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Posted: 13 years ago
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aditi lovely chappi as usual 👏, dushy and kesar scene was intense and i loved specially para from gullu' diary.
🤗thanks aditi

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As promised here's update for this week,hope you guys like it,I will look forward to your comments

Thank you
-Aditi


Poster Courtesy: Piyu

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Chapter 18

starting a journey, first step

"Gulaal, Kesar ko jara mere kamre mein aane ke liye kehna main usse kuch baat karna chahta hu,MB asked Gulaal standing on the terrace overlooking the quiet and silent village as the clock stuck 11..."

"Woh MB, raat bahut ho chuki hai,aap so jayiye na,kal subah baat kar lena,abhi toh woh yehi hai na do aur din..." Gulaal tried to make an excuse knowing Kesar had still not retuned home

"Gulaal maine pehle hi bahut der kar di hai ab aur nahi, ja bula la usse yehi main yahi intezaar karta hu..."

"Nahi MB, woh yaha thand kuch jayada ho rahee hai,aur woh bhi to so chuka..."

"Jise jooth bolne ki aadat na ho,usse koshish bhi nahi karni chahiye Gulaal,woh ab tak ghar aaya hi nahi hai,kyun sach hai na?"

"MB,woh apne dosto se milne gaya hai,itne saal baad lauta hai toh...",she stopped mid-sentence as Kesar's bike entered the courtyard and MB started walking down the steps towards him, Gulaal hurried behind

"Kesar itni raat tak kaha tha,bina kissi ko khabar kiye kahi jane se mana kiya tha na tujhe,tu janta hai teen saal pehle hue woh hadse ko lekar hum kitne pareshaan rehte hai,koi jimmedaari naam ki cheez hi nahi hai tujh mein..."

"MB aap thak gaye hoge so jayiye na,Kesar tu chal main khana laga deti hu ..." "Gulaal tum andar jao,main Kesar se akele mein baat karna chahta hu abhi..." ...per MB...Gulaal...she reluctantly retreated

"Kesar tu kharkhane mein Dushyant ka haath batane ke bajaye yeah pura din kaha bhatkta rehta hai,kuch saal pehle tune karkhanne ka kaamkaaj dekhna shuru kiya tha to mujhe laga tha tu samajhdaar ho raha hai,apni jimmedaari aur kartavyo ko samajhne laga hai, aage chalke apne Vasant Bha ke saare sapno ko pura karega,per jab tune teen saal tak iss ghar se,iss gaav se muh hi pher liya toh mann mein ajeeb sa darr baith gaya hai,samaj nahi aa raha beta aakhir tu chahta kya hai, waqt kissi ke liye nahi rukta Kesar, hamare jeevan ki disha aur uski dor hame khud tay karni hoti hai aur jo raaste se bhatak jaye unhe manzil dundhne mein kai saal vyarth karne padte hai,tu samaj raha hai na meri baat..."

"Mujhe nahi pata aap kis raaste aur kis manzil ki baat kar rahe hai MB,agar mere aam bageeche se aam todne ko aap raasta bhatakna keh rahe hai to main daad deta hu uss chugalkhor ki jisne aap ko yeah maan lene pe majboor kiya hai aur iss waqt main kissi bhashan sun ne ke mood mein nahi hu,aap jiski baate sun kar mujhe yeah sab keh rahe hai unke dhkoslo se achi tarah waqif hu main,aap ki tarah aankho pe patti nahi bandh rakhi maine, jo sadhu bane hue shaitaan ko na pehchan saku..."

"Kesar yeah kis tareh ki baate kar raha hai tu MB se,DB had just overheard Kesar's part of conversation and couldn't help but intervene,chal maafi maang abhi ke abhi,iss tarah koi baat karta hai apne pita se,saher mein rehkar apne sanskaar ki bali chada di hai kya tune..."

"Mujhe samaj nahi aata har waqt yeah umeed sirf aur sirf mujhse hi kyun rakhee jaati hai,aur log bhi hai jo baar bar galti karte hai,koi unse kyun kuch nahi kehta,har waqt main hi galat kyun hu..." Kesar restored angrily

Kesar,DB raised his voice and was about to raise her hand when MB stopped her with "rehne dijiye DB,isne jab than hi lee hai apni maan ki karne ki toh isse zabardasti apni baat mat manwayie ,tu ja Kesar raat bahut hi chuki hai,kal subah baat karte hai..."

"Kesar left without a second glance and MB just kept staring at the spot where Kesar stood trying to understand what he was trying to convey not in so many words, everything was not as it appeared, he was aware of the underlying tension between Dushyant and Gulaal and Gulaal's reluctance to be in the same room as Dushyant but he had never paid that much of an attention to it attributing it to Gulaal's refusal to marry Dushyant under the forced circumstances but Kesar's hinting towards possible cover-up made him wary and anxious he had to sat him down and understand more, he slowly walked back towards the door with DB following him seething in anger all directed towards Kesar's downright rude behaviour..."

Gulaal who was trying to sneak into Kesar's room with the food plate was stopped by DB, "Gulaal,woh thaal mujhe de aur tu ja jake khane kha le..."

"Nahi DB main toh kabse khana kha..."..."Gulaal maine achi tarah se janti hu tujhe ,jab tak woh khana nahi kha leta,tere gale se niwala kaise utar sakta hai,hai na,maan kyun nahi leti ke nahi jee payegi uske bagar,kabhi toh apne kartavyao ke diwar se apne aap ko alag karke apne aane wale jeevan ke baare mein soch,hum sab kab tak rahege,jane wale ki yaad ko jinda rakh sakte hai uski yaad mein jindagi nahi bitayi jati Gulaal,aur yeah baat tumhaari samaj mein jitni jaldi aa jaye uthna hi acha hai tumhare liye..."

He was staring at Vasant's picture intently seeking answers for binding them into this suffocating and stifling circumstances, complaining about a seemingly impossible dream that he left them to fulfil, asking for his forgiveness for failing to step into those shoes and requesting his blessings to be that pillar of support for Gulaal he always wanted to be when DB entered with the food plate, she placed it on the table and turned to leave when Kesar called out to her

"Main janta hu aap naraz ho mujhse,lekin meri galti itni badi bhi nahi ki aap meri taraf dekh bhi na sako.waise mujhe bhukh nahi,aap khana wapas le jayiye..." He turned away from her sulking

DB who couldn't help but smile at his antics picked up the plate and extended a morsel towards his mouth,"Kesu aise hi bachpana karta raha to apni patni ki jimmedaari kaise uthayega,bahut dukh aur takleef sahe hai usne,ab teri baari hai na usse shambhal ne ki,itna bada toh ho hi gaya hai na tu..."

Kesar kept looking at her with eyes full of admiration and affection before saying..."Aap Gulaal ki baat kar rahi hai na...main..."

"Aur nahi toh kiski,pyaar karta hai na usse,samaj usse aur sahara ban uska,akele ladti aayee hai aaj tak har mushkilo se,apne aap ko kabil bana uske, pati ki jagah lene ke layak bana...usko sabse jayada teri jarurat hai...aur tu hai ki..."

"DB Kya mera usse pyaar karna galat nahi hai,woh Vasant Bha ki..."

"Gulaal teri patni hai Kesar,aur patni ko pyaar karna koi galat baat nahi,ha uss pyaar ke layak banana tumhara farz hai,aur jaha tak Gulaal ko samjhanne ki baat hai toh Kesar yeah kaam toh tumhe hi karna hoga,usne apne aap ko iss ghar ki chaar diwaro mein quaid sa kar diya hai,iss ghar ke logo ki takleef aur unke dukh dard ke aage usse apna vajud hi samarpan kar diya hai,tumhe usse woh vajud aur woh mushkurahat lautani hai jisse woh apne aap ko khoj sake,Mujhe pura vishwaas hai Kesar tum woh Gulaal ko jarur wapas le aaoge jo aaj se 9 saal pehle Talsagara aayee thi..."

Buoyed by DB's support, Kesar smiled at the picture in front,"Vasant bha main jaan gaya hu mujhe kya karna hai Vasant Bha...main usse sab sach kehne ja raha hu,aap meri madad karna..."

Next Morning he went looking for Gulaal in the kitchen, not seeing her there he asked for her whereabouts to PB who instead of answering asked him as to why he was looking for her, if there was anything he needed she could get Talli to do it and that irritated him like anything...

"PB,main apni patni ko dundh raha hu,uske saath bahar jana chahta hu,usme kissi koi aapatti toh nahi honi chahiye na..."

Gulaal who was just about to enter in the kitchen froze on the door step listening to Kesar's words...

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Edited by enchanted23 - 13 years ago
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Aduuu first of all take a big jhappi for the back to back updates👏I am in awe of this one..Wonderfully written and actually touched the most important aspect of the show MB Kesar relation...which remained highly unexplored.Loved how you always maintain the essence of certain relations like MB and Gulaal..The chapter wonderfully captured the trait of Gulaal to cover up for Kesar..Loved her explanations and how MB actually understands her lies,..Ahhh Lubbly👏
MB Kesar conversation was wonderfully penned down as well...I loved how MB tries to figure out the reason behind Kesar's behaviour...
Awww Can I say that I love DB...I am happy you chose DB to knock some sense into Kesar and not that soulful bandariya Talli..I am happy that she is elusive till now..Agey bhi rahe acha hi hoga😆
Aww I love the little roothna manana with DB and the way she understands his heart is wonderful..Ahhh really wonderful
And last part to mera fav Kesuda back to Kesar ishtyle😎Me SUPERLIKES!! PATNI JAAP😳
Oye Adu now you have to come up with the next chappi superfast coz..I cannot wait to see Galool's reaction😆Loved the update👏
Edited by manzilmukul - 13 years ago
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Aditi 🤗….loved loved loved this chapter….
Starting with Gulaal n Mb scene….ha ha she always does this na to save her kesar even from getting scolded by his father MB…but na here its MB n so he very well know that she is just saying a lie to save kesar as always...but still she tries to save him even after to returns na...but plan is fully flop as MB is very determined to talk to Kesar...
The convo between Mb n Kesar...we always needed these convos between them in show which we got in very less...loved how Mb is starting directly to point that why he is not interested the doing work in tharkhaana when he himself did it some years back...if we think in MB's perspective how much he have worried about kesar being aloof to everyone n staying away from home for 3 years...losing a son like Vasant, now he have all the hopes in kesar na...he would be so much terrified for even thinking that may be kesar will never come back to the village...but all he can do is to give him an advice to choose a correct way to go to his manzil...
But kesar being kesar talks a bit rude thinking about Dushy complaining this to MB….which is purely an outcome of his resolve to keep the truth as a secret for his Gulaal's sake….but here I liked how Mb is atleast thinking about the words that kesar said to him n trying to understand what those words mean...atleast here he is not blind when it comes to kesar's behavior like in the show...
Gulaal n DB convo...ha ha gulaal trying to hide which she is unable to do in front of DB...well said DB that atleast now gulaal should think about her keeping her so called responsibilities aside...
Kesar looking at vasant pic asking him that why he did this to them to him n his gulaal for bind to his promise that he cant tell the truth to anyone….
Kesar in total sulky mode….ithne nakhre kartha hai na….ab Db koh toh aakhe usse sab samjhaana hoga na...loved loved this convo...need to say that we all love DV so much who we missed so much in the show...DB being a responsible n samajdhaar elder gave him some advice to behave like a grown up as he has to take care of his wife who sacrified so much for the family...kesar asking whether she is talking about gulaal to confirm is so much kesarish...n then his doubt which he always had came out that whether he can love his Gulaal...loved Db here as she said that he can love his wife...there is no wrong in it...he has to take care of her n take up his responsibilities as her husband n bring back that Gulaal who has come here to this village some years back with full of life but who is now just leading a life without any life...getting a support in DB, kesar is now full on confident na….so he wants to tell everything to his gulaal….why do PB bring up talli when she know that kesar is not interested n he will get irritated na….see he gets irritated n we got this patni rap karne waala kesar...love this kesar full on patni rap….how could you stop here without letting us know the reaction of gulaal 😡
Aditi 🤗...you need to update the next chapter jaldi jaldi...cant wait to know the reaction of Gulaal after listening patni rap from kesar...will she go with him n will he be able to tell his dil ki baat to her...or else she will start her galool mode from this moment itself...waiting so desperately now...weekend jaldi aaja...

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Aditi🤗 Both the chapters were so beautiful and you stopped at such a point that it is making me all excited and eager to get
to know what happens next.ok so coming on to the chapters...Chapter 17 was really good.The first scene made me feel for
Kesar.He would have been heartbroken to hear her explanation na.The dialogue of his regarding his childhood haq was so
poignant.I mean he knew even when he was a child that it was only his his zid and nakhras that made Gullu say yes to his
question about whom she loved more?awww that made me a little sad😭This has to be my fav scene in this chapter.beautiful
dialogues.I could imagine Neil saying all these dialogues and it really got me very emotional Aditi.Wonderful job👏 The next
scene which I liked was the one between Dushyant and Kesar.Right now Kesar is like a simmering Volcano.He is keeping all
the anger and pain contained in himself just for the sake of his Gulaal but I have a feeling that one day very soon he is
going to explode.One thing I am very happy about is that he is privy to Gulaal's thoughts and feelings through her journal
cause for now this is the only way to get to know her mind.Gulaal has a long way to go before she can share her heart with
Kesar na.loved the journal entry Aditi

Chapter 18:MB was always a smart guy so now he is sensing that his son is trying to cover up something.He does get the
feeling that it has to do something with Dushyant and he is so right na that whatever Kesar is trying to hide will tear the
house apart.sigh...I loved Kesar's dialogues a lot here.His frustration and helplessness has been portrayed very
well.MB and DB are rightfully worried.DB is the cupid here na.If only there was someone who could have guided Kesar in the show but that makes me admire him all the more cause he stood steadfast in his love for Gulaal throughout even when he was supposed to hate her.I
really loved the dialogue where DB says that it is not wrong to love your wife but you have to become worthy of her
love.That was nice.Aditi...I am now really looking forward to the next chapter to see how Gulaal reacts.Will she go out
with Kesar and will they be having a talk...will Kesar speak his mind?uff so many questions and they are all making me
impatient.Eagerly waiting for the weekend to come😍
oh forgot to add the little talk between DB and Gulaal was beautiful.DB does understand Gulaal very well na.loved that bit
a lot.
so yeh le a big hug for the two wonderful updates🤗I am so happy to be back😃
ok there is something wrong with the formatting.I tried to make it right but it is not working.and really sorry about the haphazard nature of my comments😭
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Aditi 🤗 Thankoos much for continuing with your PMs, without which I'd totally miss updates given my absence on this forum! And I came and realized I'd missed TWO chapters!!! 😲 But then I realized that you'd been superfast and done two quickies!!!

So here goes chapter 17 - The last part, the diary entry, out of nowhere reminded me of how Gulaal was technically never supposed to do complete shingaar as per the mannat for her birth. And how, until Vasant came along looking for his water finding angel Nirja, she'd never worn paayal to keep up the mannat. How Vasant changed that for her. Out of no intention to bind - but how, truly, it did bind her in a way that she herself could not break free even when chances came and went! I loved the writing and flow of the entire chapter - as always - including how you wove in the making of a BIG Kesar Dushyant storm in such a subtle and unsuspecting manner with the mere mischief of mango felling and Dushyant's harmless act to help the farmer ... but what TRULY moved me was the diary entry. In a matter of seconds, I relived the whole thing that was Gulaal's pre-Talsagra past... all that went into her going from Gulaal to Nirja to Gulaal... what a wonderful wonderful show this was - and what a stupendous job you do bringing back entire flashes of whole chunks of the show! 👏👏👏👏👏

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Reading Chapter 18 later today and will be back after!
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unres done in pg-43 n pg-44 for both the chapters 😃
Sorry for being SOO late in unresing ...bit busy these days with work 😭...so had to unres in office...so not sure what I have written as I had many interruptions in between...

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Posted: 13 years ago
@Aditi, for chapter 17&18 aapkeliye.



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Mhara bhi reswa😳
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Aditi thank you so much much for keeping your promise and Congrats for coming out with flying colours in your exams.

Thanks you Piyudi,mujhe pitai se darr laging yaar,isliye socha pass hona hi behtar hai,your dhamki worked😆
Weekend update bonanza ..and I lubbed it to the core👏
Starting with the most dreaded question...and Gulaal being a SUPER GALOOL answers in the most unexpected way.Had there beena 1o yr gap like the show..so it would have been different but since he literally grew with her so her reaction was wonderfully done.Ahhh the pain of being treated like a kid always..Poor Kesar But his dialogue was very beautifully written indeed.👏
Well for Gulaal this question was out of the blue,she is completely unaware of what's going on in his mind na,and the first thing that comes to her mind is that he is being kiddish and that's what's reflected in her reply,for Kesar who's privy to her thoughts through her diary this doesn't come as surprise,yes he is disappointed but he does understand her oh these two I don't have words to describe how interwoven yet so far apart their lives were at this stage sigh!

Well now coming to the MB contemplation...I could imagine Manoj Joshi with his eyes closed..Another brilliant actor wasted to focus on Talli😡In the shwo..,Honestly I would have loved such speculative scenes..But all they showed was that idiaotic bandariya in her la la landWonderfully written

Hmm MB was one hell of a smart guy who could foresee all problems as result of that DV that his family will have to deal with,I agree his character wasn't explored enough in the show

The Dushy-Kesu scene was wonderfully charged up...With the simmering hatred ..I loved how Kesar shot back...His teaching kids to hunt raw mangoes with Gulaail was so KESARISH...loved it...
Hahaha abhi toh suruaat hai,Keser when in full glory Dushy will have tough time to hide
Finally coming to the last part ...ONE WORD BRILLIANT👏.The whole linking of the memory of Vasant and then the simultaneous reading of the diary was wonderfully correlated...⭐️
Aww Thanks you this is something I really liked in this chapter too,I just wanted him to remember what his brother was capable of enticing from anyone and here were two closest ppl bound by his oath that were so potent that it was killing them everyday slowly but surely
Really can't wait for the next update..Thanks once again🤗



Aduuu first of all take a big jhappi for the back to back updates👏I am in awe of this one..Wonderfully written and actually touched the most important aspect of the show MB Kesar relation...which remained highly unexplored.Loved how you always maintain the essence of certain relations like MB and Gulaal..The chapter wonderfully captured the trait of Gulaal to cover up for Kesar..Loved her explanations and how MB actually understands her lies,..Ahhh Lubbly👏

Thanks Piyu for me MB,Kesar relationship was the most unexplored aspect of this show beside Dushyant/Kesar,all we can do is moan the ruined opportunities,If only they were not so obsessed with Talli😡
MB Kesar conversation was wonderfully penned down as well...I loved how MB tries to figure out the reason behind Kesar's behaviour...
Hmm He is just trying to understand his son's odd behaviour after all he has not been distanced from him like his show counterpart so he does understand him a lot better
Awww Can I say that I love DB...I am happy you chose DB to knock some sense into Kesar and not that soulful bandariya Talli..I am happy that she is elusive till now..Agey bhi rahe acha hi hoga😆
Aww I love the little roothna manana with DB and the way she understands his heart is wonderful..Ahhh really wonderful
And last part to mera fav Kesuda back to Kesar ishtyle😎Me SUPERLIKES!! PATNI JAAP😳
Hahaha this just to get his way,he still not trying to exert his rights as husband because of that DV,he is just being her Kesar he always was😳

Thanks for your lovely comments and always being so prompt in penning it down for me,This is what keeps me going,very much appreciated big jhappi🤗
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Aditi 🤗'..fab fab chapter'
Ramya🤗 thanks Yaar
Gulaal reaction to his question '.as always she took it as his bachpanaa'but me very sad seeing kesar so broken 😭'.so helpless that now he cant ask her to say what he wanted which he could do easily some years back'
Kesar is grown up now and is privy to Gulaal's thoughts through her diary so he understands her much better and also the love that she has for Vasant he is sad for not having that space in her life like Vasant but he is determined to earn it that's our Kesu na😳
loved the scene between kesar n devika...very emotional one...I like the way u brought this scene which we never get in the show...it would be good if we get some devika kesar scenes post leap as their bond is very good in preleap...
Hmm I thought so too,She just disappeared post-leap given their close relationship pre-leap this was something really jarring
MB thinking about what PB said to him about kesar's decision...he is one who is able to see the future n complications of this DV from so many years...n now he know that THE moment is about to come which may lead to many problems n he cannot do anything though he wanted to do something some years back by talking to kesar about this relation...
Yeah he had many opportunities but somehow never bring himself to sat down Kesar and talked to him at length about the circumstances that lead to the DV
Coming to Dushy n Kesar scene'what to say..it is full on pack with so many unsaid words'.loved how dushy asked everyone about what they r doing'but kesar being kesar had to go against it na'to show dushy that he can do what he wants n dushy can never stop it...how can we blame him when he is trying very hard to not reveal the truth to anyone for his Gulaal...
Kesar will always be Kesar na,so direct unable to hide what's in his mind though he is putting up a brave front and is trying to deal with it let's see for how long
The scene when he thinks about vasant was very good...loved it...the flow is very good which linked to Gulaal's diary entry...
Thanks you I was just trying to bind all three together using their thought process😳
Loved it Aditi 😳...now me going to unres by next res...


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Aditi 🤗'.loved loved loved this chapter'.
Starting with Gulaal n Mb scene'.ha ha she always does this na to save her kesar even from getting scolded by his father MB'but na here its MB n so he very well know that she is just saying a lie to save kesar as always...but still she tries to save him even after to returns na...but plan is fully flop as MB is very determined to talk to Kesar...
Hmm Gulaal and Kesar no matter how angry are they with each other when it comes to someone else they are first to defend the other,remember that scene where MB was so angry with Kesar for not reaching on that school function and having fight and Gulaal too was shaken by his anger and disapproved of his actions but the moment MB took up the case she was the first to defend him aww I miss them so much😭
The convo between Mb n Kesar...we always needed these convos between them in show which we got in very less...loved how Mb is starting directly to point that why he is not interested the doing work in tharkhaana when he himself did it some years back...if we think in MB's perspective how much he have worried about kesar being aloof to everyone n staying away from home for 3 years...losing a son like Vasant, now he have all the hopes in kesar na...he would be so much terrified for even thinking that may be kesar will never come back to the village...but all he can do is to give him an advice to choose a correct way to go to his manzil...
MB is very wise Man he understands his son very well and he knows there is something that has kept him away for three long years also the change in his behavior is not hidden from him lack of interest in any kind of responsibility is worrying factor so he does want to understand what's troubling him and that's why he is determined to have a word with him...
But kesar being kesar talks a bit rude thinking about Dushy complaining this to MB'.which is purely an outcome of his resolve to keep the truth as a secret for his Gulaal's sake'.but here I liked how Mb is atleast thinking about the words that kesar said to him n trying to understand what those words mean...atleast here he is not blind when it comes to kesar's behavior like in the show...
Hmm Gulaal ke liye toh banda apni jaan bhi de de Chup rehna kaunsi badi baat hai,even though this chuppi is killing him from inside
Gulaal n DB convo...ha ha gulaal trying to hide which she is unable to do in front of DB...well said DB that atleast now gulaal should think about her keeping her so called responsibilities aside...
Kesar looking at vasant pic asking him that why he did this to them to him n his gulaal for bind to his promise that he cant tell the truth to anyone'.
Kesar in total sulky mode'.ithne nakhre kartha hai na'
He can be this kid in front of DB na,he always was one after all till he decided to put his needs and wants aside for Gulaal's sake😭
.ab Db koh toh aakhe usse sab samjhaana hoga na...loved loved this convo...need to say that we all love DV so much who we missed so much in the show...DB being a responsible n samajdhaar elder gave him some advice to behave like a grown up as he has to take care of his wife who sacrified so much for the family...kesar asking whether she is talking about gulaal to confirm is so much kesarish...n then his doubt which he always had came out that whether he can love his Gulaal...loved Db here as she said that he can love his wife...there is no wrong in it...he has to take care of her n take up his responsibilities as her husband n bring back that Gulaal who has come here to this village some years back with full of life but who is now just leading a life without any life...getting a support in DB, kesar is now full on confident na'.so he wants to tell everything to his gulaal'.

Yeah DB is going to be a strong support system for Kesu who understand him and wants him to be that strength that wall that pillar Gulaal can rely on,she has seen Gulaal sacrificing and living her life for him and she also know how inseparable they both are so she is doing the right thing encouraging Kesar ti understand his responsibilities and win her over #
why do PB bring up talli when she know that kesar is not interested n he will get irritated na'.see he gets irritated n we got this patni rap karne waala kesar...love this kesar full on patni rap'.how could you stop here without letting us know the reaction of gulaal 😡
Aww Next chapter mein padh lena,sabra ka fal meetha hota hai😳
Aditi 🤗...you need to update the next chapter jaldi jaldi...cant wait to know the reaction of Gulaal after listening patni rap from kesar...will she go with him n will he be able to tell his dil ki baat to her...or else she will start her galool mode from this moment itself...waiting so desperately now...weekend jaldi aaja...
Thanks you Ramya for your lovely comments it means a lot to me and encourages me to keep going at this,I understand you are busy so don't worry about commentting late,it's good enough for me that you can get here and can write your essay whenever you find time,,big hug🤗


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