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Posted: 14 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: jes_jade

Prash!!!!!!!!🤗 Jesss🤗



It was just brilliant & fabulous...👏👏 awww

I really loved the way Avi brought out the truth frm Arpi [I am also expecting to see such scene in show😉] Me tooo...I dunno when tht day will come

I knw what will happen next...☺️

Plzz update soon...😳

Will update soon😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hye prashu, heyy Rups🤗
congo on your first OS. Thnks😳

sorry i got too late but i saw it right now when i came on the forum. No probs dear..I can understand..exams are important
But the topic u choosed is really too too good i was just waiting for something like dat in the gkd but u know na the cvs just love to show bhutni wid her evil plans. yeah😡

Thankyou dear for writing something so nice.
U and your os both are awesome. Thnks sweetie..u re too awesome

Sorry once again for late post but u know na my exams.
Bye

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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Hey Everyone... 🤗🤗


Thank You soo much( Except my CKD phamily)..You commented on my OS

Im glad you all liked it...😳

Love and Hugs to you❤️🤗

Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
This part is dedicated to All the GKD members specially Laxmi Di😳
Im not sure abt this part...I hope you all will like it😃




It was full moon Night, the night when two souls were united again. They both were busy looking at moon from their houses. Avdhesh calls her.

She picks up and says " Hmmm'" 😃

Avdhesh - " You were thinking about me?" Arpita ' "Hmmm..yes..uhh ..nooo'Me ?? nooo..! I wasn't thinking about you neither I was missing you" .Avdhesh- " I didn't ask you abt missing'.then how come did u say you weren't missing me" She bits her tongue. Avidhesh- " Tht means you were missing me!!"

Arpi-" Yes..I was" She blushes. They spoke with each other whole night gazing the moon and feeling their presence around each other.☺️

Next Day, Avi arranges special surprise for her. Whole day, Avdhesh was busy preparing and arranging their wedding next day. He was so excited about it. With the help of Kanoo, Bhayankar and Pehelwaan, he arranged everything from flowers to pandit. He worked entire day but didn't feel tired. He felt as if he is the happiest person in the world, though he was. He couldn't resist himself calling Arpita to know how she is every two minutes. He would ask her "How are you? Did you eat anything?" and she would everytime repeat same thing " Avdheshji , I am fine'.thinking about you. I had my breakfast/lunch/dinner. Don't worry"

He would reply ' "Ok..Please take care of yourself. I love you"

Meanwhile Arpita confided in her brother Pawan. Pawan agreed to help them. They were getting married without anyone's knowledge. Pawan had told them to elope. But Arpita had refused. She agreed after much convincing. Pawan had told them. All three would disclose Arpita/Pihu's secret to Mama , Mami and everyone else after they get married. They would come to Haveli after marrying.

But someone had other plans'..😉😆

Next day, They both got dressed and left for Lord Shivji's temple where they had met one year and some months ago. Avdhesh was dressed in white kurta and Arpita was in beautiful Saree. They wanted to marry in a simple way. They married in the presence of God and took His blessings .All of them were happy for them- Pawan, Kanoo, Bhayankar, and Pehelwaanji. They had tears in their eyes. After a long time, they were together again. Pawan hugged his darling sister and gave her hand in hand of his and let Avdhesh take her. Goons hugged Avdhesh 'They were so happy for their Bhaiyyaji since their Bhaiyyaji was happy. They had seen Avdhesh's condition and they cldnt help Bhaiyyaji to overcome this. They were watching him smiling after a long time. 😳

Avdhesh and Arpita went to another car and goons in another. On their way, they hold each other hands and blushing. They were in their world looking at each other silently admiring each other when other was not looking another, when suddenly Avdhesh took a different turn. It wasn't the road of Haveli.

Arpita was bit shocked- " This road doesn't go to Haveli' Where are you taking me?"

Avdhesh- " Hmm..thts a surprise' You will come to know. Wait fr few minutes. We are reaching our destination"

Arpita- " Surpriiise''Im impressed"😉

They reached a Haveli near other side of jungle. It was old one. No one lived there. Arpita was getting scared. It looked haunted to her.😆 Arpita clutched his arms tight. Avdhesh- " Don't worry. Im there with you. " Avdhesh closed her eyes and took her to the room. Arpita opened her eyes and was mesmerized by the room. It was beautifully decorated. There were candles, roses, heart-shaped balloons' It looked soo romantic. Arpita is so elated with this. Arpi says- "Its very beautiful Avdheshji'I never thought you would this for me. I think my death''." Avdhesh stops her by putting his finger on her lips. Avdhesh-" Don't say anything more. I have already died hundred deaths each day thinking about you. I just cant live in the world where you don't exist" Arpita- " I know. And now you are starting again"

Avdhesh '" Yes.Ok..Sorry. Lets have dinner. " He took her to balcony. They had Moonlit dinner. While Arpita thought-" I know Avdheshji..you were wrong on some part. But that was framed in front of you. I wont forgive Bahuji'.Never. She is going to pay for this. I promise you Avdheshji, Ill reveal her truth soon." 😉

They were in each other's arms. He hugged her tightly as if he left her out of his sight for a moment, she would disappear 'Suddenly there was lightening. Thunder roared and It started raining. Arpi smiled at him and he knew what was going in her mind. She moved out of his embrace and started playing in the rain. She was same Arpita who looked innocent when she plays in the rain.😆 Avdhesh stared at her innocence. She looked so fragile that he cldnt imagine tht he had once hurted her so much' He decided that he is going to make up for his past mistakes. He went near her, wraps his arms around her petite waist from behind and slightly removed her hairs from her shoulder..He nuzzled her neck and kisses her on her shoulder and neck. Arpita blushed and slightly shivered ..She turned to him and he kissed her forehead, cheek then neck to shoulder and gripped his hold on her waist tightly but when he was about to kiss her lips then she pushed him ran into the house.☺️ He came behind her and tried to catch her.. He pulled her towards the wall and placed both his strong hands on the wall from both the side of her shoulders'. He leaned slowly close to her face. They were breaths away frm each other'.She felt his warm breath on her face and forgot to take breath'She could not withstand his expressive eyes and that killer look. He leaned towards her delicate neck and kissed her'.He said to change her clothes since she was totally wet'

They both changed their clothes. Avdhesh bought her Red saree as a gift. He wore a black shirt (with two buttons open😍) ( He is looking smoking hottt😍) He closes the door of balcony and burns the firplace.


Arpita came out of the bathroom'She sneezed..It caught Avdhesh's concern.. Without looking back he said-" I told you..not to play in rain, you always catch cold. You don't take care.." He turns' Arpita is wearing his gift., looking gorgeous with damp hair.. He is stunned to see her..☺️

He came near her and kissed her forehead..❤️

{ In lamhon ke daaman mein starts playing}

❤️In lamhon ke daaman mein pakeezah se rishte hain'❤️

He cupped her face in his hands and brushed his lips with hers'.Arpita blushed and hides her face in his broad chest''.She looked at him'There was a different spark in his eyes, a passion for her'.Being shy, she rushed near the fireplace and looked at Avdhesh smiling'.

❤️Koi Kalma Mohabbat ka'Dohrate farishte hain'.❤️

Avdhesh holds her from back...glided his hands on hers'and clutched her fingers.

He caressed her back slightly'running his fingers all over' She tries to go again..but this time'He didn't let her go and pulled her towards him'

They sat down slowly looking at each other' And lie down., still looking at each other.. Avdhesh is almost on her'

Both have forgotten the world around them. They are in their own sweet little world.

❤️Kaisa ye Ishq hai..Kaisa yeh pyaar hai'..❤️

He touched her face and glided his fingers from her face to her neck'.in most passionate way'.He kissed all over her neck and face'' 'he wanted to love her as if there is no tomrw'

He wanted to feel her'..to make his forever'He wanted this before that night..but that night took everything with it'.Now'He is not going to let it happen again'


❤️Kaise jazbaat ka umda sailaab hai''..❤️

There is sudden want in him'He didn't understood it'He wanted her always..but this was far different'

He kissed her lips passionately'There was eagerness in him'Nd it was in Arpita too'He kissed her shoulders, neck and face more passionately..

Arpita felt the sudden need in him..She removed his shirt and kissed him'

Avdhesh carried her to the bed ..and carefully made her to lie'.He slowly untied the dori of her back '.and started kissing her back and waist'.He kissed her lips more passionately then ever'☺️☺️

Arpita- " I love you Avdheshji'I was, I am urs and will be yours forever.."

Avdhesh gasping '" Me too"

He undresses her'..They became one forever'..And the time stood still...😳

Now..no one would be able to sepearte them..Not Even God..for their souls are one'

These two days looked as if Nature has conspired to make them unite again forever'

They are together again''''''''😊❤️

***********************End Of Part 2*************************


Thts all by me...😊

I hope you liked this part too...😊

waiting for your reviews...feel free to comment

[If you like..plz press "like" button]

Thank You😳

Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
Heyyy Prashuuu 🤗

me first me first me first ...as i said 🤣🤣

Wow...you are sooo romantic ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

no words

i think i will stop writing romantic in my FF/OS and make you to write 😉


that's me after me reading...i am blushing when i was reading also i am shocked that i am BLUSHING 🤣 🤣

Jo and Ramona will agree with me in this for sure...no one can take your position in romance 👏 ⭐️ 👏

i am proud of you 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏


Hope my jaanu is not jealous of elephant hugs🤣🤣🤣🤣

love you 🤗
Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Prashu!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗

I am just speechless!!!!!!





Couldn't stop blushing all the time...

Gosh..Prashu dat was just smoking hot...

I had to deviate my concentration all the time to control my blush...

I thought only my baby can write such scenes...but u proved to be above all...

Hats off!!!!!!👏👏




Edited by jes_jade - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
Hey prashu😃
part 2 ka few lines padthe he hum pani pani hone lage hai. Kyoum bhai forum ko movie theatre banana chathe hai kya? 😉😆
will read completely later , did read here and there and hum sharm se pani pani hogaye(courtesy Lax)😳😆
Edited by BenNevis - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
Awsome Prasht👏👏⭐️⭐️
hmmm they even consummated the marriage unlike the serial...
great work hun...
keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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me choriyfying your ladoos😆 yum yum

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome.. prashu...
only ur ff is the place to hav them 2gather...
update soon...

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