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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bioinfo

rimjhim mujhe yaad nahi maine naye chappi pe comment diya hai ya nahi , mujhe charo taraf laal laal dikh raha hai😆

btw lubbly chappi accha hua kesar ne kaha ke gulaal se shadi karni hai warna phir se vassy aa jata😆waiting for ur next update and mere uthne ke pehle update kar dena warna mera din bura jayega🤣

Thanks Chaitu.
Tujhe har taraf lal dikh raha hai, toh meri kya halaat hoh rahi hogi😆.
tere uthne se pehle😕...tu thodi dher ke baad yeh na aa ke kehdena ke subha hogayi haiROFL
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haan lekin meri doll rakhne ki umar nahi hai na ek thi uski bhi shaadi kar di maine aur uske paas 2 bache bhi hai. thankfully they are sitting right next to me thank you im enjoying it very much. oh to butlers aap ke paas nahi hain, curious to hear that i only have friends because they want me to buy them somthing or just take them for a ride with my choufer. i noe yaar but kya karoon crore pati ki beti hoon tum hari life kaise milegi. they are busy with work right now but i have spent enogh time wth them i vl be going to mumbia with them also i think i saw NEIL BHATT aww i did actually yaar hes sooo sweet met him 2wice b4. i cant wait 4 public school, and dont worry i wont tell them that i am a very successful buissness Tycoons daughter - i hate this line. can i ask u summin r u a boy or a girl? i am very curious to noe that

arey main uth gayi and tera comment bhi aa gaya aww ab meera din bada accha jayega😆 and haan yaar mere pass butler nahi hai,but i am happy for that na kamse kam mere pass less time hai bakwass karne ko😉😆and mere bade genuine friends hain mujhe isliye pyaar karte hain kyunki mere pass choufer nahi hai na hi plane hai to kafi time hum sath mein masti kar sakte hain😉and tumne neil ko dekha oh thats great but pls mom dad se kehne neil ko kharedne na nikal padein😆and crorepati ki beeti ho why dnt u ask ur parents to let u host "kaun banega crorepati "😆btw i am girl 😳hope tumhe ye janke bura na laga ho😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
haan lekin meri doll rakhne ki umar nahi hai na ek thi uski bhi shaadi kar di maine aur uske paas 2 bache bhi hai. thankfully they are sitting right next to me thank you im enjoying it very much. oh to butlers aap ke paas nahi hain, curious to hear that i only have friends because they want me to buy them somthing or just take them for a ride with my choufer. i noe yaar but kya karoon crore pati ki beti hoon tum hari life kaise milegi. they are busy with work right now but i have spent enogh time wth them i vl be going to mumbia with them also i think i saw NEIL BHATT aww i did actually yaar hes sooo sweet met him 2wice b4. i cant wait 4 public school, and dont worry i wont tell them that i am a very successful buissness Tycoons daughter - i hate this line. can i ask u summin r u a boy or a girl? i am very curious to noe that

arey main uth gayi and tera comment bhi aa gaya aww ab meera din bada accha jayega😆 and haan yaar mere pass butler nahi hai,but i am happy for that na kamse kam mere pass less time hai bakwass karne ko😉😆and mere bade genuine friends hain mujhe isliye pyaar karte hain kyunki mere pass choufer nahi hai na hi plane hai to kafi time hum sath mein masti kar sakte hain😉and tumne neil ko dekha oh thats great but pls mom dad se kehne neil ko kharedne na nikal padein😆and crorepati ki beeti ho why dnt u ask ur parents to let u host "kaun banega crorepati "😆btw i am girl 😳hope tumhe ye janke bura na laga ho😆
abi uth gayi ho OMG
uh oh okaii no one really needs a butler anyway mines is uesless har waqt usko dekho mere age piche phirta hai madam aap ko kuch chahiye thank god hes not here today ive fired him but dont worry ive transfered him to someone else who will take good care of him
ill try if they can buy me a house here then yeh but i saw him again and greeted him he is very nice actually because ive met him 3 times now hahahaha i love him like a brother
why not ill take Bachan Ji's place yh
gud cuz im a girl aswell hahaha yeshh u a gurl by the way do u luve neil? u cant cuz hes mine lol jokez
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Posted: 13 years ago

abi uth gayi ho OMG
uh oh okaii no one really needs a butler anyway mines is uesless har waqt usko dekho mere age piche phirta hai madam aap ko kuch chahiye thank god hes not here today ive fired him but dont worry ive transfered him to someone else who will take good care of him
ill try if they can buy me a house here then yeh but i saw him again and greeted him he is very nice actually because ive met him 3 times now hahahaha i love him like a brother
why not ill take Bachan Ji's place yh
gud cuz im a girl aswell hahaha yeshh u a gurl by the way do u luve neil? u cant cuz hes mine lol jokez
haan yaar wt to do main crorepati nahi hun but i am one spoilt kid u see😆but this time na ur responsible for my sleep , tumhare red fonts dekh ke mujhe neend aa jati hai😆and butler ko bhaga diya😲bach gaya bechara😆and see u 14 yr oldies have this prob na abhi abhi u said ke wo tumhara bro hai and now ur saying ke i cant luve him coz hes urs 😆chalo maaf kiya and le lo usko waise bhi tum to plane mein rehne wali ho na to neeche hum uska khayal rakh lenge😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by KesarGulaal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
rimjim update karna pleaeaeaeaease😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
abi uth gayi ho OMG
uh oh okaii no one really needs a butler anyway mines is uesless har waqt usko dekho mere age piche phirta hai madam aap ko kuch chahiye thank god hes not here today ive fired him but dont worry ive transfered him to someone else who will take good care of him
ill try if they can buy me a house here then yeh but i saw him again and greeted him he is very nice actually because ive met him 3 times now hahahaha i love him like a brother
why not ill take Bachan Ji's place yh
gud cuz im a girl aswell hahaha yeshh u a gurl by the way do u luve neil? u cant cuz hes mine lol jokez
haan yaar wt to do main crorepati nahi hun but i am one spoilt kid u see😆but this time na ur responsible for my sleep , tumhare red fonts dekh ke mujhe neend aa jati hai😆and butler ko bhaga diya😲bach gaya bechara😆and see u 14 yr oldies have this prob na abhi abhi u said ke wo tumhara bro hai and now ur saying ke i cant luve him coz hes urs 😆chalo maaf kiya and le lo usko waise bhi tum to plane mein rehne wali ho na to neeche hum uska khayal rakh lenge😉
hahahahah
im a spoilt brat too wanna be fwends i let u ride on my plane
i know nakamma tha idiot what do u mean bahc gaya
aap ke pas rakh do tum to uska khyaal rakho gi naa i was only joking he is like a brother o me im feeling very weak hopefully tommorow vl feel better, meri font dekh kar okaii black change kar deti hoon
Edited by KesarGulaal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter 24 (final chapter)
she looked back, and when she turned he was sitting infront of her. she smiled at him slightly and then blushed and looked down again,
'itna sharma mat main kuch nahi karne waala, uff yeh sherwani kitni tang hai, main change karne jaa raha hoon, tu bhi change kar le'. and he slid of the bed and left the room.
gulaal smiled, this what her kesar was like, no need to go by the rules, just do whatever u want, she changed out of her lehenga and then sat on the dressing table, in her nighty, moving all the heavy jewellery, the door knocked,
'change kar liya',
'haan kar liya, aaja',
and kesar walked back in, he took one look at her and smiled, 'main help karoon',
'nahi main kar loongi'
'theek hai' and kesar went and got in the blanket 'uff bohot tand hai'.
when gulaal had finished she stood up and started to fidget around just standing,
'tujhe kya invitation dhena parega gulaal, aaja', and he tapped the place next to him.
she shyly went and climbed in next to him, her cold body against his warm one,
'sach mein bohot thand hai' and he pulled her closer and squeezed her tightly
she turned bright red and tried not to meet his eyes, he gently got her face and turned it towards his,
'kya hua itna kyun sharma rahi hoh',
'kesar voh um main, maine socha ki um' and she looked away again
'kya socha tumne ke main yeh karoonga' and he gently reached foward and kissed her.
'aur bolo kya karoon, yeh' and he gently put soft kisses on her neck, 'yeh' and he genlty put a trail of kisses down her arm',
gulaal layed and was breathing heavily 'kesar light toh band kardo', he gently bent down and placed a soft kiss on her stomach
'nahi, light band ki toh mujhe tumhara yeh chaand sa chehra nahi nazzar ayega',
'nahi light band kardo warna main sharam ke maare mar jaoongi'.
he grinned at her, laying and blushing bright red,he bent down near her ear, 'gulaal tum sharmate hue bohot acchi lagti hoh',
and then rolled out of bed and closed the light.
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4years later.
gulaal smiled at the screen, a big pair of beautiful brown eyes looking back at her.
'kaisa hai mera jaanu'
the little boy chirped back 'accha hoon mama, papa ne mujhe khoob sari chocolate's khilayi'.
gulaal smiled at him 'accha jee, mere bina papa yeh kaam karte hai', the webcam suddenly turned,
'kesar yeh kya, maine tujhe mana kiya tha na, phir bhi tune Neil ko chocolate di, maine kaha tha na uske daant kharaab hai'.
kesar smiled at her, 'kab aa rahi hoh, hum dono ko tumhari bohot yaad aa rahi hai',
'kal hi aoongi mujhe bhi teri aur neil ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai, aur waise bhi ab ma ki tabiyat pehle se bohot theek hai'.
gulaal suddenly heard some conferring at the other end and then kesar's face came back on,
'waise joh baat maine tumse kahi thi jaane se pehle uss ke baare mein socha',
'kesar chup kar Neil sun raha hai' blushing and looking down,
'uff char saal hogaye hai, lekin teri sharmane ki aadat nahi gayi, Neil ko maine bhej diya hai'.
gulaal loked at him fondly through the screen, 'char saal kaise guzar gaye, pata hi nahi chala'.
kesar smiled at her mischiviously 'isiliye toh main keh raha hoon, ab time aagaya hai ke Neil ki koi choti behen hoh, bilkool tere jasi',
gulaal smiled, 'mujhe toh ek aur chota kesar chahiye' she said smiling at him,
suddenly a little voice came from the screen 'koi mujse bhi poochega ke mujhe kya chahiye'.
kesar lifted him and said 'haan bol na neil beta tujhe kya chahiye'.
the little boy smiled at his mother 'dono',
kesar laughed and tapped his head fondly 'bhagwan kare teri iccha jald se jald poori hojaye' and they both started laughing.
gulaal looked at them fondly through the screen, her beautiful family.
Edited by rimjhim1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi guys naya chapter posted. yes i was gonna put it on the previous page but then...
yeh mera last chapter tha...i had so much fun writing this.😃
i never thought that a random thought from my mind would turn into thiss FF, i loved you guy's comments and support :).
the one's that did comment and the silent reader's: thank you so much guys.
hope i entertained you guys well enough and because this is my first FF criticism is most welcome.
Love all of you Rimjhim x
Edited by rimjhim1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hahahahah
im a spoilt brat too wanna be fwends i let u ride on my plane
i know nakamma tha idiot what do u mean bahc gaya
aap ke pas rakh do tum to uska khyaal rakho gi naa i was only joking he is like a brother o me im feeling very weak hopefully tommorow vl feel better, meri font dekh kar okaii black change kar deti hoon

arey ur so sweet yaar mujhe accha nahi lagga to tumne fonts change kar diye😳now i am feeling so emotional😭u wanna be friends with me but main to garib bacchi hun tumhara status down ho jayega😭and u'll lemme ride ur plane😲arey tumhara dil to mukesh ambani ke gher se bhi bada hai😳mujhe plane chala aata hai maine bachpan mein bohot sare chalaye hain😳tumhein amazon leke jaungi wahan tumhe homely feel hoga😉😆and tumhara butler nikaama hai to mere pass bhej do mujhe nukamme logon ko theek karna acche se ata hai😃chalo now take rest i know tum weak feel kar rahi hogi itna sara likha hai sochne mein brain ka max utilize ho gaya hoga na😆

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