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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello every one i know its all about our Avita n GKD but i just can't understand what the cv's want to tell us by this kind of ending , is this for them a tragic ending or final solution of a love story 🤢 it hounts me whole night but more then feeling crying i feel anger for them to turn it in to nothing , where they can make it unforgettable specially when they have such good actors, they just chopped whole show for fitting in time limit n that's why it doesn't seems convencing , i mean the way Avi choose to get close to his love Arpi can't be justified when her murderer ends up in a room unknowing about Avi's step or even they didn't show them together . Well i know many of us may not aware of this but there is a Hindi Novel by the same name 'Gunaahon ka devta' by Dharamveer Bharti , i read it years ago when i don't even understand what love is 😳 after this novel i never liked any novel , this was impact of the story on me even after reading Shakespere , Milton, Virgenia, Hardy n lots of writers i still find this on best , n for me this is what we can call Tragic Love story, thought theirs only one death but it leaves u with a strong feeling tha it can't be a story its reality of someone. And best part is there hardly any abusive word or even a slap but still the title is justified. here i m trying to summarise it on bases of my poor memory, i know OS should end up in one or two shots but i don't know how much i remember it yet so sorry if it goes to three
first writer words-
"i just can say i m highly obliged to my readers who except this unmatured writing in spite of my lack of creativity, n giving it so much love.
writing this novel was just like praying to god in the moments of deep pain and dispare, n i m feeling same as i m praying the god again in same pain "
Story opens with a young guy laying in front of liberary , on grass , he was waiting for his old Proffecer's daughter "Sudha" here we call her "Arpita". he is living in this town "Allahabad" from a long time when he came here after fighting to his mother in "Prayaag" n here he find Dr Shukla his teacher n mentor for whole life he get close to family too which contains only a young daughter "Arpita" who came to Allahabad just after "Avdhesh/real name Chandar" came to town before that she was living in village with her aunt , when she came she was rustic , but now Avi teach her all manners of town life n she is quite calm now but her all childishness n naughtiness aims at Avi now.
well this one is just an intro hope u like it , if any one intrested i will continue it ,
i started it to tell everyone how tragic but still justificable a love story can b😭
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rainurubal thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it and do continue please
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Go ahead neha , i like the intro, wht s next now, i'm witing šŸ˜‰
Vas y Neha, j'ai aim l'introduction, c'est quoi la suite , j'attends šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Neha, I'm happy that you are starting an os. I tried finding a copy of this novel but it's in Hindi and I can't really read Hindi so there was no chance. Thanks for writing this story and combining Avita with it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jo congo on starting an os...love can be tragic or happy...long lived or short lived...but finally all that matters is wether you were or are faithful to your beloved...continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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My Sugar pie..

wonderful OS..

Loved the intro..



update soon..

love you..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Teacher ji šŸ¤—

say one thing what should i call jo or tragic queen...every time you choose tragic end... 🤣

Congo Shongo on your First OS šŸ˜‰


i love the intro and waitingšŸ˜‰


love you šŸ¤—
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sidda8

Neha, I'm happy that you are starting an os. I tried finding a copy of this novel but it's in Hindi and I can't really read Hindi so there was no chance. Thanks for writing this story and combining Avita with it.

hey siddu dear thanxz for liking it

i really love the novel n story so i just tried to give its story .

hope can convey its spirit without distorting it šŸ˜•

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nidhsara

Jo congo on starting an os...love can be tragic or happy...long lived or short lived...but finally all that matters is wether you were or are faithful to your beloved...continue soon


hey Nidha thanx yaar u r right love will be love no matter how long it live ,

but here evrything , trust, faith , innocence, everything is going to be on stalk

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriYa_life


My Sugar pie..

wonderful OS..

Loved the intro..



update soon..

love you..

hey Ramona thanx yaar ,

but frankly speaking i can't call it mine as i m just trying to summaries it ,

hope you guys like my attempt 😳

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