FF:Tum Ho Toh...Final Chpt updtd on Pg-34 - Page 18

Mini First of all ye le bear hugs for such a brilliant chappi.😳

Awww I loved how he made her sleep with all his kisses..He he my paapi atma is super duper khush .😳

Well really again what stole my heart was the turmoil of Vassy which you actually wrote it so emphatically that you made me fall in love with his character.His delimma,his placid existence with the fact that Gulaal needs Kesar to be happy was so beautifully penned down.Brilliant is only the word.I am speechless coz Vasant is growing on me ...Look what you have done.Instead of Kesu ,I just feel bad for vassy.😕

Oh and now Are we gonna see Gaalolism coz I think Gullu is planning to run away again.Well let Kesu grab her again and make her sleep with his kisses😆Lubbly update.I just can't wait for what happens next😳

Originally posted by: MR21

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Mini 🤗Ramya🤗...wow what a chappie...awww thank you😳
Me all blushing while reading all the scene from their impatient yearnings for each other...kya yaar sab log ke saamne...well how can even think abt the surroundings when gulaal is in front of him very true😆...I liked the way they r back to house n ofcourse he taking her to her room...wow confession bhi hua that too from both the sides...but kya faida when she is in drunken state...
He is very happy na...he actually forgot abt vasant...once he realizes it he can't even look at him...he is very guilty...n his confusion grows seeing gulaal...which only increases by vasant telling him that gulaal wants to stay away from this house...for vasant it is that she wants to stay away from him...for kesar its that she wants to avoid him...he know it n he will never let her stay away from him...I liked that vasant asked kesar to talk to her abt this as he knows that she can't deny kesar...ab main kya bolun Ramya,you have said everything so beautifully😊
Vasant pov...I liked that he accepted that kesar presence is important for gulaal's happiness...he is happy to live with her with his love...even though he know that he can't have total access to her heart ...though she tries to give that access...she can never give it...he also felt anger n sad abt kesar n gulaal closeness...but I liked that he realized his fault of not giving time for gulaal n also not confessing his feelings to her...though he know that gulaal most of the time is mentally absent with him...but he can never let her go...I really felt bad that he is waiting for her for the last 5 years...he is trying his best to get her accept him whole heartedly...but he needs kesar help to stop her...I liked that after his acceptance abt her happiness around kesar..he started mending his soaring relation with kesar...I want to see how vasant will accept when gulaal actually accepts her feelings for kesar...I am so happy that you are able to feel for Vasant cause I never wanted to project him as a villain.When I write him I feel his pain,his inability to let go and it feels so good that the same feeling comes across to you.
Gulaal...looks like she is in galool mode...looking forward to kesar reaction n ofcourse the ultimate confrontation between them...Loved it Mini 😃..update soon 😍hmmm...Galool mode well without that she can't be Gulaal right but I promise I won't stretch it😊

Originally posted by: alanta

Mini🤗..Alanta🤗.the start was really beautiful ur words about life and Kesar's take on it👏...thank you😊

It might have been such an embarrassing moment for both of them when their kiss got witnessed by such an audience...Good that Gulaal went sleeping...and his kiss was almost like a lullaby for her😳 ...and he himself getting amazed of the fact...he he he😆

It was lovely that how he carried her to the home and her response to his 'I love U', It might have been a dream come true moment for him na..haan dil ki baat zubaan pe aa gayi😳.at least for some moments😛...but what followed in the morning was truly heart wrenching,..Vasanth being all innocent and absolutely clueless on what have actually happened..and Gulsar with a guilt of betraying him..who can blame her na?so true in a sense and Gulaal might be feeling so difficult to face Vasanth that she took such a decision and the start of the last scene at the terrace was so cute but tensed towards the end..Hope Gulaal will get to know what Kesar actually feels for her and the avoidance phase is yet to come ...yep the confrontation will shake her up and hopefully Kesar will lay out his feelings for her.Really liked the progression of the story dear...😳

Originally posted by: canuck-umz

I am greedy I wish it was a longer update. Umz🤗trust me I wanted it to be longer but then I was so excited about the fact that I was able to overcome the mental block that I put up what I had typed out.The next one will be longer.This will be a quick comment because I was taking a break from an assignment and decided to visit IF and read your update so at this moment my mind is on studying so can't do a thorough write up.awww that's so sweet.It means so much to me that you are taking time out from your busy study schedule to read this FF😳

All I am going to say is how is someone supposed to get out of such a situation? I might have run away if I was anyone of these 3 characters.me too😆 Kesar and Vasant love each other so much but they also love Gulaal more than anything so what are they to do? Vasant has done so much for Kesar but this time it's about the woman he loves. Kesar tried to stay away for his brother's happiness but then how can you give up the woman you love? I have already said this before but I feel so bad for Vasant, he waited patiently for 5 years for Gulaal only to discover that she is more comfortable with his baby brother. He knows in his heart what he must do but like he said himself he is only human I am so happy that you are able to feel for both of them.It is quite a tough situation na.Vasant😭yep he makes me emotional too.