Gulaal: What If chp 26(part II) upd Pg 57 - Page 34

Originally posted by: without-fathom

And here comes the perpetually late latif Galoolian 🥳

So I thought har time sorry bol bol kar I've likely totally jaded you, toh thodi grand entry kar lun iss time 😆

hahaha chalo der se hi sahi aaye toh,hum toh bus itne mein hi kush hai😊

But without digressing further - Sigh. The MB and DB of your "what if" obviously cut me a lot of relief as potential pillars as and when. But the whole Dushyant end obviously dangles lose, still, and till that comes to some resolution, it's just hard to say whose objectivity can sustain how much and of what!

I always thought these two were the most sensible people who could rise over and above their individual wants and needs to seek and argue for what they considered was the best interest for their children as such Gulaal and Kesar both were equal in their eyes and they always had their best interest in their heart

In the meantime - PB being the one dimensional mother is not so much a surprise - not anymore than Kesar being one-dimensionally "expressive" of course 😆 I really liked what DB said to him about his love not being wrong in any sense, but that it did not excuse him of the onus of becoming worthy of it and earning it. It's not only the kind of impetus he needs at this point, but also the kind of goal he's had his sight on for years now! About time to refocus perspective upon it!

Yes but he has to give that agneepariksha to prove his worth as gold,he has to earn his love by selflessly devoting himself to cause she believes in for greater good😳

And finally - Galool overheard Kesar's blatant claim - ya khudaa! Time for Great Wall of Talsagra to make appearance?! 🤓

Hahahha nope I think this Gulaal is bit more accepting and understanding of the fact that he is not the only one responsible for his thought process,she has played some part in driving that process

Looking forward to what GK-action comes next Aditi - are you updating this weekend? *looks shamelessly hopeful* 🤗🤗🤗

I did update but only 1st part,didn't get chance to complete it but will definitly do so tomorrow,will look forward to your views🤗

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

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First of all a big jhappi to you for always keeping your promise to update every weekend.Its lovely how you have kept your dedication up..With decreasing frequency of people in this forum.Its sometimes demotivating for FF writers to continue..But I guess what we share is our LOVE for KG which keeps us going always...Kudos to that..⭐️

Yup that's what keeps us going agree with you completely😊

Now coming to the chappi...Ahhh each and every line is just beautifully penned down with a lot of thought.👏

Coming to the JK scene...Ahhh LOL that acid tongued woman..😆.No matter how much vampish she was but she was the one who had the guts to call a spade a spade without mincing words .😛Thats what you maintained in the update too.Loved how she teased sudha and taunted Gulaal ...

JK is one sharp woman na,she never missed a chance to make a point and this JK is no different 😳

Ahhh and that GALOOL mode is back..Lagaav makes an entry again hahahahahahaha..Becahri Galool never knows what her patidevb is thinking...Becahri she thinks that it is still lagaav...😆

Yup that's what she firmly believes he's yet to give her that shock of her life na by declaring all consuming love and for her to term that as paap😆

Loved the little flashback scene with Vasan't potrait.I really wanted Gulaal in the show to contemplate about MB's words...Ahhh only if the CV's could focus on the real issue rather than on that bandariya and her battisi😡Seriously I mean these were real issues and not how Talli was heartbroken😡I seriously am happy that you chose to explore such issues..Must I say am lubbing it😳...

Thanks Piyu for me Talli was just a side character who was given unnecessary prominence for creation of that non-existent third angle,it was just impossible to imagine Kesar deviating from his kavach mode😳

And finally the MB and Kesar convo..BRILLIANT is just a lesser word..I tell you this was the greatest aspect which the show neglected..A father trying to have a heart to heart conversation with a child who has so much confusion...But no CV's again had to focus on bthe ansoo of Talli ..This conversation has really made my heart melt..Beautifully done and finally Kesar's acceptance of his responsibility and mature answers..Very beautifully done...

I specially loved the part where is claims that he fell in love with Gulaal the day she entered his life and his RISHTA has nothing to do with that feeling..Wonderfully written!!

I think for him that DV bond mattered only till his realization after that he truly accepted his love will overcome all obstacles that she will obstinately put in his way knowing very well her transcendental love for his bro...

I REALLY LOVED THE CHAPPI TO ITS CORE..CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER...WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER🤗

Thanks piyu for your lovely and encouraging words,I will update soon promise🤗

Originally posted by: minizz

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Aditi...wow...this one was good.Yes it was a short update but each and every line of it was important and really I enjoyed reading this.So Gullu's fav word "lagaav" has made an appearance😆well yeh toh hona hi tha and I can understand Gullu too cause Jk's caustic comments and Pb's disappointment is making her say this and she truly believes that what Kesar is feeling for her is not love...cause she has never seen Kesar in that light at all.For her there has been only one love in her life and that is Vasant but I am pretty sure she is soon going to experience some conflicting emotions about Kesar😳

Gulaal as you said truly believes that Kesar is attached to her and that's why what he feels for her is as result of that immense dependency he always had on her to certain extent this is true as he cannot even consider a possibility of not having her around when he returns for good,for her the house is home till she is at helm of it and the realization that the attachment has now transformed itself into full fledged all encompassing love that completely selfless,totally devotional and utterly pure will force her to accept his love,will break those shackles that she binds herself in,pierce through that impenetrable wall she shuts herself in with only Vasant's memories,the journey to that destination won't be easy but then Kesar wouldn't have taken the easy road anyways😳

PB saying that they should have made Kesar understand when he was a boy was so true and she is right when she says that now the time has passed.She knows her son and his nature na...I liked PB's reaction here.It was very natural.

PB is not unfair but she is traditional woman who just wants her son to have that happy and content life she believes he could get by marrying someone who's his age,who can understand him and be his support for life,every mother wants same she's is no different

Coming to MB and Kesar convo...awww it was so good...and wow Kesar's maturity reflected in his answers to MB na.All his confusion,restlessness and anger has been replaced by a calm strength and clarity of thoughts.His realization and acceptence of his love for his wife has matured him so quickly.Even MB is impressed😊That was beautifully written.Aditi...looking forward to the next installment yaar and I am sure it will be even better than this.So jaldi se likh daal and post kar😃

I am glad you like this convo,it was written direct dil se,something I would have liked to see in the show,so many wasted opportunities He is calm and cool right now but he is Kesar jisko jayada waqt nahi lagta gussa hone mein😳 and I do like angry Kesar you see😛 I will update tomorrow,Thanks for your lovely comments partner,means a lot🤗

yeh le ek big hug for this lovely update...ab jaldi se continue kar ok🤗

Originally posted by: princessofkesar

chapter 18

toh gulaal tried hard to lie to save kesu but mb ke nazoronse nahi bach paye

kesar- mb scene one of my fav always.

db conversation was good and i loved kesar's patni jhaap.

Hey Shradha🤗 Thank you for liking the chapter,Gulaal will always try to save her Kesar na,Kesar and MB scene is something I missed a lot,so I will try and include as many as I can

DB is solid support for Kesar in my story😳 so you will find many more to follow...

chapter 19

jk the dragon , she has to start the kitchen politics na!

mastermind of all the fights.

and i don't have words for kesar-mb convo.

it was brilliant yaar!

JK and dragon nahi woh kaha kuch kehti hai ab sab uski baato ka galat matlab nikale toh usme uska kya dosh😕

Thanks you for like that convo that was my heart talking,something I would have loved to see in the show😳

thanks aditi🤗

Thanks Shradha🤗 for your lovely comments and continual support

Originally posted by: kalika.j

@Aditi, update soon.



kalika

Originally posted by: MR21

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Aditi 🤗...first of all sorry for being so late in unresing

Ramya 🤗 koi baat nahi yaar der aaye durust aaye

Coming to the chapter...wow Gulaal just being galool asked kesar to meet MB even after listening what he said n just diverting the convo in kitchen...JK n her sharp mind...only she can see the silent convo between kesar n gulaal n here she goes on taunting both gulaal n sudha..she never leaves any chance na...convo between gulaal n PB...we can totally understand what Pb feels about this unconventional relation of kesar n gulaal...but here gulaal is not seeing what now pb also can see...so the epic word lagaav is back...waiting for the other epics words like paap n bhaavna now in the coming chapters...Gulaal thinking about MB words n feeling very restless...they never clearly said abt this is show na...

Galool nahi,she just wanted to buy some time so that she could speak to him alone and MB did want to speak to him na,This Gulaal is aware that his thoughts are result of him not getting answers to his question at appropriate time and JK ofcourse how can we ever forget what evil woman she was all she thought was about herself and her son,PB is mother who know her son very well and yup those words are not far away soonish you will see them uttered in abundance

Coming to kesar n MB convo 👏...i wish I would have seen this convo in he show...I like MB here...he can understand that kesar has some problem which led him to be away from them these 3 years n also for his behavior towards him last night...loved kesar when he said that though he dont know anything about the relationship of DV initially now he wants to fulfill all the responsibilities towards this house n ofcourse gulaal...I like how MB talked to kesar about the relation of wife n husband n kesar reply to it...his declaration of his loved for his gulaal n clear cut mind to accept that she still loves his elder brother and his devotion to be with her when he know that she is all alone n she will never tell anyone about her feelings...Its a very difficult path that kesar has taken but now even MB will be supporting him when ever needed along with DB...

Loved it Aditi...waiting for next chapter...

Yes I always wanted to see this heart to heart convo between father and son,I am glad you lliked it something i would have loved to see in the show with these two brilliant actors enacting it,Kesar now is privy to Gulaal's thoughts through her diary so can understand hert more and her devition to his bro at the same time he is aware of his growing feelings for her and how she needs someone to support her and love her without any expectations he will be that true kavach for her always that's the promise he made to himself and stood by it irrespective of the bond and Gulaal's reaction to the whole situation,yes in this story Kesar will find tow solid pillar of support for him in MB and DB,I will be updating soon Ramya,Thanks for your lovely comments🤗

Chapter 19