Collection of unsent letters-update on page 10 - Page 7

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

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Aditi 🤗what is intensity-It is just way you feel it.How can something related to Kesar cannot be called intenseIt is mellowed down,but the passion oozes and bleeds through every single line of the letter.BEAUTIFUL! ⭐️

I just lubbed the part where he mentions that from his childhood he always had this fear looming over his head that she would leave the house.Ahhh He so loves her na😭

Awww The bacha misses her so much and asks her to come back.It is such a beautiful piece Aditi.👏.My haseen qatil.*Sigh* Will we ever get to see someone as passionate and intense as Kesar.I guess never.

Hats off Aditi for continuing the brilliance of the letters.I lubbed it.👏

P.S-ahhh My request -A letter after the confession where he is given a wholesome treat of the slapathon by the lafa -queen Gullu😆.I really want how Kesar would have wrote something about finally telling her how much he loved her and of course his vishesh tippani on her slapping spree.Is that too much to ask.🤔OK no asking.I WANT IT FROM YOU*Stomps feet and throws a tantrum ,then scratches the head changing strategy🤔 with hopeful muh⭐️*😍

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Yeay brilliant👏

Turbaaa thankeez..😳

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Oh my Haseen Qatil that is just perfect.It is beautiful at the same time simple as the sweet honest confession from Kesar.It is brilliaantly written ,executed and marvelously potrayed the finest emotions of Kesar😭

My absolute fav is the last part .It just summarizes the intensity and devotion of Kesar.I think it was just a fab job by you Aditi truly beautiful .Exactly how I would have loved to read.I just lubbed the part where he says that he is not ashamed of his love.Bootiful👏

Mini is right now we need more letters🤗

P.S-A Letter about Kesu's fondness of Gulaal after the aam ka bageecha scne where he is a goner seeing her khule baal."Aapke baal dekhein bahut hassen hai inhe khule mat chhodiyega nazar lag jayegi ..aye haye..one musshy mushy leeter* demands*😉

Originally posted by: My-Simi

Hi Aditi,

You wouldnt be knowing me. I was a resident here when the show was on.

Just read your take of Kesar's letters. I am unable to LIKE your third letter. Like I said in Jzee's post, I like the portion in the third letter where Kesar complains to Gulaal that having helped him overcome the fear for darkness in the past, she has now left him alone in darkness without helping him to overcome his worst fears, especially when he needed her the most, though we all know that it was Kesar himself who chose to be away from her.

I wish the makers of the show know how viewers still express such unadulterated thoughtful insights of a character by picking on a scene such as the bunch of letters that Kesar wrote in solitude. The show did have tremendous potential.

Nice piece of dignified work. Best wishes. Keep writing.

Originally posted by: nneeiill

hey aditi..nice letters..i read all of them in one go...and i wud say second letter is the best of the three..and i do liked them all...when i read the letters i could really hear kesar's voice...good job

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wow that was such a beautiful letter..

my fav part is :

I promise, I will bring that woman back someday...that woman whose laugh extended to her eyes, that woman whose voice soothed parched souls, that woman who would find water from depth of barren land, that woman who will always follow her heart, that woman who was always so beautiful, that woman who was always mine since the day I first laid my eyes on her...

and I second Piu;s next demand

Originally posted by: Kesarmania

.hi aditi 😃 thanks for pm dear i had missed some letters and i had read 2nd part earlier and .rest parts today.

it was brilliant dear👏

i loved each bit of it specially how kesar took her name when light had gone and how he is longing to get his haq back😊

even in the show i used to love the letter segment of kesar as he was always comfortable in sharing his feeling with that piece of paper , and his letter would make me emotional every time.

the whole concept of your os/ff is fantastic dear.

i will wait for next letter egarly😃

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Aditi
:-) first of all hats off for this 1. As mini said it was simple, but it was exactly the way kesar would have written.
Every time i read u r os i can , relate 2 kesar. U write his feeling as if his soul enters in ur body when u write.:-)
thank u so much 4 pm. And i will support ramya even i want aam bagicha scene[

Originally posted by: minizz

Aditi,this is perfect yaar.I loved it a lot.

res for detailed comments😊

I like this letter because it is simple and straightforward.no mushiness,no OTT protestations of love.This letter is just a promise from Kesar to Gulaal that no matter what happens he would not let her sacrifice her happiness any longer.He would do everything in his power to bring back the lively,chulbuli,natkhat Gulaal back who lived every moment as if it were her last. and he doesn't use any fancy words to get across his point. he just speaks from his heart and that impressed me the most about this letter cause that is what Kesar is all about.Direct dil se😳 My fav is now the last para Aditi,that was superb-perfect end to such a beautiful letter.Good job👏

and hey what are you saying you cant' give up now.You have many more letters to write.har weekend par ek letter-that would be great😛

yeh le ek badi si jhappi for this one🤗

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Aditi - apologies for my late coming, but I was gone for a Sunday and apparently everyone got into writing mode 😆 Here go my two cents...

The line - you are your own greatest enemy - obviously, and almost always, has defined the post leap Gulaal. In a way, it is what distinguished the pre and post leap versions. There was the Gulaal who was willing, even driven and pressed to go as far as running away with Vasant, if it was the only way to be with him - families and all else forsaken. And then there is was this Gulaal, who wasn't even the last on her own list.

Loved the bit where Kesar tells her she will have to accept things for what they are one day, and how he's not ashamed of his love or all such. And loved how he feels unfazed by her rejection, describes each of her slaps as one in denial of his love... the whole "brham vs pyaar" thing...

But some slight nuances of this letter reminded me more distinctly of the later GK showdown, after Kesar has his single unraveling moment of revelation about his love and imposition on Gulaal (post KT mandir scene) - and I thought his understanding of how Gulaal was hiding behind facades came just a tad soon in this letter. I mean, I have always thought that Kesar at this point was most consciously and primarily preoccupied with the fact that his love was being both misunderstood and undermined by Gulaal. Somewhere, to me, he was at least consciously far from any empathy or knowledge of her side... he was too drowned in his own misery and loss of her shade, to actually figure out why she felt so drastically violated...

Then again, he did have that dialogue with PB, about what exactly was so wrong about his love, where he addressed Gulaal's norm based mental block. Although even there, I thought, his questions and thoughts were far more about why his love was so wrong, than how Gulaal's predicament rendered his love wrong, whether or not it was, in objectivity. Which in a way are two overlapping aspects in part at least. Okay, so I've gone round in circles trying to make a point, and then debating it. Psst!

Anyway that aside, absolutely loved the whole verbalized vent. Contrary to what you said - this was an instance, given how it lacked explicit words, which is a great gap to fill with a written letter. Come to think of it, I would almost expect to have seen one on the show... just about here... So thanks for writing it 🤗 (and thanks Doc, for requesting!)

xx

JZee

Originally posted by: NivRen_1

Thanks for the PM

I havent had a chance to comment but this was beautiful. It was a simply what was in his heart - if kesar continued to write letters to Gulaal in the show i am sure they would be like this, i loved the simplicity and pain that is in the letter and as kesar mentioned true to his promise he bought her smile back. The last paragraph is just perfect

Originally posted by: enchanted23

Thanks my dear partner for liking this, as you know I was quite apprehensive about it and thanks for the finishing touches it means a lot'..Let me share with you something I am the one who never liked mushiness and assertion of love just for the heck of it, I mean take any of the so called successful TRP serial today imo they are just plain stupid, brainless, fall in the arm, soak in the rain types of fake scenes, forcibly created and horribly presented, I can't stand it and that's why I don't watch it'I know,nothing is able to hold my interest for too long these days😭The only shows I am watching regularly these days are Mahadev and NBTNMKK...baaki sab toh aise hi time pass haiGulaal was the only serial I have watched in a long long time cause it wasn't typical MB romance and speaking of which I never read one either probably one of very few gals but I found it simply boring'..My mom used to be a big fan and I tried reading them but then I soon realized that it is the same story with different names😆So don't worry you have got company😃Actually I am more of a crime & detective fiction fan.Poirot is my absolute fav character in fiction😊

Kesar as a character was always depicted as straight forward no-nonsense and direct guy who always came straight to the point which is what makes him so unique and adorable I was just amazed as how easy it was for him to tell her about his feeling once he realised it himself, he doesn't care about what she would think, how his family will take it, what impact this will have on anyone bus jake bol diya siddha and that's what made me fall in love with this guy, I adored him before that but this confession actually turned me in to complete deewani '..it's shame that the intensity was mellowed down in subsequent episodes but we still got some of these amazing scenes we can cherish always'yes,I so agree with you regarding the confession scene.That's why I love that scene so much.It was such a simple scene but so effective.He did mellow down but he retained that "jo dil mein hai woh muh pe" quality till the end na.Thank you CVs for leaving this character alone😃

I am not sure when I will be able to come up with the next one Mini, Next couple of months looks like we are going to be really tested in our endurance🤢 besides our skills so can't promise anything, I know you wanted to do that OS too, why don't you start on it and I will fill in whatever I can...Honestly I don't even remember what I had said.I am scratching my head but nope still not getting it...I think I forgot to mention I suffer from Ghajini bimaari😆awww you and Ramya have to slog it out this month na...so you concentrate on work and pati re warna bechaara kitna maggi khaayega😆

Thanks you for a hugswa'yeh le return hug🤗.. luv you Mini luv ya too partner😛