FF:Tum Ho Toh...Final Chpt updtd on Pg-34 - Page 19

Originally posted by: nneeiill

loved it...but it ended soon...

Originally posted by: kalika.j

@Mini...,






kalika.

Originally posted by: enchanted23

res😊

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Mini choory for being so late, I know you always, always comment on my ss/letter same day or day after and look at me here after 4 days, apologies'.Aditi🤗4days nahi nahi I put it up on monday,so don't worry you are not late at all.waise bhi I know your crazy schedule.I also know that I will always have your support so no worries😃

Some moments of life are so special, you can live your entire life through those moments, they are the one you will always reflect on for that strength, for that tenderness, for that fulfilment, for that care, for that love, for that bliss, for that exuberance for that sheer feeling of being alive and for those moments you will always have that someone special to thank for who made those moment extraordinary, if there is someone like that out there, don't wait, don't hesitate, don't turn away as density may never call again''beautiful lines...I loved it so much😳I wish Gulaal would realise this, Kesar already has and have already taken that step but he always knew what he wanted na,so sure of his feelings just wanted that reflection from her and once he can sense it,he doesn't waste a moment so typical of Kesar and the sheer blissful sleep that she drifts into with that feeling of being loved and cared for by her Kesar w/o a care in the world just told him everything he wanted to know about her feelings'sigh!ab Kesar ki deewani ne itna kuch bol diya what is left for me to say😆

And Vasant's predicaments at the growing closeness of these two and there need of each other to make people around them happy tells him so much but I guess he is going with *ignorance is bliss* funda till he actually needs to take some decisions, can't blame him, he has waited long for the gal who inspite of being in love with his brother lives in self-denial so why should he make her aware to contrary, it best to keep quiet and let the paradox continue'see... this feels so great coming from you,the eternal Kesar supporter.It makes me so happy that you are able to feel for a character other than Kesar.feels good😃

In all these I can only see Kesar now sure of her feelings for him taking some decisive action after all he is the one who believes in doing things na,and Gullu well let her live in her denial world for now,she will soon have to listen to her heart for that only beats on Kesar's rhythm na'As you said Kesar has always been forthright and now that he is sure of his feelings and has an inkling of Gulaal's hopefully he will try to make her see the truth.I just hope I will be able to portray the confrontation properly

Beautiful chapter Mini,I am looking forward to Confession and confrontations'..sigh! big hugswa for a lovely chapter🤗yeh le return hugswa 🤗

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Jzee🤗So the potentially life changing moment true to its potential has finally shifted the stalemate irrevocably, such that it must finally be addressed.yep...I think it's time😆Of course we can sense Gulaal bringing on the blinders and walls full force - but she's gone too far already, beyond the point of no return, so she can't really get away with mere blinders this time. She'll probably hurt him - hurt him enough perhaps for him to momentarily stumble back and give her a brief escape - but Kesar is not going to be put off too long now, is he? Either the the coming up showdown, or soon after he's going to confront Gulaal with far more ground than she can can ever defend herself on! She will definitely try to deny whatever she is feeling for him but I do hope Kesar is able to make her see the truth.

But it is Vasant again that I feel for.me too😭 He's not really collateral damage. And he's also not oblivious - but unlike his own strict self reproach, he is not selfish either. The way he tries to "understand" the stalemate in his own mind, esp the way he makes peace with Gulaal needing Kesar to be happy is actually so commendable, that whatever selfishness he shows otherwise in holding onto Gulaal is really lost.There is a part of this urgency to hold onto her which stems at least somewhat, no matter how less, from the sheer challenge of it - even if he doesn't explicitly think of it like that - but fact still is he wants well for her. Well enough to make peace with whatever happiness she can have with Kesar's presence. And even if that is part of his hold onto her plan - it's still... a genuine feeling for her. You have explained it so beautifully.This is what I wanted to show.He might claim to be selfish but I doubt whether any other person in his position would be as understanding.Vasant is ready to accept Kesar in Gulaal's life for her happiness.

I don't doubt for a moment that Vasant's love (even if not at Kesar's level) is enough for both Gulaal and him; where he does fall out is the confidence Kesar enjoys in Gulaal, and vice versa. And that is something he can never make up for. Something she will go back for to Kesar again and again.that's the tragedy na😭And while his making peace with that need of hers is genuine of him in a way, it is also his way of disregarding the fact that minus of that confidence something between them will always be shallow, misunderstood, translucent. It isn't just a part of her heart he can't have, but a part of her person he could never fathom, because even if she tried her best, she could never really show it to him without that confidence. He is aware of this hopefully he will come to accept this soon.

Khair - here's to a brighter GK future, but equally so, some justice for Vasant's predicament! I hope you are planning to turn him into an outright villain at no time Mini - and no that doesn't mean he can be outraged enough to feel vengeful at some point; no, I am not going to make him a villain cause in my eyes he is not.yes, I am planning a confrontation between him and Gulaal cause I feel it is needed.I hope I will be able to do justice to it😊only that at the core of it would be enough of Vasant the person to let it go before he can damage GK and himself too much!

xx

JZee

Originally posted by: arti07

beautful chapii minizz i just read me will will read 5 times and then give a detailed comment abhi me just readin and reading and reading😛

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Mini First of all ye le bear hugs for such a brilliant chappi.😳

Awww I loved how he made her sleep with all his kisses..He he my paapi atma is super duper khush .😳Piu,my fellow paapi atma,it makes me happy toknow that you liked it😳

Well really again what stole my heart was the turmoil of Vassy which you actually wrote it so emphatically that you made me fall in love with his character.His delimma,his placid existence with the fact that Gulaal needs Kesar to be happy was so beautifully penned down.Brilliant is only the word.I am speechless coz Vasant is growing on me ...Look what you have done.Instead of Kesu ,I just feel bad for vassy.😕nahi...yeh maine kya kar diya😭😆but what to do Piu,when I write for Vasant,I do feel for his pain but please don't abandon Kesar...bechaara phir kya hoga uska😳Hopefully the next chapter will help his case and your loyalties can shift back to Kesar😭

Oh and now Are we gonna see Gaalolism coz I think Gullu is planning to run away again.Well let Kesu grab her again and make her sleep with his kisses😆aww my paapi atma wants him to but I think sab mujhe maar daalenge😆Lubbly update.I just can't wait for what happens next😳I will try to update soon.