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sharan

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Posted: 14 years ago

priyaaaaa hamesha khaane ke baare mein hi sochti ho kya

hahahahahaha

thoda avita ko bhi do bahut dino se sirf ek goli hi khayi hai bhookh lagi hogi😆

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PrashT

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesum again sunaha..

he was soo sweet when he feeds her..

awwwww

thnk you dear..

luv u....

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Yoga priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: danno
priyaaaaa hamesha khaane ke baare mein hi sochti ho kya
hahahahahaha

thoda avita ko bhi do bahut dino se sirf ek goli hi khayi hai bhookh lagi hogi😆

danno......avi ne khana kila diya na arpi ko....tho no tension yaar..waise woh sab sunaha sambal le gi.......kya kare khana ko dekh kar muume pani aa jaati hai.....

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Kusum

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Posted: 14 years ago

wooww.....................

sooo nice....

carryy on.....😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

oh wow in all chatting and all i forgot to have a dekho here

awesome sunaha u did it again
keep them coming

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Soumya Komanduri

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey sunaha.....wonderfully written once again

do continue writing as the ff's are really good...i appreciate u for ur imagination n patience for writing down everything 👍🏼

n in this part i loved the innocence n stubborness of Arpita...u've written it exactly how a girl of her age wud behave in those circumstances!!

awating the next one 😊

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sharan

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Posted: 14 years ago

i love that part in which arpi khaane se mana karte hai aur avi usey khile jkar hi chodtha hai🥳

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Jessie

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome part Sunaha!!!👏
Loved the scenes of Avi feeding Arpi...❤️❤️❤️

Hats off to you!!!!!!!

Cont soon...😊

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Ramona

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Posted: 14 years ago

Anusha... darling ur awesum... so busy with d fan fic dat u hardly cum 2 Pratigya Forum... zara waha bhi to aao... lubd d part...

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Suhana6

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: danno
wah wah wah sunaha.
kya likhti ho tum maza aa gaya👏

🤗tnx luv.................

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