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EXOL

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

loved it...but it ended soon...

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kalika.j

@kalika.j

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

@Mini...,

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Aditi Mehta

@enchanted23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

res😊

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Mini choory for being so late, I know you always, always comment on my ss/letter same day or day after and look at me here after 4 days, apologies….

Some moments of life are so special, you can live your entire life through those moments, they are the one you will always reflect on for that strength, for that tenderness, for that fulfilment, for that care, for that love, for that bliss, for that exuberance for that sheer feeling of being alive and for those moments you will always have that someone special to thank for who made those moment extraordinary, if there is someone like that out there, don't wait, don't hesitate, don't turn away as density may never call again……I wish Gulaal would realise this, Kesar already has and have already taken that step but he always knew what he wanted na,so sure of his feelings just wanted that reflection from her and once he can sense it,he doesn't waste a moment so typical of Kesar and the sheer blissful sleep that she drifts into with that feeling of being loved and cared for by her Kesar w/o a care in the world just told him everything he wanted to know about her feelings…sigh!

And Vasant's predicaments at the growing closeness of these two and there need of each other to make people around them happy tells him so much but I guess he is going with *ignorance is bliss* funda till he actually needs to take some decisions, can't blame him, he has waited long for the gal who inspite of being in love with his brother lives in self-denial so why should he make her aware to contrary, it best to keep quiet and let the paradox continue…

In all these I can only see Kesar now sure of her feelings for him taking some decisive action after all he is the one who believes in doing things na,and Gullu well let her live in her denial world for now,she will soon have to listen to her heart for that only beats on Kesar's rhythm na…

Beautiful chapter Mini,I am looking forward to Confession and confrontations…..sigh! big hugswa for a lovely chapter🤗

Edited by enchanted23 - 13 years ago

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

So the potentially life changing moment true to its potential has finally shifted the stalemate irrevocably, such that it must finally be addressed. Of course we can sense Gulaal bringing on the blinders and walls full force - but she's gone too far already, beyond the point of no return, so she can't really get away with mere blinders this time. She'll probably hurt him - hurt him enough perhaps for him to momentarily stumble back and give her a brief escape - but Kesar is not going to be put off too long now, is he? Either the the coming up showdown, or soon after he's going to confront Gulaal with far more ground than she can can ever defend herself on!

But it is Vasant again that I feel for. He's not really collateral damage. And he's also not oblivious - but unlike his own strict self reproach, he is not selfish either. The way he tries to "understand" the stalemate in his own mind, esp the way he makes peace with Gulaal needing Kesar to be happy is actually so commendable, that whatever selfishness he shows otherwise in holding onto Gulaal is really lost. There is a part of this urgency to hold onto her which stems at least somewhat, no matter how less, from the sheer challenge of it - even if he doesn't explicitly think of it like that - but fact still is he wants well for her. Well enough to make peace with whatever happiness she can have with Kesar's presence. And even if that is part of his hold onto her plan - it's still... a genuine feeling for her.

I don't doubt for a moment that Vasant's love (even if not at Kesar's level) is enough for both Gulaal and him; where he does fall out is the confidence Kesar enjoys in Gulaal, and vice versa. And that is something he can never make up for. Something she will go back for to Kesar again and again. And while his making peace with that need of hers is genuine of him in a way, it is also his way of disregarding the fact that minus of that confidence something between them will always be shallow, misunderstood, translucent. It isn't just a part of her heart he can't have, but a part of her person he could never fathom, because even if she tried her best, she could never really show it to him without that confidence.

Khair - here's to a brighter GK future, but equally so, some justice for Vasant's predicament! I hope you are planning to turn him into an outright villain at no time Mini - and no that doesn't mean he can be outraged enough to feel vengeful at some point; only that at the core of it would be enough of Vasant the person to let it go before he can damage GK and himself too much!

JZee

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

beautful chapii minizz i just read me will will read 5 times and then give a detailed comment abhi me just readin and reading and reading😛

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SHARMISHTA

@sharmishta

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

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will edit latr..😛

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once again... choorryyy 4 dis late cmmnt... so finally here also a full on kissin scene😳.. gud dat she was in drunkn mode.. warna, she would have been raining slaps on our lover boy😆😉.. kesar-vassy convo was really emtnl... kesar's guilt of decievn his brthr is killn him na😭.. gulaal is back in her galool avatar😲... all ready 2 snub him... waitn 2 knw her reactn.. update asap...🤗
ye le lots of hugs of dis updte🤗🤗🤗

Edited by sharmishta - 13 years ago

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Nithya🤗thank you so much.It makes me so happy that you enjoyed the chapter.and yel lo a hug from me too.

Thank you for the support.It means a lot to me.

I know the new chapter was a bit short.I will try to make the next one longer😃

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Jzee🤗thank you so much for those awesome lines.The lines you used for Kesar-one of my favs fits him so perfectly na.awww and those lines for Gulaal-lovely.I am so happy that you are liking the story yaar and I assure youVasant is not going to be a negative character.I am very sorry about the delay.Thank you so much for your constant support and such awesome analysis😃