arp-"oh its very nice thing! Yammy! Papa love to have it, I made it in morning ! you like to hav ?" Arpi ased with love n affection.

Avi-"ok ,let me try !"

Arpi-"I already brought it, yeh lo" n she disclosed four nankhatai's in her Pallu.

Avi-"oh u ill-mannered girl , saree khraab kar li ki nahi"

Arpi-"chipa ke laaye hai, chounka jhutha ho jaata ke nahi"

Avi-"my hands are socked in ink"

Arpi-"khani hai ki nahi! Ek to hum chupa ke laaye upar se u r rebuking me . n I m not going to feed you ok. Humare haanth jhoothe ho jaayenge, pata nahi kiska kiska jhootha khate hoge che che"

Avi laughed at this n without any hesitation he washed his hand n use Arpi's pallu to dry it up.

Arpi-"eeh chi you make my pallu yaaki! I have to wear it whole day,"

N she pke it around her waist.

Avi-"n when you place them in it to hide then ! it was not making ur Pallu yakki by purified butter! N now when I just drid up my hands its turn dirty haan!"

Arpi-"Papa abhi dekhenge to gusa karenge!"

Avi-"chi you poked that dirty corner around waist, gandi kahi ki!"

Arpi-"gandi hain to tumse matlab !" she make face n left the room .

After few hours Avi left the house while having dinner Dr. Shukla told Arpi that on 10th he has conference n on 14th her Aunt (Bua) n (Binti) Pihu r coming .

"binti is coming ! really Papa" Arpi exclaimed with joy, Pihu was her aunts daughter n her childhood friend .

"ya she is coming to drop her here"

"ahaa ab to Pihu yani rahegi naa Papa, I will not let her go now , after you I left alone in home , "

"han han she will stay here till June n then in July she will get married"

"oh don't you think its too early Papa , she is so young!"

"why she is almost ur age , even your Aunt had written about you too !"

"no no Papa , I don't want to get marry so soon"

"then?"

"bas ! hum to abhi padhenge! F.A then B.A , then M.A. then Research , and one day I will be like you ! Papa."

"pagal kahin ki , give me one more nankhataai!" Dr. Shukla said laughingly .

"no first promise me then I will give it ok! So tell me you will not force me to get married " Arpi said with dignity in voice.

"give it "

"no first promise me "

"ok ok baba I will not do it"

Arpi give him two nankhataai's

Dr.shukla –"whaen ur would be mother in law come to see you then be prepaired with these khatais"

"fir wohi baat" arpi got ab\nger this time "you promised me naa again you start these marriage talks"

"yes baba I said will not marry , but I didn't said I will not get you marry "

"papa you lied again " Arpi said fumingly.

Then her cookaunty interfaired in matter

"Arpi its enough now let your Papa take breakfast properly" cook aunty was old enough so Arpi respect her n leave the kitchen . she went to her room while lying on her bed she was thinking about last day , Gesu must b waiting for her, just bz of Avi she can'missed all fun. How much she wept today, but he didn't care for her even a bit, tabhi to ab tak Master ka intazam nahi kiya Avi ne , while thinking all this don't know when she fell asleep . Around three o'clock Gesu visit Arpi, she find her sleeping on her bed her crosia was behind pillow while thread was under the bed , she was really looking cute , innocent, n in short beautiful. Specially her eyelids long dark black, n her skin milky white if you tickle her it seems like flowers , her lips pink like rose, her arms like jasmine pallets , gasu came with sweets in her hand, her mother send it for her, . She stand at door of room for a minute n then she put the sweet on side n pick the crosia to tickle her neck, Arpi take a turn while sleping Gesu took the thread n tie its one corner with her plate n other with table then she said –"Arpi,, Arpi,, wake up swety!"

Arpi wakes up suddenly rubbing her eyes-"now its two for you haan? Bring the teacher or not ?"

"oh ho bring or not ? kise bulaya tha sweety? At two let me know about him dear!" Gesu pinch her arm.

"awww " Arpi take her hand off "ah maar dala ! Ruth less! do all this with ur Akhtar miyaa ok," and as Arpi try to get up n take Pallu on head , she find her plate tied with table, she glared at Gesu which Gesu enjoyed so much .

Arpi untied the thread –"ya ya all of you find only me to tease naa ! Akhtar miyaan ki choti bandh ke nachaana unhe , abhi se betaab kyun ho rahi hai"

"hey he don't have any plate"

"so what he has beard naa?"

"Beard no ways if he do that naa I will leave him "

Arpi start laughing.

"ke ammi net ere liye bheji hai, tu aai nahi!"

"what can I say!"

"I don't want any excuse , just tell me when are you coming at my place?"

"gesu listen this Tuesday non o on Thursday Aunty is coming, when she will go only then ican come"

"ok now I m leaving, I have to give sweets to Prabha n Kaamini too,"

"are baitho to sahi, abhi aaye ho,

Baithe ho , daman samhala hai."

Gesu –"oh ho now you too started Urdu shayre haan!"

"tera hi marz lag gaya hai"

"watch out sweety kahi dusra marz bhi naa laga lena otherwise we have to do something for you too" Gesu said it while lying on bed.

"are ye wo gud nahi ki cheeti khaye" (it mean its impossible )

"we will see, will see no no I can see, from last few days I can see how changed you are, earlier you use to laugh so much but now after so hard attempts you keep your silence, n if you smile I can see you were lost in some other thoughts," Gesu said it with doubtful eyes.

"dhat pagli kahin ki" Arpi said with a sweet smile " these all are you dream castle, I m fine, no one is thr in my mind, our teachers didn't teach us that"

"then who's teacher teach all these arts of love n loosing self haan?just tell me the truth , do you never felt anything for anyone ever?"Gesu inquired n this time with seriousness.

"Gesu , had I ever hide anything from you? If there ay thing like that I will tell you, n as you are asking about love n all for me what ever I read in books novels n poems , I never felt like singing , dancing , crying or feeling heaven !! neehhh its never happened with me ever, as far about poems n shero shayari when ever I read Keats I feel like my blood is turning as tears n I will cry till death. But its all just effect of poem that's it"

"well its good if its just effect of Poetry, do you never felt like crying or smiling for any one special ever Arpi, just check you r heart kahin kisi ki surat to nahi bas gai hai"

"no Gesu Bano, I don't need to check my self , if there anything like that n my heart had feeling for any one then I must knew it naa!, why do you think like that haan?"

" you know Arpi, you are a scholer, u almost read all \great poets of English literature but I have seen life more closely then you ,you never know when n how you loose your self to someone , n when that person take back his feet on which we were placing our forehead then we came back from our dream world, n came to know ki hamara sar to kisi ke kadmo me rakha hua tha, and we were living in proud that we never bowed in front of anyone, don't know why , I can see a strange thing in your eyes which made me restless, I m not balming you to hide it from me may be your heart hide it from you too, bas ik baat manegi, kabhi iss dard ko gale na lagana , it really hurts too much"

Arpi laughed at this-"ok baba waise bhi tu to hai hi naa! Tujhse ilaaz puch lungi !"

Gesu-" what will I do dear –

"Darde dil kya puch kar baantne ki cheez hai?

Baant le apne paraye dared dil?"

No dear you are realy very innocent you cant' bear al these sufferings"

Right then the clock struk 3.30 Arpi looked at it –

"oh its 3.30 n he is not here till now!"

"oh ho kiske intaar me betaab ho dear?"

"bekaraar vekaraar nothing ok Avi suppose to come with new teacher , exams are near naa!"

Ya that's true btw why didn't you came yesterday haan?"

"Avi was not here naa how can I come without his permission !"

"Arpi can I ask you something ?" Gesu looked at her face with deep thought.

"ya why not !"

"oh let it be !"

"are puuch naa ! what you want to ask?"

"I don't need to ask, its visible "

"what?"

"Nothing"

"puucho naa!"

"chal chod fir kabhi sahi, m gatting late now byee"

N Arpi came out to see off Gesu,

Gesu-"Arpi plzz yaar come someday to my place my kid bro Hasrat was asking about you "

Arpi-"oh sure but I will bring Pihu too with me."

N Gesu take leave .

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Arpi is really so sweet and innocent cares for avi so much but dont have any idea dat why his permission is so important.

Avi is allso nice calm person.

Just cant getting why Dv bharti had named it Gunahon ka devta
Edited by Cuty16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Enjoyed this part Jo...
Especially Arpita and Gesu's chat...
Looking forward for more🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey everyone first of all
m sorry for posting after sooo long this OS
i was busy with exams then practicals n then just forgot about this one
or i should tell you all frankly that i don't want to write anything from my side
as this one is one of my all time fav😳

so here is the further story of GKD of DV Bharti😊

we end up with this line..

Part-III

N Gesu take leave .

At evening Avdhesh visit Arpita but this time again he forget to come with any teacher ,

Arpita- "Avdhesh you again come alone ! jaao I will not talk to you."

Avdhesh-"I forget it again, don't worry I have someone on mind for your teacher, I have a friend in university his name is Bisariya "

Arpita-" Bisariya ! ye kaisa naam hua! "

Avdhesh ' "Aree naam ka kya karogi, he has good knowledge of subject he will help you in your study."

Arpita-" chalo acha hai, zaldi hi Pihu bhi aane wali hai , wo bhi aa jayegi na tab hum teeno khuub maza karenge saath saath ."

Avdhesh-"Pihu! Kaun ! ' (Arpita give him an angry look) oh oh areee gusaa kyun hoti ho maluum hai bhai tumhari bua ji ki bitiya hai naa, why is she coming? I mean to stay or some work ?"

Arpita-" wo to uske aane pe hi pata chalega naa bua ji bhi aayengi naa"

After few days when Avdhesh visit Arpita she was with Pihu and Avdhesh was with Bisariya ..

Avdhesh ' "Arpita .. where are you? Come out in drawing room I bring your new teacher ."

Arpita came running but as she came close to drawing room she rememberd that if she enter the room running in front of a stranger Avi will berate her afterwards so she stopped at once and enter the room calmly,-" Ji Avdhesh ji , aapne aawaz di."

Avdhesh was a silent for a bit at her behavior but at once he get it why she behaved so mannerly n he introduced her to Bisariya while Pihu reached there but when she saw two strangers there she stopped at the door of room, hidden behind it.

Arpita-"Namaste Master ji, humne to Avdhesh ji se kab se aapko bulane ko kaha tha ye hai ki ab aapko le kea aye hai, bas kuch hi dino me humaari pariksha shuru hone wali hai."

Avdhesh-"oh Arpi stop complaining , give him some tea or something atleast you can start your tuitions from tomorrow ,(Avi noticed Pihu behind door, he inquired Arpi in eyes indicating toward her).

Arpita smiled a bit and drag Pihu in front of them,-

"Aree wahan kaha chupi ho ye tumhara gaaon nahi city hai, and he is not a stranger ,

Inse milo ye hai Avdhesh humare sabse ache dost aur Papa ke sabse ache student. Aur ye aaj se hai humare master ji."

Pihu -"Namaste." And Pihu left the room releasing her hand from Arpi's clutches.

All the while her stay Pihu was looking at ground only thing she saw or feel that Avdhesh only looked at once at her , once he get it she was feeling awkward , he didn't looked back at her, while Bisariya was looking at her in side glance .

When Bisariya left the house Arpita took Avdhesh in her room which is now her n Pihu's both .

Arpita-"Avdhesh you were asking naa why is she coming here?"

Pihu was standing in a corner hiding her face from Avi,

Avi-"haan to, aree us bechaari ko kuch aaram to karne do aate hi aise behave karogi to hum dono se dark e bhaag jayegi,"

Arpi-" aree wo to aise hi jaane waali hai, And Pihu you stop behaving like typical gaon ki chori ok, Avdhesh se ghunghat karogi to bas chal chukka tumhara iss ghar me, chalo yahan aao , you know Avdhesh Madam Pihu is going to marry someone soon ,(and she winked at him, as it's a signal to help her in teasing Pihu).

Avdhesh- "oh ho so that's the good new haan, congratulations Pihu ji , humaari taraf se shaadi ki abhise mubaarakbaad."

Arpi-"aji mubaarak baad to deni hi hogi madam is here for few weeks only, n then she will leave for village to get married. (and she hit Pihu on shoulder)

Pihu-"Arpi bas kar, (to Avi ) aap log baithiye hum abhi aaye."

Arpi-"bhaag kahan rahi hai? Ruk ruk, chal its good that you start speaking to Avi iske bina to humara din nahi chalta see as you are here you too have to take care him Mr. Avi thinks he is the one who run the world but the fact is he can't take care of his diet hehe."

From this moment they take Pihu too as old friend as Pihu too start enjoying Avi's company n she too start share her feelings with Avi,

One day when she was alone with Avi in hall out of kitchen she called Avi n said-"Avdhesh ji Hum aapse ek baat kahen , bura to nahi maaniyega?"

Avi-" oh you don't need to ask it, there is no difference in you and Arpi , tell me what you want to ask?"

Pihu-" wo jiji humko jab shaadi ko leke tease karti hai to aap unke saath jume na tease kiya kare. ( n she turns emotional)

Avi-"oh why are you taking it seriously . we were just trying to make you laugh."

Pihu-"I know you both are really nice , but you don't know how harsh this world is,..

Let it be'"

Avi- "ok baba hum nahi tease karenge , ab rone na lagna."

Pihu left him alone once again, days start passing like wind, meanwhile Avi visit Pammi many times everytime he visit her place she turn more friendly to him , but the way he feel free in front of Arpita was irrevocable , Pihu's wedding got post poned as her in laws add some more things in there gift's list . Dr. Shukla make many visits to Lucknow n Varanasi and when he returned from his recent visit his behavior toward Arpi turn more tender then ever. One eve when Avi was sitting in Arpi's room and Arpi was not in room suddenly Pihu came in hiding something under her Pallu.

"Avdhesh ji ek cheez dikkhayen!"

Avi-"ya sure, but why did you hide it from Arpi?"

Pihu-"its for her naa! Uncle bring this one from his last trip to Lucknow, here" and she uncover a photo of a guy.

Avi-"who is this guy ? is he your would be?" Avi tease her and winked at her.

Pihu-"no no I m not that much lucky. His name is Ranvijay (in book its Kailash) Uncle met him at Lucknow meeting of his friends , he is working with nice company, earning nice amount , has good family background, no mother , no father just a elder brother, and one nice .."

Avi-"OK baba I got it, but why are you telling it all to me? Do you want to change your groom? And want me to talk for you?"

Pihu-"oh you just like Arpi di! Uncle choose this guy for Arpi di."

Her words felt like bolt from blue to Avi, he never think about it, "guy for Arpi! "

No it must be a dream, Arpi can't go anywhere she belongs to him.. but how can he think like that she is not her , even he never think that way, but why his heart denying to beat anymore on just thought to stay away from her, why he is feeling like someone snatching himself from him. He was there physically all the time when Pihu was saying all that when he came to senses all he heard that '"Uncle ji want's you to talk to Arpi di, and show her this Picture, He knows if he will show her this Picture she will never give it a single look as she want to be a life long spinster."

Name of Dr. Shukla bring him back to reality, He wants his daughter to marry that guy, he must saw something in him, in his family, and she can't be a life long spinster, she have to get marry one day, how can he (Avi) think her to be there with him for him as his support to comfort him by her childish talks.

Avi-"Pihu, Its quite late now, I think I should leave now, I will talk to her soon , don't worry she will not do anything as you guys are thinking."

Avi want to leave the place as soon as possible as he don't want to face Arpita right now, but as he was at main exit of home Arpita call him from her room's window,

"Avdhesh where are you going? Do I need to tell you that you are taking dinner with us tonight?"

He don't want to look back at her but her voice force him to do so, he looked back at her , he don't know whether the time stopped or what but that innocence of her face that calmness soothing for him, his eyes got filled with tears , he can't look at her anymore without replying her he leave the place .

thats all for this UD will conti soon😳


Edited by joliefille - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cuty16

Arpi is really so sweet and innocent cares for avi so much but dont have any idea dat why his permission is so important.

Avi is allso nice calm person.

Just cant getting why Dv bharti had named it Gunahon ka devta



Hey Rups 😊
thanx for liking dear,

soon they will realize thr feelings ,

and u too came to know why he name it Gunahon Ka Devta😭

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eowyn

Enjoyed this part Jo...

Especially Arpita and Gesu's chat...
Looking forward for more🤗



Hey Nidhs thanx for liking it dear,

next is up hope u will like it too😳

btw i have to tell you ur Avita siggy is just mind blowing awww how cute they are yaar😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was an emotional end😭
Pihu is a sweet character...
So Arpi's groom has been chosen...
Waiting to know what will happen next😊
Thanks for the PM jo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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⭐️⭐️wow wht a story ⭐️⭐️. & u remembered v.well 2 narrate it 👏👏👏
hv seen some old - B&W movies, they hv such stroies with such types of scenes, dialogues, shairo-shaireee😊. use of urdu language was very common in such types of movies & novels.
may be i must hv seen a movie (not omkara) based on this novel.🤔🤔 bt can;t remember now.
bt one thing i still can't understand, why the title GKD
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hye jo nice part dear,
enjoyed it,will wait for d next one.
Ranvijay yaha bhi aagaya 😡.!
Felt sad for avi 🥺
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So u finally remembered to update this..😉

This is getting interesting..

Avi is finally realizing dat Arpi holds a very special place in his heart...& is more than a frnd to him...😳😳

Toh RV yahaan bhi aa gya..😆😆

This update was really nice..👏👏

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