Gulaal: What If chp 26(part II) upd Pg 57 - Page 17

Originally posted by: Kesarmania

res 4 2 chapter aditi amazing chapters👏, loved readin g both of them. mb - gullu confrontation, kes- gul confrontation before kesar's depature were my fav.😃 dv really made kesar so much , mature.

but yeh pb, she is more like plastic surgery pb.😆

thanks 4 pm dear 😃

Originally posted by: minizz

RES😊

Aditi🤗this was a beautiful chapter and I am very impressed that you were to present Gulaal's POV so beautifully

Thanks Partner🤗 I am trying to see her pov but not w/o alterations,This is how I would have envisaged her character yaar...

Gulaal missing Kesar was perfectly described.Of course she had never felt this lonely or sad before even after Vasant's death because Golu was always with her.Her explanation for staying strong and not breaking down was that Kesar needed her,her family needed her but the fact is that it was only due to Kesar's support that she could carry on.She too needed him just as much.I am not talking in the romantic sense at all.Their bond was so much more elemental than that.

Yes,somehow I never felt this was explicitly shown in the show,though there were subtle hints but it was too important to just leave to viewers imaginations,imo Gulaal needs him equally if not more to survive through the trauma of losing Vasant and still sticking around in the house that was full of his memories that haunted her...

I loved how you portrayed Gulaal's uncontrollable happiness with Kesar's weekend visit.That journal entry was so poignant.It reminded me of the scene post leap when Talli asks her to participate in a race to see who will see Kesar first.I am sure in her heart she wanted to take part,her expressions were proof enough but she was bound by the shackles of responsibility and promises(ugghhh).So I loved that reference a lot.

Yeah Gulaal always had to bind herself in those shackles because she felt she owed that to Vasant,she had to ensure his dream was realized it didn't matter if she had to sacrifice her needs/wants for that,but this is where G & K differ so much,one is trying to stand by promise at cost of everything,other wants everything to be at her feet if that would make her happy because he knows that's what his brother would have done...

She is so disappointed when dushyant returns home alone.Manasi would have enacted this scene beautifully.Her mock anger really made me emotional.bechaari.yay for the bike ride.That was such an unexpectedlittle gift.dil khush ho gaya.It was such a sweet moment between Gulaal and Kesar.Kesar always knew how to push her buttons na.He challenged her and how can Gulaal back off?I know many will disagree with me here but to me Gulaal with Vasant would always have been slightly restrained.Yes,she would be her chulbuli self but somewhere she would always feel the need to curtail herself.She looked upto Vasant as an ideal man so she would always feel the need to measure upto his greatness.I don't know if I am making sense here but I feel that Gulaal would have changed eventually even with Vasant alive.She would have lost some of her natural natkhatpan and rebelliousness and I am not saying that it is bad.With Kesar that would never be the case,with him she can be herself,she doesn't feel any pressure.Maybe that's why she could bond with Golu so easily because she knew that he was exactly like her.So to me that bike ride symbolised all of this.This is the real Guaal who is in some ways a rebel and in Kesar she has found a kindred spirit.and that slip of tongue...hmmm...I want to read more before I can say anything.

Exactly her life changed a lot when she married Vasant,she was not same carefree,chulbuli,free spirit she once was,she was expected to fall inline with Vasant's dreams and aspirations,she changed the moment she uttered this word tathastu...her life's sole aim was realization of that dream from that moment onwards...

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now that I have read the next update too I want to say something about this moment.I really loved it yaar.For me it is not that she is mistaking Kesar for Vasant at all because Vasant has his own place in her heart and Kesar has his own special place.To me it was more about Gulaal herself-

For those few moments she had forgotten all about responsibilities.

She went back to being the fun loving,carefree Gulaal who knew that Vasant would always be there to support her.I loved how you described it.Kesar's reaction was as expected cause he never was jealous of his brother.Actually his love and respect for Gulaal just increased because of her love and loyalty to his Vasant bha na.So that's my view about that tiny little moment😃sorry for the huge essay😭

Thank you for the huge essay, love your insightful analysis always,it's amazing to read how you are able to visualize my ideas and write-up,sometime it seems like you are reading my mind,Thank you for such a beautiful and lovely comments Partner,your support means a lot to me,Thanks for being around and always encouraging me with your awesome analysis🤗

looking forward to the next chapter.Please update soon😊

Originally posted by: MR21

i am late :(

res

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Aditi 🤗...it is a very good surprise yaar...

Ch-8:

Gulaal feeling all sad n lonely n missing kesar...it has to be in this way only...she would have never felt this lonelines in her life before...even after vasant death..there is kesar who never made her feel alone...Mb trying to make her more busy with more work as he know how much she is attached to kesar n how much it pains n effects her...though she is very much busy with all those works...she is really waiting for the week end so that she can meet her kesar n bear all his nautanki 😆...

yes though she never explicitly said this but he was her only support after Vasant's death and MB always could read her like an open book na,he went out of his way to ensure she was always treated like a daughter of the house..

she has to be very exicted na to see her kesar after 5 days...preparing all his fav dishes n not even going to temple just to not miss a single second being with kesar 😳...I just loved that bit when she is writing to vasant abt her feeling to run n meet kesar all exicted 😳 ..how disappointing it would be when she saw dushy without kesar...kesar n his plans to make gulaal happy with all these surprises...so he is planning to take her to some place that too on bike...he very well knew how to make her agree by challenging...as she is will definitely accpet it...I just loved loved loved the bit when he says that if he wants to do practice then he would have taken talli with him 🤣...

Well she would have been as excited as she was on the day when Vasant returned from the city,only this time she was bound by shackles of her promises and society,Kesar always a rebel naturally learned things that provided him that thrill and for him to make Gulaal participate in something this thrilling and exciting a 100% guarantee of adventures success was required and yeah that Talli line shows my love for her character😳

he is taking gulaal with him then it means he made sure that he is good in driving the bike 😳...I just loved how she is reliving all those past moments with vasant on cycle n wondering how she is unable to live in the same way n wondering even though vasant is with her always why cant she live this way...why cant she break these so called shackles that are binding her in the name of responsibility, wishes of family n vasant...she is stopping her self to go back to that carefree n natkhat gulaal...awe those words when kesar hold her from falling down thinking abt vasant...she is so surprised na...but i really loved kesar reaction to it as if its so natural for him to gulaal calling him vasant...he never had this problem of accepting vasant place in gulaal's life...he always liked this devotion of gulaal for his vasant ba so much...

Yes Vasant's prominence in Gulaal's life was never in doubt,in fact that's what made Kesar fall in love with Gulaal,her dedication and total devotion towards Vasant

Ch-9:

I liked the way he took her holding her hand carefully to make her happy with this small gesture...he very well know how much gulaal appreciated this just looking at her 😳...so what a plan kesar to talk to her abt ur plan to go to city for further studies n make her understand that he had to leave her all alone ...I also agree with gulaal that she would never wished that kesar do not fulfill vasant dream as even she saw the dream of vasant with him...ahh kesar u will never ever let gulaal be near dushy na 😆..but i never though that he would tell this to gulaal directly that he dont like her to stay near dushy...but he never pretended n said what he wanted to always...

Yeah imo Kesar never learnt diplomacy and did everything and anything that he thought was right,For him Dushyant represented someone who was trying to get closer to Gulaal and by that he was his enemy,he was worried about leaving Gulaal where Dushyant also stayed so his concern was justified I guess😊

i liked that kesar himself talk to mb n family abt his decision in studying in city...I can totally understand gulaal pain in letting her kesar go away from her for these many days...but she would bear this loneliness only for vasant n kesar's future...kesar talking to vasant photo is so emotional 😭...his accusation that vasant left them n now his promise is leading him to leave her alone 😭...this is one of the best scenes in these chapters 😃...gulaal feeling happy seeing kesar all grown up...

Aww Thanks Ramya,I like this part too,he is kind of left with no choice here and as always he complaints ti his Vasant Bha for putting hin in such a position,I would have loved to see something like this in the show😭

gulaal telling to that relative that kesar will tell her if he likes any girl n she will be the one who will be the most happiest among every one...well gulaal it would never happen at any cost...so dont worry poonam baa...so he is writing letters to gulaal n mb 😳...i liked this bit as he is not only writing letters to gulaal as we know he will definitely do write letters to her..but he is writing letters to mb also letting mb n family know how he is studying n not making him an alien to his family...kesar u better dont do all those stunts...anyways u will never do them now 😆...so gulaal is ready with her mahaan idea of match making though it is in initial stages...why did she asked that question to him whether he likes any girl 😡...but his answer is bang on that he considers himself as married n being a married person he cant look at any other girl 👏...gulaal in galool mode thinking that its his naadhaani 😡...but why cant she see that now kesar is not a kid n he may now started understanding the meaning of marriage n being married if not totally but partially...his concern n fear which lead him to ask her abt dushy n asking her to stay away from him...i accept her dilemma here as she dont know why he is not comfortable with dushy...so he is 18 years now 😳n she is waiting for her kesar to come so that she can scold him for breaking his promises of coming home in holidays...why no one is letting gulaal work for her kesar...but why do talli decorating his room 😡...i just wish that kesar scolds her for being in his room n touching his things n it will be even more good that if he says that only gulaal has the right to touch his things 😍...so he only wanted to see his gulaal first after coming back na 😳...n she know it has to be him as she is very well know him n his ways to meet her 😳

Wow Ramya,Thanks for such a long essay yaar,ab mere kehne ke liye kya baaki bacha,Thanks for exactly stating what I wanted to convey through my chapters,it feels so good when you are able to convey your viewpoint to viewers so clearly😳

Aditi..u have to stop here na 😡...he is back n now we have to wait till next week end to read next chapter 😭..how can i wait till then ...please do update soon 😍

Aww Ramya,sorry but i had reached my limit of going any further,so I ended there,I have updated next chapter,hope you will like it...Thanks for your constatnt support and lovely comments it means a lot to me🤗

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Aditi...My haseen qatil..🤗Pehle me Kaan pakding yaara...For such a late unres...Maar mujhe..But you know na..How busy this week had been..

Arrey koi baat nahi yara der se hi sahi per aap aaye toh,mujhe vishwas hai aap per,hamesha rahega😊

So very sorry yaar.😭..

But here goes my Mini essay on each and every chappi😛

Chapter 6

I must say The chapter started on a very high note with the scenes which had one of my fav scenes between the father and son.I must say MB-kesar scenes fascinated me during the show time too and I must clap that this one too caught my attention..Beautifully written.The ziddi and jealous Kesu and his snubbing and then his simultaneous punishment was very well executed.Also loved the MB -gulaal Convo.MB was always a very sensible man and I always wondered how a very intelligent gal like Gulaal failed to sense the potency of the warnings of MB.bUt unlike her show counterpart,Your Gulaal is human..I lubbed how Kesar accepts his punishment and goes on to behave like a mature growing up boy leaving Gulaal amazed ..The scenes were very well executed and written with much deeply unfathomable undertones..Lubbed it👏

I wanted to see something like this in the show,I really don't understand MB who had foresight to see this DV developing into a huge issue for Gulaal and Kesar,totally ignorant about how important it was to answer his questions too,Kesar for his age matured very quickly after Vasant's death and the expectations from him to follow in his brother's footsteps...

Chapter 7

Awww My heart went out to Gulaal and Kesar both of them so dependant on each other and then finally the continuation of MB-son convo..Lubbed the beautiful explanation and and then the simultaneous apology and mending up of sour ties between the father and son...

And then the absolutely awww scene between KG...the way he manaoes her for feeding him while she is sulking is so so cute...Awww Kesu can you be more adorable..Sigh big sigh...

Aditi very beautifully explored the nuances of a very beautiful relation of two soulmates...Both together and both of them understanding each other..Bravo...Take my bow..Very beautifully written👏

Aww Thanks Piyu,I am glad you liked MB's explnation,I wanted to show him understanding Kesar's need for those answers but at the same time making Kesar understand his need for him to grow up before he can have them and that KG scene I would have loved to see something like that in the show per kya kare

Chapter 8

Well who said the chapter was boring.GRRR

It was a very beautiful chappi where you excellently explored Gulaal's feelings and my heart warmed up for her unlike the hloier than thou Gulaal of the show.Her anxiety,her unhappiness,her exhiliaration ..each and every emotion so wonderfully captured..I lubbed it when she thinks of running to the chowk..And then her anxiety to see him on hearing the arrival of the jeep and her complains to herself when he comes home late ...

And then the most potent and thrilling scene..The bike one..Wow!1 Beautifully written and the extreme happiness of Gullu was wonderfully penned down again👏

And the final scene when he catches her and her slip of tongue..Some beautiful emotions equally beautifully written..Lubbed the update so much..My haseen qatil..Just update really soon..as I just can't wait for what happens next...👏

Wow Piyu that makes two of us,I couldn't understand her complete ignorance and shutting off Kesu either,This is what I would have loved to see,it was her Kesar,who was her constant parchai from the day Vasant left her till the day he was sent away to Sarufui's place,how could she not feel the pain of judaai,her anxiety to see him to run to him to hold him I guess makes her more human and realistic...

Thanks Piyu for your lovely comments,I must say you guys have been my constant support and only reason to keep going at this,Thanks for always being there for me,I would keep my side of bargain no worries,love you a lot🤗

WEEKEND KAB AYING😭