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talkie14

@talkie14

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Hey Prash Thanx for the dedication🤗..Arre ab aap log sub censored post ko mere naam pe dedicate karte ho yaar.😳.Hum hai doodh se dhuli sharmili kanya.☺️..aur tum sab ky kar rahe ho.. Hum so sharam se pani pani ho gaye hai...Jahan hum the ab ek puddle hai..😳. Joles apart it was good Baccha,👍🏼 Loved reading it...,..hoping to see all this on screen.. Time for new television guys..when this is on screen the existing ones will be on fire!!!😉

Arre suno sab GKD walon Bacchi badi ho gayi hai...🥳🥳

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@chatterbox

Trailblazer

+ 14

Posted: 14 years ago

#82

oiii maaa kya ho raha hai forum par

bachhe bade ho gaye hai sachi lax

and this all happens only in ffs or os's

very good prash even i was all red reading this hehee

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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Hey Parasu dear,🤗

u were asking to press like button if we like ,
tell me what to do when i looove it,😳

wooow wow dear , Priya is right you are a damn good Romantic writer, i think cv' s need tuition,
n Avi's look,
uh maaa i m totally flat dear, 😍🤪
can imagine each n every scene,
*cough, cough*,ya each scene 😳😳
😳thanx for the sweet twist in story i mean took them to another place instead of Haveli , at least they have some time together,
n about ur writing style-

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by joliefille - 14 years ago

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swamini5

@swamini5

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Prashu too good yaar

Romantic scene was UUUFFF

I Think u should sent this to CVs for Avita's SR

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Bubbles2k4

@Bubbles2k4

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#85

I had tears of joy in my eyes reading your OS, Prash!!! It was so beautifully written.

Like Joliefille I did not like it I loved it to bits ... 👏! I wish and pray whatever you just mentioned in your OS comes true!

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for launching your OS now when everything on the show seems to be going against Avdesh and Arpita reunion. This place is like a haven for Avdesh and Arpita fans!!

Keep them coming Prash!! I really look forward to the next part.

Bubbles 😳

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#86

☺️...haye mein to mar jawaan... I am really thankful to God that i was alone while reading this...warna ithne excessive blushing ka kya explanation deti...while I was going to read this my aunt called me to help her in making biryani...biryani ki tho aisi ki thaisi...first I finished your OS dear...itwas super hot and romantic...you wrote the SR sooo beautifully my words won't suffice to praise it jaan...all their emotions were traced really beautifully...loved it to core love you🤗

Edited by Nidhsara - 14 years ago

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Updated my post on page 11 ☺️

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#88

Hey Prashuuu 🤗

see i was right everyone liked it 🥳

Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#89

i edited by post in 10 😳

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Sidda

@Sidda8

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Wow, what an outstanding update. Prashu, you went to the romance straight away and pleased all of us. Laxmi Didi will be proud of you. I can imagine a Maha episode for this scene, you had so many beautiful songs to lengthen the night. I'm just laughing at BJ now, even if Avita comes back, she really as no reason to want Avi because he is not a virgin anymore (Sadly only in this OS). Arpi is two steps ahead BJ. I'm so proud of the girl. It would be amusing to see Arpi enter the haveli being pregnant and make BJ more furious and jealous.

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