Gulaal: What If chp 26(part II) upd Pg 57 - Page 19

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Awww what a Super duper heart wrenching yet satiating Saturday update Yeay to that🥳Ok now my gushing...Starting from the beautiful walk..I must admit I lubbed it and then the little admiration spree..Kesu to all floored since childhood na😆and then the monologue wow!! I am speechless like Gulaal!!

Wonderful writing My haseen qatil.And O man You made me senti with your jhumka twist..Oh that was such an emotional scene beautifully written.Lubbed it...

And finally The chunar twist and as usual Gullu just gave away what was rightfully hers and then Kesu ka bang on statement😳Hai Talli tera kya hoga😆

Oh no chappi kahtam😭But still I am satisfied what a beautiful gift for saturday evening...Lubbed it🤗Ab jaldi Part2 update karo😍

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@Aditi and piu,
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Me very late 😭
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Aditi 🤗...how can U stop at that moment 😡...Gussa bhaad mein karthi hoon...ab toh comments de dethi hoon...
The starting was so good...Ohh she is wearing those bangles gifted by him 😳...she is still treating him like a kid ...Kesar looking at her all zapped n thinking how can he miss noticing her all these years...certainly the changes r effecting him so much now,...wow that monologue by kesar 👏...I am just speechless just like gulaal...he so very well know how she is not the same gulaal in the house...he brought her jhumke 😳...that too the ones she liked all those years ago...he remembered them n brought them...he is fulfilling all those things that vasant has to do for gulaal na...Gulaal letting those tears in front of kesar...she can only do it in front of him...he was there as her support...The return journey...kesar is really feeling the changes na...ahh gullu kab sudhregi 😡...how can she give that chunar to talli 😡...uss talli koh wahi chahiyein jo gullu ki hai 😡...kesar bang on for giving her that piece of advice 👏...gullu ki toh bholthi band ho gayee...I wish he gives all these kinds of advice to her every now n then to stop her so called mahaantha of letting go off her rights...kesar thinking abt gulaal as his gulaal n his sudden thought abt this...
Kesar is very responsible na...mB bhi usse rokh nahi paayein...bas biwi ki chalthi hai na 😆...he has to come n eat breakfast...I liked how he convinced that he can mange everything...against dushy's worries...dushy worry is so justified as he only know abt duggu entry in rashipur...but mb is also correct abt his statements that now rashipur is a safe place for them...gulaal worry for kesar is also very genuine...Offo she is calling him to talk to him giving an excuse of shirt button...kya understanding hai pati patni mein 😳...bas koi ishaara de ...dosre koh patha chal jhaatha hai 😆...kesar confusion abt the whole conversation of him with dushy n mb is understandable...which only increased seeing fear n worry in gulaal's eyes... So kesar is getting to know abt all the secrets in the near future...OMG he is hurt ...though he will be safe as now dushy is here...but usse aisa hurt kyun kiya...n more over how can u stop the chapter at this place...how can u stop when kesar is hurt yaar...
Aditi...such a beautiful update...this upadet gave an insight to the changes that kesar is seeing in gulaal n feeling/thinking abt gulaal...N ofcourse his first steps towards the truth...Now I cant wiat for the next chapter 😍...jaldi jaldi update kar...when will next weekend come...as Piu said...me also expecting gullu to do all pati seva 😳

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Res for part 2 😳

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Wow what a slow steady yet worthy build up for the much awaited revelation of the past hidden tales..M impressed.Loved the sensible Kesar who understands his responsibility but ohg Kesu biwi k agey bolti bandh ..she came and you had to eat breakfast koi bahana nahi chalega😆Lubbed it and then how he manoes everyone😳

Dushyant's worry is believable and gullu ka anxiety is so beautiful..I am lubbing her in yor SS button ka bahana kar k bula liya😆

And the final scene with Kesu injured is tragic..You are so bad left the chappi at a cliffhanger...I want to know how patni ji will now do his seva😳

Loved the chappi Adu...Everything was so beautiful and the twists in similar situations from the show were great..I am greedy now..I want next chapter jaldi but yes I will try to find the patience till next update😳

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Thanks for liking the poster 🤗and kalika thanks for the wonderful roses😳

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unres done in previous page 😊

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for all chpters, with love kalika


Aww Thanks Kalika for beautiful flowers and returns hugs to you🤗 Thanks for your support😳
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Aditi 🤗 yaar next update kab ayega? jaldi se laa na 😊


Kiranwa so good to see you yara🤗 I have updated hope you will like it😳 Thanks for your continual support means a lot to me😊
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Aditi 🤗...its a pleasure of read abt the responsible n also the nasamajh kesar at the same time...
I can totally visualize how they met after 1 year...gulaal all conscious that he is now grown up n he may not be the same kesar...but once she saw him...she left those nervousness n all those doubts and just went near him...Coming to kesar...his reaction to her touch n letting her know its her kesar through the hug 😳...with this gesture he cleared all her worries that its her kesar, her kavach who was always with her n will be with her always...never letting her be alone...I just loved the bit when gulaal is not even letting him part from her...as we know though she is in this house...her reason to stay here n for her this house is a home when her kesar is in this house...gulaal always telling him abt all others worries abt him but he actually interested in knowing whether she is waiting for him or not 😳...n then her direct answer to him that she is waiting for him more than any one...aahhh those zimmedaari words...kesar asking her directly whether he is just a responsibility for her...what a question for which she can never answer or atleast now...talli ki bachchi 😡...kya timing hai teri..knock karna nahi aathi hai tujhe...besharam ladki 🤢...i am just totally angry at talli now...good that gulaal atleast felt that kesar was correct in stopping talli entering her room without knocking n her mistake in letting talli enter her room opposing kesar...

Ramya Kesar can never grow apart from Gulaal his feeling from that of respect and reverence might change to love and surrender but at the heart of this story it coming together of two soulmates who were completely devoted to the one they loved and that's why the feeling changes and takes another shape or form but the essence of belonging remains...

JK 👏...u r a rockstar yaar...kya kamaal ki cupid hai yaar...sach mein pb ki toh bolthi hi bandh hogayee na...n she has to call gulaal to welcome kesar like a lovely wifey...I really liked that gulaal is very happy shappy in doing this...though she dont know the reasons...aahhh kesar impatience to meet her getting away from those disturbances to know the answer to his question...thanks to kesar n his question that atlast she thought to speak to kesar abt his responsibilities...I am very happy that kesar declared from now on it has to gulaal who will be looking after his things in his room 😳...n his dhamki that he will be leaving if this is not done...I just love kesar in angry mode 😳...I even liked that he directly left to gulaal's room to get ready for the puja without even asking any permissions n not even thinking to go to some other room 😳...wow the puja scene with kesar n gulaal doing puja without that bhandariyaan 😍...mera dil khush hogayaa yaar ...kaash aisi scene show mein bhi milthi jahaa woh talli jhalli inke beech mein nahi hothi 😡

Yup i wanted at least one scene where she was not centre of focus of DP mein toh bus tara hi gayi aisa kuch dekhne ko😳

I am happy that kesar is taking part in the business work n also taking up his responsibilities which led MB to think to talk to kesar abt his unanswered questions all these years...well I totally understand pb thinking to send gulaal to her maayka so that there will be no talks abt kesar n gulaal...his thought process that why gulaal didnot informed him abt this n why did she wants to go now when he is here only for some days...but when he heard dushy name...he has to make sure that he will be taking gulaal with him na...so possessive n protective 😳...
kesar doing ishaara n gulaal following him to his room...so much husband-wife types 😳...but really does she require that glass of water to go n meet kesar in his room...kya din aageyein yaar...his closing the door n her reaction to it n ofcourse his answer...i am just shocked but this is kesar...he says what he thinks...n for him its the biggest truth of his life that they r wife n husband...kesar bang on directly going to the point that why she is leaving him when he will stay here only for some days...does she really wants to leave him or its just accepting what others wanted her to do which she always does...when she said that now he doesnot need her anymore...his response asking her abt her needs n wishes...no one ever thought abt it for her...kesar letting her to accept that she donot want to leave him n making sure that MB stop all this planning of pb...I appreciate kesar 👏...
Kesar authority on taking gulaal with him...well whats the problem of pb now...she is tagging talli with kesar n gulaal...good that kesar is not liking it anymore n made sure to stop this by taking MB name...But one thing which is making me restless would be the eye exchange between sudha n pb...did sudha talked abt talli jhaali marriage plans with pb...that would really create a lots of problems in future...

Ramya PB is just being Kesar's mother here,she is concerned about his future and naturally is following every rule in the book to keep his future safe ab usko kya malum uska beta kya chahta hai,Talli will only fill in gaps where needed here so don't worry uska khatra kam hi hai meri story mein😆
kesar cant see her all moody na...he always makes sure that his gulaal should be all lively with him...just in love with the last para...its so beautifully written abt the changes in the life...how nothing is permanent n how everything changes drastically...kesar recollecting their past n when she was abt to fall down...n then giving his support by forwarding his hand...gulaal accepting his support without any reluctance n hesitation...the last bit is my favorite while they are walking holding each other hands all silently being each others support...its a fab ending to the chapter...
Aditi...I am just loving this story like anything 😳...no problem in waiting for a whole week to read the next chapter when the chapter is making u feel all overwhelmed after reading it...I totally appreciate the way u r bringing the changes between them...looking forward to the next chapter update...next weekend ab jaldi aaja...
Thanks Ramya for your patience,I can only do weekends yaar you know how our work leave us very little time on weekdays na, and being outside India there is added zamela of doing cooking and cleaning on your own kya kare Thanks for your lovely comments and continual support it means a lot🤗

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