MELA: My first short FF(Avitha)-completed - Page 17

Originally posted by: tanisha997

hi suhana
i am read ur ff
you are a great writer pls continue fast
i love to read it 😃

Originally posted by: Milii

Heyyy Sunaha....

Again an awesome part 👏
Loved the scenes between them....when Avi feeds Arpi 😍

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease continue super fast 🤗

Originally posted by: Gaurishah

Hi Suhana, well written come up with part 8 quickly eagerly awaiting.

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

from your fan no 1 hope you like it or else

don't worry i wont do that i am good girl....so finish it

Originally posted by: prash_t

awesum again sunaha..

he was soo sweet when he feeds her..

awwwww

thnk you dear..

luv u....

Originally posted by: nana-raee

wooww.....................

sooo nice....

carryy on.....😊

Originally posted by: chatterbox

oh wow in all chatting and all i forgot to have a dekho here

awesome sunaha u did it again
keep them coming

Originally posted by: -sia-

hey sunaha.....wonderfully written once again

do continue writing as the ff's are really good...i appreciate u for ur imagination n patience for writing down everything 👍🏼

n in this part i loved the innocence n stubborness of Arpita...u've written it exactly how a girl of her age wud behave in those circumstances!!

awating the next one 😊

Originally posted by: danno

i love that part in which arpi khaane se mana karte hai aur avi usey khile jkar hi chodtha hai🥳

Originally posted by: jes_jade

Awesome part Sunaha!!!👏
Loved the scenes of Avi feeding Arpi...❤️❤️❤️


Hats off to you!!!!!!!


Cont soon...😊