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Rimjhim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: Keithuu
nice chappie rimjhim...👏
ye talli bhi na...😕
ab aage kya hoga...😲
waiting for next...😳
chal...tu take care...😳

Thanks alot😃. and will do😊

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: snehasri
ye talli😡 ki bachhi kyo hamesha beech me hi baith jaati hi
rat se dar kar kesar ke haath ko pakada agar cockroach ke lye hug de di hogi na😆
why didnt she give infront of talli she could make him more more jealouse
nice chapi yaar👏👏👏

Thanks alot for liking😃.

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: MR21
friendship hogaya...achchi baat hai...magar jaldi se uss talli ka kuch karna...she is irritataing like anything...nice chappie...take care...n update soon if it is possible for you...

Thanks ramya, will try and update later today😃

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: prachurya
Okay me going on Talli bashing

'aur gulaal tum kaam par nahi jaogi' said talli smiling at her brightly. Bol toh aise rahi hai jaise khud Bill Gates ki assistant ho, Ms.Jobless!!!

'chalo main, washroom hoke aati hoon' said talli satnding suddenly. Chalo yeh ek accha kaam kiya

talli came back and gave there now joint hand a very dirty look. Aarey yeh fevicol ka jod hai, tuttega nahi

Aarey yaar Kesar ne kaha woh waisa phir kabhi nahi karega! Shaadi k baad bhi nahi????
Jokes apart...nyc chapter...finally some truce between both of them. Luking forward to next chappie. Get well soon, Rimjhim!

Lol nice interpretation, of talli's sentences.

thanks for liking. And thanks, i will do😃

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Piu Chatterjee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#195

Nice chappis rimjhim..👏

Talli ko maro..

next chappi jaldi lao...😍

par pehle

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
Nice chappis rimjhim..👏
Talli ko maro..
next chappi jaldi lao...😍
par pehle

awww thank you much.

im writing the next chapter now,😃 will post as soon as done.

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#197

chapter fourteen

Gulaal quickly took her hand away and smiled at talli.
talli came inside and announced, 'mujhe bhook lagi hai'.
'bhhok lagi hai' kesar said giving her an experated look 'abhi abhi toh nashta kiya'.
'gulaal mujhe please kuch bana deh na'.
gulaal looked towards her and then looked down 'voh mujhe kitchen mein jaane se dar lagta hai, vaha ek bohot bara rat tha'.
talli started laughing at her in quite a horrible way 'tujhe rat se dar lagta hai'. gulaal just looked down, looking kind of embarressed, kesar saw this and said.
'chalo hum saath mein neeche chalte hain' and he took gulaal's hand and smiled at her, gulaal gave a sort of weak smile back, talli quickly latched on to kesar's other hand 'arrey tune mera haath kyun pakra, tujhe toh dar nahi lagta'.
talli gave him an extremely dirty look and said 'theek hai, waise bhi main darpok nahi hoon' and left his hand and raced down the stairs.
kesar and gulaal made there way behind her, gulaal still clutching on to kesar's hand tightly. he found this very amusing.
talli decided to make gulaal feel scared and said 'voh dekho rat' pointing in a totally random direction.
gulaal who was still making her way down the stairs with kesar, slipped out of fear and kesar quickly caught her, she buried her face into his chest, and started to shout 'mujhe bacha loh, mujhe bohot dar lag raha hai'.
talli was extremely jealous, this gulaal had spoilt her life ever since the day she had turned up in kesar's life, 'koi rat nahi hai main mazak kar rahi thi'.
gulaal quickly realised what a awkward position she was in and quickly stood up straight, 'im sorry' she said not meeting his eyes.
'koi baat nahi gulaal, issme sorry hone ki kya baat hai, yeh joh talli hai na, aise hi bohot banti hai, isse khud spiders, se bohot dar lagta hai, ek baar na'. and he began to narate a story from there childhood, this made gulaal laugh and she finally looked at ease again****************************************************************************************************

Everyone came back and the rest of the day passed quickly and without any hinderence, until evening when gulaal said to her mother 'mujhe vapis apne ghar jaaana hoga, humari kuch cheeze vahi reh gayi hain.

her mother looked at her worried 'tu akele iss vakt kaise jay gi'.

kesar who was also listening to there conversation said 'main gulaal ko le jaata hoon'.

talli looked up from talking to devika 'haan main bhi saath mein chalti hoon'.

kesar turned towards her and said 'nahi hum bike pe jayenge, aur iss samay, theen logo ka baitna kafi dangerous hai'.

talli looked angry and turned towards devika and started talking again.

kesar and gulaal made there way, as gulaal sat on the back of the bike she did not want to hold him, koi baat nahi main girongi toh nahi she thought. as kesar started riding, gulaal was forced to put her arms around his waist, she felt extremely uncomfortable.

They reached in about 20 minutes and upon reaching saw the lights of the house were on.

uncertainly gulaal put the key in and walked inside, kesar following behind.

inside there were two men sitting on the sofa watching tv 'aap yaha kya kar rehe hai' gulaal said although she already knew these were most likely vasants men.

'yeh vasant sir ka ghar hai, aap dono kaun hai aur andar kaise aaye'.

kesar looked at them angrily 'humey kuch cheeze chahiyi thi' he turned towards gulaal 'jao, jah kar le aao, jho bhi chahiye, main wait karta hoon'.

gulaal made her way up the stairs and kesar looked on from behind.

suddenly one of the men's turned towards the other 'accha toh yeh ladki hai, jis ko vasant sir chor ke chale gay the'.

'kafi mast cheez hai' said the other.

'TERI KI HIMMAT BHI KAISE HUI' kesar shouted he grabbed the nearest man who was sitting on the sofa and threw him against the wall.

gulaal came running down and saw a horrific scene, kesar was beating the two men like there was no tommorow.

she ran over to him and begged him to stop, his anger knew no end, until she finally stood infront of him and said 'tujhe hamari dosti ki kasam please ruk jaa'.

after she had calmed him down they both left from there.

kesar had actually done well, the two men were bleeding profously and all he had was a scratch across his cheek.

As they sat on the bike, gulaal noticed this and gently touched his cheek 'dard hoh raha hai', at her touch he immidiately felt weak, he turned away and said

'nahi main theek hoon'.

'kya hua kesar, kyun itna mara dono ko'.

'voh ter baare mein ulta seeda bol rahe the, mujhe kahi vasant baa mile na tho main unko kabhi nahi choroonaga', he said angrily, knuckling his fists.

'theek hi toh keh rahe he, meri kismat kitni boori hai', she said, her eyes not filled with tears but a faraway saddness.

'joh bhi hua' kesar said facing her 'uske liye kabhi bhi, apne aap ko dosh mat dena aur vaise bhi' he said suddenly grinning 'atleast tu ab mere ghar mein toh agayi hai'.

she slapped him lightly on the back 'shaitan gahi ka'. but suddenly she looked at him seriously 'thanks kesar'.

'arrey abhi mere se kya filmi dialouge sune gi kya, dosti mein no sorry and no thank you'. he said grinning cheesily.

'accha babe theek hai, ab chal warna ghar waale sochenge ge pata nahi kaha reh gaye'.

and they both drove off, gulaal looked back at her house and suddenly felt like she was not leaving something behind, but moving foward with something, she tightly put her hands around kesar's waist and felt much more comfortable than before.

Edited by rimjhim1 - 14 years ago

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MR21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Res 😊

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Ohh yeh talli bhi na..aakhe theek se 2 chappies bhi nahi hue hai n she is irritating me like anything..she is full on kektha type vamp...talli ko bhook lagrahi hai...toh gulaal kyun khaana bhanaaye bhukkad ladki..khud jaake bhanaao...ohh me loved how kesar made her leave his hand...good going kesu aise hi usse ignore karna..hosake toh usse kahi bhagaadena..so that we can have only u n ur beloved gulaal...ohh talli wants to scare her..he he so nice that kesar n gulaal came close because of her silly joke...ohh i loved how he is doing everything to bring smile on her face...talli koh jahaa kesar jaana hai waha jaana jaroori hai kya...good that kesar showed her her position...omg she is feeling uncomfortable😉...loved how he managed with vassy men...loved the last conversation between them...n the comfort that he came to her life...

Good to know that you are feeling good now...update soon the next chappie dear...

Edited by MR21 - 14 years ago

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Bioinfo_Chaitu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#199

oye rim ur not well kya😕loveria likhte likhte kaun sa leria ho gaya tujhe😆

dhatt i missed three chappis , but ek sath comment de deti hun😃

talli aa gayi wo bhi fultoo talli avatar mein🤢chipkoo🤢and shes jelous of gullu😡and gullu saw rat and kesu se chipak gayi👏now i love rats and i sure kesar loves them too😆and then kesu ki pics dekh ke gullu became happy but talli came as haddi😡madam ko bhuk bhi lag gayi😡

but i laughed at one sentence of yours u know

talli-'gulaal mujhe please kuch bana deh na'.

🤣🤣🤣

haan gulaal isse cockroach bana de🤣

then bike mein ride ha ha i loved it ⭐️

and vassys men talking bad abt gullu in front of kesu,stupid fellas playing football with dinosaurs egg that too in front of mommy dino😆ab kaun bachayega tumhe dino kesu se😆

but everything went well and then again return journey on bike ☺️

loved all three chappis 👏get well soon and then update😃

but yaar pls kill TALLI

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: bioinfo
oye rim ur not well kya😕loveria likhte likhte kaun sa leria ho gaya tujhe😆
dhatt i missed three chappis , but ek sath comment de deti hun😃
talli aa gayi wo bhi fultoo talli avatar mein🤢chipkoo🤢and shes jelous of gullu😡and gullu saw rat and kesu se chipak gayi👏now i love rats and i sure kesar loves them too😆and then kesu ki pics dekh ke gullu became happy but talli came as haddi😡madam ko bhuk bhi lag gayi😡
but i laughed at one sentence of yours u know
talli-'gulaal mujhe please kuch bana deh na'.
🤣🤣🤣
haan gulaal isse cockroach bana de🤣
then bike mein ride ha ha i loved it ⭐️
and vassys men talking bad abt gullu in front of kesu,stupid fellas playing football with dinosaurs egg that too in front of mommy dino😆ab kaun bachayega tumhe dino kesu se😆
but everything went well and then again return journey on bike ☺️
loved all three chappis 👏get well soon and then update😃
but yaar pls kill TALLI